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02-01-05, 01:27 AM
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IP: 2FB0 7B8B
Voted For: ~Sonofisis~
Now Phive's High, Coz i have Metaphores to Adore Long as Bush draft u, then i'll be in Support Of The War So after my merk fest, i should you a Tampon Coz this coward couldn't test if he gave me a Scantron vs. nothing Son clearly won. Phive needs to stop with paragraphs, backslashes, not having punches and overall suckiness. Sonic done fell off but he obviously has this one even though the "s need to be put to rest with July =/ v-sonofisis
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02-05-05, 05:37 PM
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IP: 258C A279
Voted For: ~Sonofisis~
This bitch is jus a Wise Guy Tryna HiSide I just give em "Dopeness", Leavin U With a "High Phive" good closer Now Phive's High, Coz i have Metaphores to Adore Long as Bush draft u, then i'll be in Support Of The War punch was okay here, it landed I Noticed, he must be tryna Even The Score Coz somebody with my same name Beat em Before decent punch line here…it landed and it was hard yo undid unsaid is ya life sonofisis, how you gonna beat me you aint got tha potential to fight this// off tha top of my head kid i dont write this, rapstyle fucking you up like a pair of fake tits// weak punch here… unconcious and bleeding on tha grounds, phive crew all around, lyrically out weighing you with every pound, after all the emcees i downed, killin you silently without a sound// slammin you like vince carter, im tha rap bombarder, im hittin you harder, kncokin out emcees since i was a starter, you might go far but ill go farther// punch was aight but the flow was too long ^your drop was pretty decent but you should made it like ur opponents and it would been better but overall Sono took this one…punches were harder and had a better structure overall phive elevate more on ur punches and work on ur structure too
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02-21-05, 11:21 AM
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IP: 047D 6C5C
Voted For: ~Sonofisis~
close battle but sonofisis took this one by a lil nice vocab punches were okay can use a lil work word play was nice the metas were good 7/10 best line-Now Phive's High, Coz i have Metaphores to Adore Long as Bush draft u, then i'll be in Support Of The War
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02-22-05, 01:39 PM
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~SAINT SINNER~
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IP: 62ED 534E
Voted For: ~Sonofisis~
sonof clearly takes this one. phive, you had some nice shit in there........but im sorry, your verse seemed rushed and not too well thought out or planned. your structure was poor and some of your punches were so-so. if this were an actual verbal freestyle, you would get more love......but this is text homie. you got to fine tune your work. i didnt notice any personals.......and trust me, those really win battles. some of your lines didnt rhyme.......and your flow was off in some spots. try to work on building up some multies. well, keep up the good work......and please dont let my vote discourage you. sonof, you stole this one easily. you had nice punches......a clean ass personal and good structure. your flow was also on point as well......nice. the bush bar (lines 2-4).....and the sandcastle bar (lines 7-8) were my favorites of the whole verse. if i could offer any advice......it'd be to incorporate some multies and more complex vocab. well, hold it down............and do the damn thing cutty. please return the favor... mizz fyre vs. SUPERVILLAIN (in frontlines) thank you......oner.... ...the super...
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