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01-24-05, 10:46 PM | #16 | ||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: B67F E6F1
Voted For: Phantom
Flow: Phantom try to compete bitch..its gonna take a lot more to defeat this When i dont even have to speak shit.. to leave this 'killer' speechless blah I toss rockets in a vicious spark... you get by with spittin darts So treat ya verse like a dutch blunt... and watch it get ripped apart ok meta Then blazed and smoked..Amazed im dope ? Son just wait for votes Get abrazions slow... Socrates battlin me was stupid take some notes this was wack I'll delete ya quick with lyrics harsh that i zoom with Kid couldnt be a 'Gorilla' even if he was part of a 'Unit' wtf was this man, no no no never Leave you swollen and broke erasing and folding ya flows Cuz i got the whole world shook like Ali holding a globe meh Im a killer of course... I employ guns when i pull it Have ya corpse..on the curb playin dodgeball with bullets blah, shitty meta I always throw crazed punches... to land pyscho hits I'll let you 'beat me' if you like just not in a battle bitch ummm, plizayed Soc: Punk bitch with a bold name, thinkin you everyones hero Only 1/4 ya skill?Damn, didn't know you could divide zero! ok personel ..See i'm sick with the flow so it's no doubt that it's over Cuz in the battle its like ya name,intelligent finishes lower! nice Look at ya name kid, and theres no way you can own me Cuz.. ..what ya name means to me is Front Lines Winner ONLY! lol ok not bad And yes nigga I know it's not a very big thing to own you Youre a bitch and a mod of a forum nobody even goes to! decent personel And it's crazy the way I easily rip ya spine and ya bladder Funny, it's your fault that in text.......flow doesn't matter! lmao, striaght fire, I loved this line I'm rippin you simply,plus now ya whackness is announced Shit, even ya AIM name proves "slinky" needs to "bounce"! I don't know his aim name So please, just quit, and go somewhere else with ya rap b Ill put a red dot on ya forehead quicker than teens wit acne! lol ok meta, not bad Both you did not drop your hardest, flow, I felt you came wack like you weren't trying, that was the vibe I got, and Soc managed to take you in this one v/soc |
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01-24-05, 11:12 PM | #17 | |||||
Throwback
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IP: C4A3 993F
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01-24-05, 11:42 PM | #18 | |||
leave you rest'n pz's
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IP: 7B25 12F1
Voted For: Phantom
Phantom try to compete bitch..its gonna take a lot more to defeat this When i dont even have to speak shit.. to leave this 'killer' speechless ok, good but punch was bland... I toss rockets in a vicious spark... you get by with spittin darts So treat ya verse like a dutch blunt... and watch it get ripped apart no, filler at large, no punch at all..jus pretty fake multi's Then blazed and smoked..Amazed im dope ? Son just wait for votes Get abrazions slow... Socrates battlin me was stupid take some notes i shuttered when i read this,...ive heard it n seen it,....tsk tsk.. I'll delete ya quick with lyrics harsh that i zoom with Kid couldnt be a 'Gorilla' even if he was part of a 'Unit' .another shutter...... Leave you swollen and broke erasing and folding ya flows Cuz i got the whole world shook like Ali holding a globe this was aight.... Im a killer of course... I employ guns when i pull it Have ya corpse..on the curb playin dodgeball with bullets lol...oo,...but not hard hitting I always throw crazed punches... to land pyscho hits I'll let you 'beat me' if you like just not in a battle bitch very weak for a closer flow, impreesed by a ine but depressed to see played or bitten scripts(my opinion)...but not a bad verse overall, i jus have a sense of question..(why'd you switch up the flow).. . SOC IP: Punk bitch with a bold name, thinkin you everyones hero Only 1/4 ya skill?Damn, didn't know you could divide zero! ok, decent but simple ..See i'm sick with the flow so it's no doubt that it's over Cuz in the battle its like ya name,intelligent finishes lower! ehh, nah.. Look at ya name kid, and theres no way you can own me Cuz.. ..what ya name means to me is Front Lines Winner ONLY! close but no..... And yes nigga I know it's not a very big thing to own you Youre a bitch and a mod of a forum nobody even goes to! nice, best so far..personal was dope And it's crazy the way I easily rip ya spine and ya bladder Funny, it's your fault that in text.......flow doesn't matter! lol...good punch... I'm rippin you simply,plus now ya whackness is announced Shit, even ya AIM name proves "slinky" needs to "bounce"! i liked how you said simply...good meta's.. So please, just quit, and go somewhere else with ya rap b Ill put a red dot on ya forehead quicker than teens wit acne! blah, weak closer, but not tottally lame soc.... . not bad from both ends....overall flow had 2 lines i liked....(yes lines.>>!\)meanwhile soc had 3 bars that where gold for simple text, nice personal n meta use through out his verse. Yea...
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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01-24-05, 11:55 PM | #19 | ||||
leave you rest'n pz's
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IP: 7B25 12F1
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it was but still wasnt dope but a good apoach for ya last 3 bars..which were dope
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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01-25-05, 04:22 AM | #20 | |||
Straight From Da Lab!
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IP: 9834 0763
Voted For: Phantom
Punk bitch with a bold name, thinkin you everyones hero Only 1/4 ya skill?Damn, didn't know you could divide zero! ^^^nice... ..See i'm sick with the flow so it's no doubt that it's over Cuz in the battle its like ya name,intelligent finishes lower! ^^^wack here...weak anyway. Look at ya name kid, and theres no way you can own me Cuz.. ..what ya name means to me is Front Lines Winner ONLY! ^^^weak punch here...and getting the w & o the wrong way round makes it more a punch instead of a personal And yes nigga I know it's not a very big thing to own you Youre a bitch and a mod of a forum nobody even goes to! ^^^aight personal... And it's crazy the way I easily rip ya spine and ya bladder Funny, it's your fault that in text.......flow doesn't matter! ^^^ehhhhhh..... I'm rippin you simply,plus now ya whackness is announced Shit, even ya AIM name proves "slinky" needs to "bounce"! ^^^^weakest line in battle So please, just quit, and go somewhere else with ya rap b Ill put a red dot on ya forehead quicker than teens wit acne ^^^decent Phantom try to compete bitch..its gonna take a lot more to defeat this When i dont even have to speak shit.. to leave this 'killer' speechless ^^^decent I toss rockets in a vicious spark... you get by with spittin darts So treat ya verse like a dutch blunt... and watch it get ripped apart ^^^it's pretty good Then blazed and smoked..Amazed im dope ? Son just wait for votes Get abrazions slow... Socrates battlin me was stupid take some notes ^^^multis galore...but nothing great I'll delete ya quick with lyrics harsh that i zoom with Kid couldnt be a 'Gorilla' even if he was part of a 'Unit' ^^^hmmmmm...not that good Leave you swollen and broke erasing and folding ya flows Cuz i got the whole world shook like Ali holding a globe ^^^self glorifing... Im a killer of course... I employ guns when i pull it Have ya corpse..on the curb playin dodgeball with bullets ^^^it's aight I always throw crazed punches... to land pyscho hits I'll let you 'beat me' if you like just not in a battle bitch ^^^hmmm.....decent. Overall both yall came weak, but vote Flow for more consistency and harder hitting punches than wack ones Vote switched
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01-25-05, 04:24 AM | #21 | |||
Straight From Da Lab!
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IP: 9834 0763
Whoops, I was suppose to have voted for FI, I'll have it changed...
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01-25-05, 04:48 AM | #22 | ||||||
Ask About Me
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IP: 30EE 9E58
Voted For: Phantom
well you get this win.... FLOW: you had some nice lines and nice multies but your metaphores where not all that great......your bet line was the one about ali holding a globe......i liked that but that was the only line that i liked..... just work on your punches and metaphores...you could also work on personals..... if oyu had atleast one more bar of a nice ass metaphorical persasonal than you would have won.....also your structure was offf a lil bit.... PHANTOM: you had my attention the whole time...i love personals....it shows that you have real skill becuase you cant prewrite a personal...or bite a personal......so you good job with the personals.......you almost lost this battle becuase that FLWO...line didnt really work becuase thats not how you spell FLOW......but yeah nice metaphores and nice punches........good battle...nice structure.......we all no you mastered text no start with the AUDIO................ vote=phantom
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01-25-05, 12:51 PM | #23 | |||
leave you rest'n pz's
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IP: 7B25 12F1
i can't believe its tied 3 3 ...this shouldve been a ko n soc's win..
what a fuckin joke with the riders for flow...............
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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01-31-05, 03:38 PM | #24 | |||
Banned: Cheating
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This was feedback posted for Phantom
IP: E3CA 7CA2
i think flow intelligent took this, but i cant vote for him cause he bit a lil wayne line..."dodgeball with bullets"
tis, tis....BITER good drop tho, u would ve got tha vote if u wouldve left that out... phantom, u had some nice punches and metteas in there, that made me wunna give u tha vote...but i cant vote on this....cause he's a biter |
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02-01-05, 02:03 AM | #25 | ||||
The Ups and Downs of Life
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IP: D666 F54C
Voted For: Phantom
Phantom try to compete bitch..its gonna take a lot more to defeat this When i dont even have to speak shit.. to leave this 'killer' speechless decent opener-- but punch is meh.. not what i expect I toss rockets in a vicious spark... you get by with spittin darts So treat ya verse like a dutch blunt... and watch it get ripped apart decent-- dutch blunt dont exist tho... dutchies and blunts dont coexist in same rapper... punch is understood but still, kinda seemed forced. Then blazed and smoked..Amazed im dope ? Son just wait for votes Get abrazions slow... Socrates battlin me was stupid take some notes this was a good bar, good stop go flow, no punches more self glorification but thats cool... I'll delete ya quick with lyrics harsh that i zoom with Kid couldnt be a 'Gorilla' even if he was part of a 'Unit' simple punch, kinda effective not bad.. Leave you swollen and broke erasing and folding ya flows Cuz i got the whole world shook like Ali holding a globe lol... this was kinda funny- not a relevant concept, but not bad. Im a killer of course... I employ guns when i pull it Have ya corpse..on the curb playin dodgeball with bullets lol... o.k ill give u this one. I always throw crazed punches... to land pyscho hits I'll let you 'beat me' if you like just not in a battle bitch eh.. hits bitch, easy rhyme... simple closer... i expected more... but not bad in general... Punk bitch with a bold name, thinkin you everyones hero Only 1/4 ya skill?Damn, didn't know you could divide zero! LoL-- this was solid right here... nice opener. ..See i'm sick with the flow so it's no doubt that it's over Cuz in the battle its like ya name,intelligent finishes lower! o.k Look at ya name kid, and theres no way you can own me Cuz.. ..what ya name means to me is Front Lines Winner ONLY! lol wow... creative, i liked it. And yes nigga I know it's not a very big thing to own you Youre a bitch and a mod of a forum nobody even goes to! lol... he got personal on every line. damn And it's crazy the way I easily rip ya spine and ya bladder Funny, it's your fault that in text.......flow doesn't matter! lol... nice wordplay, solid punch again. Im feelin this alot so far. I'm rippin you simply,plus now ya whackness is announced Shit, even ya AIM name proves "slinky" needs to "bounce"! Im not down w/ his aim name or whats goin on here.. but ima play like i know whats goin on... So please, just quit, and go somewhere else with ya rap b Ill put a red dot on ya forehead quicker than teens wit acne! lol... not a super original concept... but I think all in all his verse hit alot harder, alot more witty- alot more to the point-- vote phantom.
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02-06-05, 03:49 AM | #26 | |||
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IP: 258C A279
Voted For: FlOw InTeLLiGeNt
Punk bitch with a bold name, thinkin you everyones hero Only 1/4 ya skill?Damn, didn't know you could divide zero! good persona, decent punch ..See i'm sick with the flow so it's no doubt that it's over Cuz in the battle its like ya name,intelligent finishes lower! decent punch, wasn’t much hard hitting Look at ya name kid, and theres no way you can own me Cuz.. ..what ya name means to me is Front Lines Winner ONLY! spelled it backwards, weak punch here And yes nigga I know it's not a very big thing to own you Youre a bitch and a mod of a forum nobody even goes to! good persona, pretty decent punch And it's crazy the way I easily rip ya spine and ya bladder Funny, it's your fault that in text.......flow doesn't matter! decent punch I'm rippin you simply,plus now ya whackness is announced Shit, even ya AIM name proves "slinky" needs to "bounce"! weak punch, ain’t feeling it here So please, just quit, and go somewhere else with ya rap b Ill put a red dot on ya forehead quicker than teens wit acne! weak punch here, not really a hard hitting punch tho Overall you had a good drop Decent personas Punches were decent, some weak & some were okay Structure was in place and not stretched Flow was good Vocab was okay, work on that Overall you had a good drop… 6/10 Phantom try to compete bitch..its gonna take a lot more to defeat this When i dont even have to speak shit.. to leave this 'killer' speechless [b]nice multi’s, good punch I toss rockets in a vicious spark... you get by with spittin darts So treat ya verse like a dutch blunt... and watch it get ripped apart good multi’s used here, decent punch Then blazed and smoked...Amazed im dope ? Son just wait for votes Get abrasions slow... Socrates battlin me was stupid take some notes good punch, nice use of multi’s again, punch landed I'll delete ya quick with lyrics harsh that i zoom with Kid couldnt be a 'Gorilla' even if he was part of a 'Unit' decent multi’s, punch was okay Leave you swollen and broke erasing and folding ya flows Cuz i got the whole world shook like Ali holding a globe weak punch, wasn’t feelin this punch though Im a killer of course... I employ guns when i pull it Have ya corpse..on the curb playin dodgeball with bullets decent multi’s, punch was good, landed I always throw crazed punches... to land pyscho hits I'll let you 'beat me' if you like just not in a battle bitch decent closer Overall you had a good drop too Punches were hard hitting all the way except for 1 Multi’s were good, used thru out whole drop Vocab was okay here Didn’t see any personas though Structure was in place Flow was pretty good here Overall you had a good drop too 7/10
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02-06-05, 09:40 PM | #27 | ||||||
STROBE's Favorite Rapper
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IP: 5671 DBDD
Voted For: Phantom
Punk bitch with a bold name, thinkin you everyones hero Only 1/4 ya skill?Damn, didn't know you could divide zero! HAHAHA OH SHIT DOPE FUCKING CREATIVE PERSONAL HERE 10/10 ..See i'm sick with the flow so it's no doubt that it's over Cuz in the battle its like ya name,intelligent finishes lower! HAHA DAMN I HAD TO READ THAT TWICE CUZ I AINT GET IT AT FIRST DAMN IM DUMBANYWAYS SHIT IS A DOPE NAME PLAY HERE 8/10 Look at ya name kid, and theres no way you can own me Cuz.. ..what ya name means to me is Front Lines Winner ONLY! GOOD PERSONAL BUT I AINT LIKE THE WORDING SHIT AINT RHYME RIGHT AND THAT HURT IT 5/10 And yes nigga I know it's not a very big thing to own you Youre a bitch and a mod of a forum nobody even goes to! HAHAHAHA OH SHIT LMFAO DOPE PERSONAL AGAIN HAHAHA 10/10 And it's crazy the way I easily rip ya spine and ya bladder Funny, it's your fault that in text.......flow doesn't matter! DAMN ANOTHER DOPE PERSONAL NAME PLAY 8/10 I'm rippin you simply,plus now ya whackness is announced Shit, even ya AIM name proves "slinky" needs to "bounce"! So please, just quit, and go somewhere else with ya rap b Ill put a red dot on ya forehead quicker than teens wit acne! NO PLAYED AND WACK AS SHIT 2/10 43/60 PRETTY GOOD A FEW DOPE ASS PERSONALS AND WORDPLAYS HERE DAMN SOME REAL DOPE ONES CLOSER WAS WACK AS FUCK THOUGH YET STILL YOUR VERSE WAS STRONG AS FUCK GOOD VOCAB AND STRTURE DISSES AND PERSONALS WERE ALL ON POINT ALSO BEST IVE SEEN FROM YOU IN A LONG TIME. Phantom try to compete bitch..its gonna take a lot more to defeat this When i dont even have to speak shit.. to leave this 'killer' speechless NO PUNCH JUST SHIT TALK NO PERSONAL EITHER 2/10 I toss rockets in a vicious spark... you get by with spittin darts So treat ya verse like a dutch blunt... and watch it get ripped apart AGAIN NO PUNCH OR PERSONAL 2/10 Then blazed and smoked..Amazed im dope ? Son just wait for votes Get abrazions slow... Socrates battlin me was stupid take some notes SELF GLORY STILL NO PERSONAL OR PUNCH HERE 2/10 I'll delete ya quick with lyrics harsh that i zoom with Kid couldnt be a 'Gorilla' even if he was part of a 'Unit' WACK AS FUCK AND PLAYED HORRIBLE 1/10 Leave you swollen and broke erasing and folding ya flows Cuz i got the whole world shook like Ali holding a globe FINIALLY A FUCKING PUNCH NOT A DOPE ONE BUT DECENT 4/10 Im a killer of course... I employ guns when i pull it Have ya corpse..on the curb playin dodgeball with bullets YOU KNOW BETTER THEN THIS:NONO:GUNPLAY NONO NO NO NO AND ITS PLAYED AND WACK 1/10 I always throw crazed punches... to land pyscho hits I'll let you 'beat me' if you like just not in a battle bitch NO PUNCH AT ALL AGAIN JUST SHIT TALKING 1/10 DO I EVEN NEED TO ADD THAT?NO ANYWAYS NO PUNCHES EXCEPT ONE PLAYED WACK ONE NO PERSONALS EITHER NO GOOD WORDPLAY OR ANYTHING THAT WINS BATTLES DOPE FLOW THOUGH BUT WHO CARES?FLOW DONT WIN BATTLES ESPECIALLY IN TEXT SOC WON THIS HANDS DOWN EASY AS FUCK DUDE TO YOU HAVING NO PUNCHES OR PERSONALS DOING NO EFFECT ON YOUR OPPENANT THIS WAS HORRIBLE
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