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01-23-05, 07:51 AM
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Odi et Amo
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IP: 8C49 8920
Here we go again...come on, just vote! The favor will be returned, just drop your links!
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01-24-05, 01:26 PM
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Odi et Amo
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IP: 68CE D8BD
Upping once again, damnit, topicals get mad slept on these days!!!
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01-29-05, 11:56 AM
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IP: A1F9 13ED
Voted For: Drama Queen
My vote is going to drama queen, cause I was feeling her part the most. It's original and made me wanna read the whole part cause I already wondered, why she was talking bout, "Beg HER to acknowlegde and accept the helpless lil creature inside my body", I was surprising. While the part of 3rd-shift seemed to go about the fact that, he didn't want the baby, but his partner had to be the one who didn't want him, or do I get it all wrong?
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01-29-05, 12:33 PM
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This was feedback posted for Drama Queen
IP: 3495 F79E
drama queen u need to learn how to call battles lol yeah thats my feedback.
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01-29-05, 02:48 PM
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Odi et Amo
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IP: 1AD2 C386
Thanks for vote and wtf is that feedback all about? Lmao...
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01-31-05, 01:42 PM
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Odi et Amo
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IP: A19F D079
Anyways...thanks for the votes and upping for some more!
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02-03-05, 01:28 PM
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Odi et Amo
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IP: C9A2 1C80
Uppity up...damnit people, just vote! Favor will be returned for sure!
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02-03-05, 03:02 PM
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leave you rest'n pz's
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IP: 7B25 12F1
Voted For: 3rd-Shift
damn, this was nice, you had some lines that were iffy but mic (old name i think.lol) you had some lines that i reread cuz they were so nice,negative side for 1.get red of the slash/// its annoyin 2...ya closer was ok,...kinda brutal n honest n real..overall im going with you cuz i my opinion you stayed on topic more...7.8/10 . this was real close, props to both . wow, nice job, you deffinately kno how to take a subject n be original with it,..i liked this, overall i think you could improve if you had better structure(shorten ya lines by 2 words or so)last half of ya drop was better...it picked up throughout like a topicals supposed to.....nice job.1! .good approach to the topic...7.5/10 . pz...
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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02-03-05, 03:35 PM
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IP: D2B8 EE3F
good look....
now that was an honest vote uppin u hoez |
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02-04-05, 06:10 AM
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Odi et Amo
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IP: 09AB 3F4B
Thanks for fully explained vote ¤ÐÅž¤, appreciated by both of us...upping for some more...
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02-04-05, 01:13 PM
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IP: C431 103C
Voted For: Drama Queen
3rd Shift: You had an alright verse dawg. I think you had to stay away from talkin bout being in jail and having no money tho. Went a little off topic in places, although it relates to the topic..it just didnt flow. I wasnt feeling the dashes at the end of your lines either, you need to lose those. Vocab was not bad. Some lines were way longer than some of the others but it flowed alright. Imagry was there. Good Job 74/100. Drama Queen: Damn girl, this was a tight drop. You had amazing imagry that made your overall verse seem almost like a true story (which in some ppl's lives im sure it is). Dividing your verse into 2 sections made your verse overall more effective. Pretty good vocab...very descriptive word choice. And that ending was just awsome. One thinig to remember for next time is to watch your line length...if you didnt have flow - those lines woulda lost my vote. Very good job, props. Overall 85/100 No hate 3rd Shift...I just felt Drama Queen came a bit harder than you today. Someones gotta win, and Im sure the votes will show that she did...better luck next time dawg. Payce. |
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02-05-05, 02:15 AM
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IP: 5671 DBDD
Voted For: Drama Queen
ok thirdself lines were kinda streched here flow was off which doesnt make snese you should have that down pat being a producer and all anyways imagery was ok vocab couldve been better here also you aint really bring me into your story emotion lacked here as well as imagery too  drama queen damn your getting dope at topicals good vocab and flow lil streched cut your damn lines shorter imagery was dope it was as if i was there in your mind good shit it was like a movie and that wins topicals and got you this dope.
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02-05-05, 07:19 AM
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Odi et Amo
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IP: 029A 70BC
^Thanks for honest and fully explained votes, much appreciated!
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02-06-05, 11:35 AM
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you gotta hear me again
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IP: FFA4 281F
Voted For: Drama Queen
well first i think it was a bad topic for a guy to write about so i give props to third shift for trying but he could decline and asked for a better topic so no mercy. D.Q.- i'm gonna break this judgement into two section like you did for your battle 1st: it was intense i was reading to see what happen next not just to vote. there was a good flow and ok style and great mults. but i don't get it were you saying you were a lesbian???(NICE) i like the way you end the first part. was thought it was going to be bad with the way you opened it but it got better. 2nd: i thought this one was more intense the the first one. still a good flow and even better multas. alot of question i had in the beginning were answered here(thats good)very creative closer, but i don't think he would be gay if he said that. idk if the whole story sounded so realist but it was a good story. i like the vocab used, but i got tripped up on theses lines "Steve holds me tight, whispering sweet words,telling me what really mattered Heart bruised by her cold rejection but I don't need her false affection" (who is this her i thought you were talking about steve) overal very nice one of the best topicals i've seen. 8.75/10 3rd-in a way yours was really creative i think the lines were more creative then the idea. the flow was alittle rough but sylte was ok you had really hot multas too. i especially liked the opening and closing parts. however some times it seem like it was jumping arond alot and not really staying on topic. overal it was a good battle i give you a 6.5/10 vote D.Q.
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