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02-09-05, 12:27 AM | #16 | ||||
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02-09-05, 01:09 PM | #17 | ||||
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02-09-05, 04:48 PM | #18 | ||||
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02-09-05, 06:37 PM | #19 | ||||
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Voted For: Invektive
[Font=Arial Narrow]you never beat nobody with skill...your newbies slain list...who could be next? you see dex...losing for you is simply a repetitive thing...its just a mear reflex nice punch, hard hitting and it connected 8/10 vs Nothing uh Dex, here it doesnt seem like you was even trying, ur punches were weak like whoa, and ur structure + flow was aight but those punches need to up... overall ivek too this one
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02-09-05, 09:13 PM | #20 | ||||
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^^^yo thanks for voting......uppin again.............
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02-09-05, 09:15 PM | #21 | |||||
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Voted For: Invektive
i liked this battle Dex: -I wanted a battle but got 60mins and 6 lines Your busy packing shit rhymes to spit in the nick of time =solid opener, first line coulda used some work 7/10 -Your rhyme pads lookin whiter than a line of coke Only battled herbz thus far, now to dex you’ll just choke =eh, wasnt really feelin it, little choppy 6/10 -Transferring a dictionary is how your betting to spin Only thing phixional here is you getting the win =sweet closer, best line 8/10 total: 21/30....nice spit man, kinda weak with the punches coming off, good personals/multis, but vocab was lacking, flow little choppy, and didnt really come out too hard, therefore, punches didnt really hit hard, but overall, not too bad of drop Invektive, nice -Dex sees himself in the near future.......you know this dudes confused when he claims he'll be one of RV's top text heads ....nah you seein optical illusions =nice play with that thread, good opener 8/10 -you never beat nobody with skill...your newbies slain list...who could be next? you see dex...losing for you is simply a repetitive thing...its just a mear reflex =best line here, loved the seoncd one 8/10 -your gayness reflects off your signature....you thought RV would see past it? you just erase bizzy's name.......and secretly place yourself in your sig faggot =haha, nice play with the sig too 8/10 total: 24/30....overall, solid drop man, personal were slick, came hard and made your punches more effective, good plays/connections in there (thread, sig, etc), good use of vocab and nice flow, treat to read, haha, keep it up man ---vote: Invektive....better personals, harder punches, creativity and smoother flow...wird
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02-09-05, 09:22 PM | #22 | ||||
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Voted For: Invektive
structure pretty close but yours looks cleaner flow tie both had pretty good flow no work needed vocab yours by far dex verse was too simple he needs to up his vocab a little bit punches once again im giving it to you dex came wack nothing really hard hitting in my opinon work on finding some good hard hitting personals good battle to both but u got it easily
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