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Old , 09:59 AM   #1
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Legion vs MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ

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Topic-Burning the alphabet.


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Cause-

The effect of burning the alphabets would be devastating
We wouldnt know who we are, or find out what's a word in a dictionary
Who would we worship>? Without the letters G-O-D
What word would it be called that leaks from our bodies
How would we talk or write without the alphabets?
Without them, our brain would be stupid and smaller than women tits
What would women call that thing that hangs from a man
What would call the long things that are attatched on our hand
Without alphabets i wouldnt know whats that white shit over my head
I wouldnt know, what this thing called where you go to, to meet the dead
Without alphabets, we wouldnt have names, just a unknown thing
This is what the cause of burning alphabets would fucking bring



Effect-

Now that i know my alphabets, i can read and write
I can now identified this things in my mouth that are white
I can now identified those little people that are just like me
Now i know who to go to, if i want to be saved, the man up thee


I could've come dope, but i had to rush. Dan i had a dope verse until my computer crashed.
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Colliding letters, exhale meanings to clog understanding and the brain.
Abusive, excessive controversial views are all shuffled into frame.
Don’t get this twisted, as I whisk the flame, closer and closer to words.
The page begins to crumble, absolve into nothing, along with vowels & verbs.
Scripts delve into my mind, and extract only the important points.
Tracks kids spitting show emotion, and flow through their joints.
Alphabet is the code to our future, the lock and the pivotal learning.
Boost the drive to want more from words, and to keep on yearning.
I want to make a earning, but how can I if I cant read…or write?
Dissolved love letters keep me guessing, emotions running high.
Thinking about whats on that page, she loves me but I don’t understand.
I cant read, or even write, how could she ever love me for who I am?
In high school, I couldn’t co-exist along side or utilize the blank pages.
Breaking down my education, and trying to get it right, in stages.
For ages I attempted but I could never grasp the words or skill.
Parents didn’t know I was unable to read, so I dreaded the phone-bill.
I had to ask my friends what it said, ink diluted by the tears I wept.
Then, out of the blue, the words morphed on the page, “burn the alphabet
”.

I wrote on topic but gave it a kind of plot toward the end, g’luck mista.
 
 


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