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Check in by: 08-20-05 at 10:34 AM

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.Merkage. has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-17-05 12:48 PM.

Verbal Shoota has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-17-05 07:11 PM.

Let dis ho rest..Verbs changes indentities but was Bourne to be killed
ugly fuck
Nose Best..his keys r Prince worthy..da verses formally known as Verbs skills*
Expose me?..All you 'll see is ass and ya career downhill like cars crashing
and without askin
You can tell verbs wont' cross me when im flashing like Trains passing*
with a passion..Ya goose gets cooked..Leader of Raw thats why a Flaw wid ya
dumbfuck
He can't cut flows...Thats why the sight don't like em..so u carry a saw wid ya*
Buckshot..You old news....date a clock..do sumthing get wit da times
but shit ya lines
R like Legless peeps wit colds..Half ass and only sick half da time*
But he can take it in da ass..That no con-test..Jailhouse fag insestcide
I'll cell u a clue
he known But like Teachers without glasses...Metafo anit neva recognized*

Explanations
*Bourne indentity....Prince is feminine
Nose best...he has a big nose http://community.rapverse.com/attac...tachmentid=9717
juss look......^^^

*Expose...will show me naked....And when trains passing theres a cross walk u kno...and it's flashing...and flashing...meaning me naked...weird ha..
but he tryna expose me..not

*Say he from flawida...and Raw was dat flaw....he carried with him
and carrying a saw..as in seeing and having sight...meaning this sight...kno he can't cut flows...wita saw..get it

*..come on..u get this..date clocks....get wit da times....and the second line..u should get self explanatory

* cons...get fucked in da ass in jail..and it's no test for him..he's good at it...and he's not recognized.....fuck it u get it


NO dickryding(u forgot that rule......wonder why)

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"don't assume me Im not what you're used to"

LOL, Merkage?...

....Time To Put His Name Too Good Use...

Look at ya battle stats...you battle cats...with next to no experience
Ya lines are ''choppy''....Like walkie talkies with outside Interferance
This a lyrical clearance, rhymes for sale, This nine you should hail..
'Cause if dudes black right now..
.................after tha punches he'll be pale as a caucasian male
I'm off the scale, your unfreshingly stale...so keep ya mouth zip locked
Got punches? nah, last Time merk had his Hand on a Face, it ''tic toced''
I flip rock, Define hip hop, when ya shit drops, people offer you T.P
You could Mix Tapes with a famous DJ..
................................ an cause of ya name, u wouldnt sell 1 C.D
I'd say you wannabe me, but i dont like too raise false Hope...
I'd also say your dope, but Nope..
...Ya just jack, shit fallin off the hill like jill on a Downward Slope!









Blah, just somthin quick.

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Damn you should win this fuck what Buck was talkin bout this yours.......................

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Voted For: Verbal Shoota

Tephlon:

Look at ya battle stats...you battle cats...with next to no experience
Ya lines are ''choppy''....Like walkie talkies with outside Interferance

Hmm...Decent

This a lyrical clearance, rhymes for sale, This nine you should hail..
'Cause if dudes black right now..
.................after tha punches he'll be pale as a caucasian male

Lol not much of a punch, but made me laugh

I'm off the scale, your unfreshingly stale...so keep ya mouth zip locked
Got punches? nah, last Time merk had his Hand on a Face a Face, it ''tic toced''

Nice...

I flip rock, Define hip hop, when ya shit drops, people offer you T.P
You could Mix Tapes with a famous DJ..
................................ an cause of ya name, u wouldnt sell 1 C.D

Set up was dope, punch was blah

I'd say you wannabe me, but i dont like too raise false Hope...
I'd also say your dope, but Nope..
...Ya just jack, shit fallin off the hill like jill on a Downward Slope!

ROFL That Jack and Jill bitch hahahahahahaha...Nice

Overall, Pretty decent verse, definetly nowhere near the best from you, but like you said, this was just something quick so I'll take your word for it. Punches were a little inconsistent, but on the good side, nothing was played, and that's hard to come across in a battle for anyone on RV nowaday's. Flow was a little stretched in some parts, but Im not judging that because this is text, and who gives a fuck about flow in text??


.Merkage.

Let dis ho rest..Verbs changes indentities but was Bourne to be killed
ugly fuck
Nose Best..his keys r Prince worthy..da verses formally known as Verbs skills*

?? Not feelin it man

Expose me?..All you 'll see is ass and ya career downhill like cars crashing
and without askin
You can tell verbs wont' cross me when im flashing like Trains passing*

Self glorification...HUGE no-no

with a passion..Ya goose gets cooked..Leader of Raw thats why a Flaw wid ya
dumbfuck
He can't cut flows...Thats why the sight don't like em..so u carry a saw wid ya*

Lol Nice Shit...

Buckshot..You old news....date a clock..do sumthing get wit da times
but shit ya lines
R like Legless peeps wit colds..Half ass and only sick half da time*

Whoa...hot shit

But he can take it in da ass..That no con-test..Jailhouse fag insestcide
I'll cell u a clue
he known But like Teachers without glasses...Metafo anit neva recognized*

Blah...

Overall, you didn't have enough to win this battle. You were way to inconsistent with your punches, and your personals weren't all that hard. For instance, dude's nose aint that big...Lmao...You had too many "Blah" type punches for me to give you the vote. Didnt really see anything played, but you could still up your creativity a little bit, as could Teph.

V/ Tephlon

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Voted For: Verbal Shoota

i gotta go wit Metafo' on this one, as he had some mad multis in his verse and he had a good structure to it as a few of merkage's lines were kind of hard to follow, for example:

Let dis ho rest..Verbs changes indentities but was Bourne to be killed
ugly fuck
Nose Best..his keys r Prince worthy..da verses formally known as Verbs skills
^^^i woz lukin for a word that rhymed wit ugly fuck after the first line which made it quite hard to read, work on that.

Metafo' also managed to, like i sed before use multis in an effective way whilst still including hard-hittin punches whereas merkage only had 1 bar which had multis.

Metafo' took this for me with better punches, nice multis and a easier to read structure, although both had a really nice verse.

no hate

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gd verse both of yal......................pollz..........

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Voted For: Verbal Shoota

Murkage
well your not much of a text head i can see, your stucture was horrible, flow was horrible, your punchlines weren't quite hittin i didnt even see much creativty at all man, work on metaphors, work on usin simile's to introduce the punch then use the meta same goes for you verbal, but anyway i just didnt see that creativty in your lines plus why explain your punches who cares.

verbal
well you had a better flow and stucture thats fa sho, you had some creativty but you have everything backwards almost, you should be usin similes on the first line of your bar, then try n use a meta without a simile, actually usin the simile makes it not a meta anyway, just a little advice man, anyway you had better creativty to me so i give you my vote.
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checking da pollz and shit like dat
Merk killed him

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