http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ead.php?t=20697
Fraud, vote on the battle, thanks.

*yawn*...........

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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant
And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack
Skills is what you lack
I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac
Ya more like a Reagal
I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel

vote bitches...

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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant
And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack
Skills is what you lack
I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac
Ya more like a Reagal
I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel

This was an alright battle but my boi Vask killed it
plan and simple,... Punches, wordplay flow all killed
it.

Fraud come alright flowed well at times but could
use a little improvement but it was a decent verse.

Stay up both

1~

Voted For: Vaskez

Bitch ya produce more wack than a flyswat, ain't no mack
You gettin turned into a pin...
................................is the only time you successfully a-tack
5...ok concept to use for a punch, but you cud've worded it a lot better.
I heard you're wack n' fraud-u-lent........out your lyrics
But still didn't get any INTEREST, that's how I hear it
5...decent bit of wordplay, but the punch was merely average.
My verse, ya better fear it, cos YOU rap as quiet as a mouse
N' it might seem like good in-tent...
.............................................but ya still sound shit "in tha house"
6...LMAO!! i liked how you flipped this shit and it made me laugh a little.
Get ya ass off the couch, but ya pussy, don't try steppin'
Cos if rap's your forte...then I'm the fuckin siege weapon
5...meh, just an average punch here.

OVERALL: 21/40


The table is set, & im gonna kill yet another
Cuz im the toast of the town & murder is the bread & butter
3...meh, where's the punch, just statements here about ureself.
Imma pound vaskez so hard his head has craters, destroying his spline
N we know he aint original, cuz he serch for old-punches to flip like a trampoline
4...an actual punch just about, but still wack.
u aint a hero who came home from iraq when i say the whole block-is clappin *meaning shoting*
vaskez couldn’t move a crowd if he was throwin rocks at ‘em
4...again, a punch but you need to word shit better for a better affect.
vaskez was talking flagrant, aint no avoidin a beatin'
Then acted so rash... he needed some ointment to treat it
4...ok concept, not worded the best though and cud've been a whole lot bette.

OVERALL: 15/40

V/ - Vaskez

....he had a far more consistent verse with harder hitting punches, although only one was really any good, the rest were just average and shit.

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Voted For: Vaskez

Vaskez

Bitch ya produce more wack than a flyswat, ain't no mack
You gettin turned into a pin...
................................is the only time you successfully a-tack
^^^DECENT OPENER
I heard you're wack n' fraud-u-lent........out your lyrics
But still didn't get any INTEREST, that's how I hear it
^^O.K
My verse, ya better fear it, cos YOU rap as quiet as a mouse
N' it might seem like good in-tent...
.............................................but ya still sound shit "in tha house"
^^HA HA GOOD 1
Get ya ass off the couch, but ya pussy, don't try steppin'
Cos if rap's your forte...then I'm the fuckin siege weapon
^^DECENT CLOSURE

VASKEZ- yo verse wuz decent. U had some personals n punches in dere dat wuz pretty good. U had a few strtched lines which i didnt like. U also need ta work on ya structure n datz about all. Good Average Verse
8/10

FRAUD

The table is set, & im gonna kill yet another
Cuz im the toast of the town & murder is the bread & butter
^^WACK
Imma pound vaskez so hard his head has craters, destroying his spline
N we know he aint original, cuz he serch for old-punches to flip like a trampoline
^^^MEH
u aint a hero who came home from iraq when i say the whole block-is clappin *meaning shoting*
vaskez couldn’t move a crowd if he was throwin rocks at ‘em
^^^MEH
vaskez was talking flagrant, aint no avoidin a beatin'
Then acted so rash... he needed some ointment to treat it
^^O.K

Fraud- yo verse wuz weak man. Da opener wuz wack as hell. I mean bread n butter, come on u can do betta den dat. U had very little punches, most of yo shit talked about guns n clappin n killin, n im pretty sure u've done none of the above or even tote a gun. In batttlin u supposed ta diss ya opponent the only decent line wuz your closure. Yo have much room for improvement. You must elevate more n work on your personals n punches. Structure wuz str8 doe.
pretty below average verse

6/10

Weak battle but in the end ima have ta go wit Vaskez for mo punches n personals and comin harder


V/Vaskez
cud u plz rtf on mah battle w/ an honest vote
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=207401
^^it wud be appreciated nahmean

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uppin...........

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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant
And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack
Skills is what you lack
I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac
Ya more like a Reagal
I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel

Voted For: fraud

eh.....damn wtf is up wit yall strechin tha shyt outa yall lines nyway battle was ish butfraud came harder......punches werent all that good ut they were beter tan vaskezs v/fraud

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

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uppin.................

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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant
And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack
Skills is what you lack
I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac
Ya more like a Reagal
I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel

Voted For: fraud

Vaskez
Bitch ya produce more wack than a flyswat, ain't no mack
You gettin turned into a pin...
................................is the only time you successfully a-tack
^Good wordplay, good diss nice opener 5/10^
I heard you're wack n' fraud-u-lent........out your lyrics
But still didn't get any INTEREST, that's how I hear it
^Good vocab, weak punch 3/10^
My verse, ya better fear it, cos YOU rap as quiet as a mouse
N' it might seem like good in-tent...
.............................................but ya still sound shit "in tha house"
^Lol....nice punch nice wordplay 6/10^
Get ya ass off the couch, but ya pussy, don't try steppin'
Cos if rap's your forte...then I'm the fuckin siege weapon
^ok closer, kinda weak but good enought 4/10^
Overall:Ur verse contained nice wordplay that caught my eye, ur verse was filled with good creativity...ur punches were in the middle...none too hard hitting nor soft hitting.Ur Personals were there along with ur vocab im feeling ur verse 6/10

Fraud

The table is set, & im gonna kill yet another
Cuz im the toast of the town & murder is the bread & butter
^Weak punch, lame wordplay...not feelin it 0/10^
Imma pound vaskez so hard his head has craters, destroying his spline
N we know he aint original, cuz he serch for old-punches to flip like a trampoline
^ehh, ok wordplay...bad flow and structure....4/10^
u aint a hero who came home from iraq when i say the whole block-is clappin *meaning shoting*
vaskez couldn’t move a crowd if he was throwin rocks at ‘em
^ehh, not feelin this...honestly weak punch 2/10^
vaskez was talking flagrant, aint no avoidin a beatin'
Then acted so rash... he needed some ointment to treat it
^Good closer, good wordplay probally best line 6/10^
Overall:Ur verse was not really that good, u lacked hard hitting punches....ur personals just werent there for me man, ur vocab was low...had only a couple strong vocabulary words...i felt ur wordplay was easy and played.....not fealin that....no hate man, ur verse 4/10^

v/vaskez

rtf on 1 of these links, since i kindly analyzed ur whole battle

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=206261

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=206909


Vote switched:

http://community.rapverse.com/showp...&postcount=1607

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A LIFE OF CHRYME

YO, i meant to vote for fraud...ill get that changed up

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A LIFE OF CHRYME

Bitch ya produce more wack than a flyswat, ain't no mack
You gettin turned into a pin...
................................is the only time you successfully a-tack
iight opener and nice punch and wordlay^

I heard you're wack n' fraud-u-lent........out your lyrics
But still didn't get any INTEREST, that's how I hear it
it was iight but wasnt feelin too much but still nice

My verse, ya better fear it, cos YOU rap as quiet as a mouse
N' it might seem like good in-tent...
.............................................but ya still sound shit "in tha house"
iight punch nothin special^

Get ya ass off the couch, but ya pussy, don't try steppin'
Cos if rap's your forte...then I'm the fuckin siege weapon
i like tha wordplay,nice closer...good job^




The table is set, & im gonna kill yet another
Cuz im the toast of the town & murder is the bread & butter
^this wasnt a great opener and a bad attempt,not good

Imma pound vaskez so hard his head has craters, destroying his spline
N we know he aint original, cuz he serch for old-punches to flip like a trampoline
^iight punch but u stretched tha line too much and u shouldnt have went from craters to trampolinez,wut waz tha thing about for crater?...iight but nuthin special

u aint a hero who came home from iraq when i say the whole block-is clappin *meaning shoting*
vaskez couldn’t move a crowd if he was throwin rocks at ‘em
^ horrible attempt at a punch,linez were too stretched

vaskez was talking flagrant, aint no avoidin a beatin'
Then acted so rash... he needed some ointment to treat it
^bad closer not that great of a punch

Fraud-work on structure and punches and personals...also multiez and metafors...jus elevate and you'll git better...work at it

vaskez-it was iight but u should jus elevate a little...u dont need topo much work

nice job both of u... jus work on it and git better...i cant vote yet so im jus breakin it down into feeback...holla at shya boy