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Old 09-22-05, 04:49 PM   #1
Appocolyptik
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Appocolyptik vs Spektikul

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Drop by Sunday Midnight but try to drop sooner
No dickriding, so none of The Establishment are voting.
No biting
Blind Spit
No feeding

Minimum posts to vote: 500

Check in by: 09-26-05 at 04:09 AM

Must drop verse in 8000 minutes after check in.


Closed - Expired / old battle win


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Old 09-22-05, 04:50 PM   #2
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Appocolyptik has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-22-05 04:50 PM.
 
Old 09-25-05, 11:05 PM   #3
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Spektikul has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-25-05 11:05 PM.
 
Old 09-26-05, 02:52 AM   #4
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Lemme take this RB whore to skool with a quick 14 liner...

Check out his flamming RB sig , who does he think he is...the 'devil?'
Shit, for this battle Ima have to litterally 'drop down' to his level
He said Im tryna beef, damn rights, *hits him with a piece of steak*
I still 'burn herbs', your a 'Pyro-kronik'..should be a piece of cake (1)
Thought that me and Soul liked him, we really thought he was a weiner (2)
If you seen the tunes he rocked, you wouldnt wanna be his friend neither
This kid just runs his mouth, when I ask to battle him every night
Appocolyptiks never shuts up, which makes him a-pac-o-lips, right?
No wonder this bitch is on my block list, all he does is stalk and annoy (2)
Kid cant even serve me through text, and ironically he's a paper boy
In the classifieds he needs a new job, cause his rap style is scary
Battling me, I leave his verse posted at the top of the O-Bitch-uary
I hope he aint staying on Rv, shit, he'd only be wasting our time
For all I know...
He could just be a 'pussy in a hat', and is still unable to rhyme (3)

Explanations?
(1) Pyrokronix is his RB.com user name
(2) Used to stalk Soul Rebel and I before we blocked him
(3) "Pussy in a hat"...Cat in the hat...childrens book with simple rhyming

...Good Enough. VOTE.
 
Old 09-27-05, 03:59 PM   #5
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Fuck you and The Establishment, I guess it’s critical G
That I don’t diss ya leader, coz you’d take “fuck Soul Rebel” literally
When it comes to wackness you’re the epitomy, but I’ll nail this shit
And I’ll put your girl up for DIY…right after I nail the bitch
You’re fuckin failin this… and I’ll leave you leerin hoe
Coz kid, we all know Specticuls went outa fashion YEARS ago
The world’s a bitch, and it’s a fact that’s burnin as true
So yeah life’s fucked… makin it less of a virgin than you
Fucka sailor, I aint need spinach, now vision this boy
Cos it’s true I’ma Popeye…till ya fuckin vision’s destroyed
I love gardenin, with a spade and a shovel I’m standin coo
So I plant my seed in ya girls cooch…
…but the floralB where I’m plantin you
I’ll smash you foo, I’ma win, no point in debating
And I’ll put your concepts on t.v…
…just to boost the antique channels ratings

Floral B – Plant Fertilizer

Don't get the wordplay don't vote
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Old 09-27-05, 06:16 PM   #6
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Voted For: Spektikul

This kid just runs his mouth, when I ask to battle him every night
Appocolyptiks never shuts up, which makes him a-pac-o-lips, right?

vs

You’re fuckin failin this… and I’ll leave you leerin hoe
Coz kid, we all know Specticuls went outa fashion YEARS ago

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
 
Old 09-27-05, 07:54 PM   #7
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Voted For: Appocolyptik

Check out his flamming RB sig , who does he think he is...the 'devil?'
Shit, for this battle Ima have to litterally 'drop down' to his level
5....ok..liked the concept between devil/drop-down,was a lil too long thoughB]
He said Im tryna beef, damn rights, *hits him with a piece of steak*
I still 'burn herbs', your a 'Pyro-kronik'..should be a piece of cake (1)
[B]4....decent

Thought that me and Soul liked him, we really thought he was a weiner (2)
If you seen the tunes he rocked, you wouldnt wanna be his friend neither
6.....nice personal
This kid just runs his mouth, when I ask to battle him every night
Appocolyptiks never shuts up, which makes him a-pac-o-lips, right?
4...no,this wordplay was forced becuz ot didn't match sllyably
No wonder this bitch is on my block list, all he does is stalk and annoy (2)
Kid cant even serve me through text, and ironically he's a paper boy
6....nice punch wit the paper boy shit...but i didn't like how u mentioned that block list thingy again.
In the classifieds he needs a new job, cause his rap style is scary
Battling me, I leave his verse posted at the top of the O-Bitch-uary
5...decent wordplay.
I hope he aint staying on Rv, shit, he'd only be wasting our time
For all I know...
He could just be a 'pussy in a hat', and is still unable to rhyme (3)
5...cat in the hat lines are a 'lil played...but this wuz ite still.

Fuck you and The Establishment, I guess it’s critical G
That I don’t diss ya leader, coz you’d take “fuck Soul Rebel” literally
4...forced rhyming with the "G" part that came outta no-where.Punch could have been decent if it had better wording.
When it comes to wackness you’re the epitomy, but I’ll nail this shit
And I’ll put your girl up for DIY…right after I nail the bitch
2...no,this was whack man.
You’re fuckin failin this… and I’ll leave you leerin hoe
Coz kid, we all know Specticuls went outa fashion YEARS ago
6...good nameplay.
The world’s a bitch, and it’s a fact that’s burnin as true
So yeah life’s fucked… makin it less of a virgin than you
8....Lmao.I really liked this one,set-up relevant,flowed nice,punch connected..dope shit.
Fucka sailor, I aint need spinach, now vision this boy
Cos it’s true I’ma Popeye…till ya fuckin vision’s destroyed
5...decent enuff....didn't seem to diss much tho..
I love gardenin, with a spade and a shovel I’m standin coo
So I plant my seed in ya girls cooch…
…but the floralB where I’m plantin you
5...good wordplay.
I’ll smash you foo, I’ma win, no point in debating
And I’ll put your concepts on t.v…
…just to boost the antique channels ratings
6....good

OK...Close battle here.
SPek...
Try to stay away from links in battles.I used to do that a lot too...and it doesn't work.So try to stop with it.I thought you got too repitive by over mentioning the blocking his name thing...cuz I,personaly,am not a fan of beating around the bush.And You had some forced wordplay...with the a-pac-o-lips line.
Appocolypits...
After I read the 1st 2 bars...I figured you were done.But you picked it up at the end.that 1st bar was forced rhyming with the G thing that came outta no where....and the 2nd bar was just whack IMO.The rest was good shit.U kept the flow going,set-up relevant to punches...and made it hit hard.Good shit.

(you might get some hate votes due to the fact ur from RB and all..so...be warned.)

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Old 09-27-05, 08:01 PM   #8
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This was feedback posted for Spektikul

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Checking this out....................................
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Old 09-28-05, 01:04 AM   #9
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Upping.....................
 
Old 09-28-05, 01:22 AM   #10
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Good Verse Spek....................................
and yo what up Pyrokronix?!?!!?
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Old 09-28-05, 10:50 AM   #11
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Thanks for the vote Natural, although I didn't agree with you that my first bar was "forced," it was a detailed and good vote. And Ydat? Wtf was that? You didn't explain why he won or anything, talentless fuck.

And sup Chronic?
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Old 09-28-05, 03:19 PM   #12
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*hits him with a piece of steak*
^^^^spektikul used that in his verse lolmaoroflmao
plus you weren't creative at all, most of the punches were weak n just meh, but yea

You’re fuckin failin this… and I’ll leave you leerin hoe
Coz kid, we all know Specticuls went outa fashion YEARS ago
^^^lmao i hated ya fuckin structure but the punches and nameplay was too good to be overlooked

bla bla bla.........v/Appocolyptik easily

dammit you hoes, i can't even vote w/e tho
should be how long you've been on the site not how many posts you have anywayz
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Old 09-29-05, 01:50 AM   #13
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herbs herbs herbs...

Lets get some REAL voting crackin yall.
 
Old 09-29-05, 10:48 AM   #14
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Shut up Spek you fuckin fag, you're wack. You always have been, just admit it hoe. You have no talent and neither does Soul Rebel. You can't even take a loss like a man.

Lmao at you blocking me on msn just so you could use it as a punch. And now you're tryna sway the battle because I'm from RB? Fuck outa here son.
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Old 09-29-05, 01:21 PM   #15
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Voted For: Spektikul

Spektikul - Good spit, it flowed well and you had some strong punches and good personals.

Best Line - Check out his flamming RB sig , who does he think he is...the 'devil?'
Shit, for this battle Ima have to litterally 'drop down' to his level

Worst Line - NONE

Appocolyptik - Good spit also, you had some ok wordplay and your punches were hitten semi-hard.

Best Line - Fuck you and The Establishment, I guess it’s critical G
That I don’t diss ya leader, coz you’d take “fuck Soul Rebel” literally

Worst Line - The world’s a bitch, and it’s a fact that’s burnin as true
So yeah life’s fucked… makin it less of a virgin than you

OVERALL - This battle was ok, I think that Spek came harder with the flow and punches though. App your didnt have as many good punches and your flow was weak. Step up on the wordplay and use a stronger flow.

Vote - Spektikul

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