10 Lines
No Biting
No Dickriding
No Bullshit
No Hate

3-0 = KO

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Check in by: 08-03-06 at 11:36 PM

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Expired battle close - win

Reopened for 21 more days - 10/7

GKillaz05 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-03-06 11:10 PM.

Punches leave ya 'burned' like the 'sun' your trapped this time...
Couldnt even spit something' 'hott', if you 'rapped outside'...
I get wins like cars without a roof chump gats leave u slumped...
Fuckin' Fighter?....
Like ray charles atta bar... I never seen this "fruit punch"...
Gimme ya best hit, u dont change rap styles u change-sexes...
'Swooshing-A-Shot' at a parks only time u make the "net-flip"...
Punches are scarring your health; my bars are like stealth...
closest he gets to having a ‘sex life’ is being ‘hard on himself’...
Im a "G Killa", so in this battle there is no need to merk you...
You cant spit a 9:10, because thats past this youngins cerfew...

9:10 = 9outta10

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Nick Fletcher. has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-03-06 11:13 PM.

Right, I've beaten you before. This time won't be any different. So, draw up your forced structure, wordplay and all that other weak bullshit you drop. And I'll be happy to own you with a quick fucking keystyle you FAGGOT!


Aight look,
Kid, they call me a thief and a stalker.. sorry but its a habit
So ya girl, I'm a trailer.. and then fuckin steal yours whilst I'm at it
I'll smash you faggot.. and have you fallin' G
With such a dope haymaker.. I'll have all the farmers calling me
I throw up punches and kicks, lightning quick to rip dicks
And kids bars are on a level. .
. . that cud be used in the High Jump for the special olympics
Fuck outta here you dumb fuck. . I'll go old school just for fun
And you'd go old school to, if you weren't still attending ure first one
I heard you call ya dick a credit card ..but kid, I won't give it clout
'Coz every girls a cash machine. .
. . you try pushin their buttons and they spit it out!

pz, dude

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hurry up and start dick ridin' before people that dont like you enter, and you LOSE.

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What the fuck is your problem?

I do not have people dickriding me, and as far as those who do not like me like rush lingo and Ken`Pho and suck.... LMAO!! I have all of them blacklisted anyway.

I looked at your verse, and it is trash man. You are still using that same style with the forced structure and wordplay. That shit died on this site about a year and a half ago. I won this battle. EZ.

AND OH MY FUCKING GOD!!!

You explained one of your punches, and you dropped a "HOT" line.

Ultimate herb status for you.

right I did, and NOOO.. your verse was mega whack, not one good punchline in there, I dont really care for text much any ways, but look for an audio track comin' your was CLOWN, and oh yeah, if you win this battle some how, your a dick rider, I already know though. so its coo'

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LMAO!! This will be my last response to your gayness. I find it funny that you call my verse mega whack... but what's funnier is that as soon as I dropped my verse you instantly went about making dickrider claims. That basically tells me ONE THING... you are a herb who knows he has gotten floored and so you make these weak ass allogations so your defeat seems less humiliating.

Jesus, you fucking suck.. BIG TIME.

uppin #1................................................ ....

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Voted For: GKillaz05

Punches leave ya 'burned' like the 'sun' your trapped this time...
Couldnt even spit something' 'hott', if you 'rapped outside'...
I liked this openner - 2nd bar was nice

I get wins like cars without a roof chump gats leave u slumped...
Fuckin' Fighter?....
Like ray charles atta bar... I never seen this "fruit punch"...
first line was filler but 2nd was decent

Gimme ya best hit, u dont change rap styles u change-sexes...
'Swooshing-A-Shot' at a parks only time u make the "net-flip"...
2 good lines

Punches are scarring your health; my bars are like stealth...
closest he gets to having a ‘sex life’ is being ‘hard on himself’...
1st was filler, 2nd was str8

Im a "G Killa", so in this battle there is no need to merk you...
You cant spit a 9:10, because thats past this youngins cerfew...
decent closer...


Kid, they call me a thief and a stalker.. sorry but its a habit
So ya girl, I'm a trailer.. and then fuckin steal yours whilst I'm at it
recycled but still a dope line...

I'll smash you faggot.. and have you fallin' G
With such a dope haymaker.. I'll have all the farmers calling me
ok punch

I throw up punches and kicks, lightning quick to rip dicks
And kids bars are on a level. .
. . that cud be used in the High Jump for the special olympics
didn't really like this line

Fuck outta here you dumb fuck. . I'll go old school just for fun
And you'd go old school to, if you weren't still attending ure first one
ok line

I heard you call ya dick a credit card ..but kid, I won't give it clout
'Coz every girls a cash machine. .
. . you try pushin their buttons and they spit it out!
decent punch

This was a str8 battle, but I was feeling GKs shit the most coz he had some ill lines. Nick had someshit but I've seen most of it before really so I wasn't surprised or astounded by it being in here.

Personals - none
Metaphores - Gkillaz
Punches - Gkilaz
Structure and Flow - Gkillaz
Wordplay - Gkillaz

V/ Gkillaz05

rtf

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Aight look,
Kid, they call me a thief and a stalker.. sorry but its a habit
So ya girl, I'm a trailer.. and then fuckin steal yours whilst I'm at it
I'll smash you faggot.. and have you fallin' G
With such a dope haymaker.. I'll have all the farmers calling me
I throw up punches and kicks, lightning quick to rip dicks
And kids bars are on a level. .
. . that cud be used in the High Jump for the special olympics
Fuck outta here you dumb fuck. . I'll go old school just for fun
And you'd go old school to, if you weren't still attending ure first one
I heard you call ya dick a credit card ..but kid, I won't give it clout
'Coz every girls a cash machine. .
. . you try pushin their buttons and they spit it out!


aight all i gotta say is self glory with that verse all you talked about is what you cant or TRY and do...no real hard punches or personals so that in my books was a weak verse... but thats nothin a little elevating cant fix

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Vote G killaz
for an all around better verse

Punches leave ya 'burned' like the 'sun' your trapped this time...
Couldnt even spit something' 'hott', if you 'rapped outside'...
I get wins like cars without a roof chump gats leave u slumped...
Fuckin' Fighter?....
Like ray charles atta bar... I never seen this "fruit punch"...
Gimme ya best hit, u dont change rap styles u change-sexes...
'Swooshing-A-Shot' at a parks only time u make the "net-flip"...
Punches are scarring your health; my bars are like stealth...
closest he gets to having a ‘sex life’ is being ‘hard on himself’...
Im a "G Killa", so in this battle there is no need to merk you...
You cant spit a 9:10, because thats past this youngins cerfew...

ya verse came with more consitsancy and flow there were more prosonals and punches that hit harder so yea my vote goes to you.....