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Old 10-01-04, 11:40 AM   #1
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Limited Edition vs Yvonne

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8 -10 Lines
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gd luck...

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Check in by: 10-04-04 at 11:40 AM

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Old 10-01-04, 11:55 AM   #2
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Yvonne has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-01-04 11:55 AM.
 
Old 10-01-04, 12:24 PM   #3
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You thinking to win this bitch shows u got it twisted
Blasphamig in ya spit…son u got ur death edition listed*
dogs only bite,ur ghost shud be ready 2 write,u a vet?is a lie
so do us a fav&decline dis fight,cos u could hurt sum1's eye
ur punches would neva stand even if they were on ego
cos u still gatta pack heat from yve...the vol-ca-no
ur rec has been geled,reseting it was stupid,cos ur skills got a limit**
my clocks ticking i aint got time to waist,sit bak& c ya loss come in a minuite

* his name..edition

**^^...



ya dont get my verse fine...dont vote thanx...


we will hit urs too..........1
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Old 10-01-04, 05:07 PM   #4
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Old 10-01-04, 05:16 PM   #5
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...A'yo...

Now I am up against a girl, but I'ma rock this bitch's world...
She a'in' dope, only way she sick is when sickness hurled....
Now I got you scared, well hoe, you should been prepared...
Jaw dropped and stared, well if you was hot, I may have cared
I haven't seen a picture, but if Eve ya sig, I'ma be a ditcher...
But sayin' you dope, is sayin' a martini doesn' have a mixture
I mean no offense, girl, but you better get a lil' common sense
You be like 50 Cent, if you think you can merk me...

...That's Ordinary Nonsense...

Quick...whatever...goodluck...
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Old 10-01-04, 05:55 PM   #6
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oh dear so u waited for me to get my siggy first for a personal?.....wow



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Yvonne is dope

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Word. I respect christians like you.

Now That's Wassup!
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Old 10-01-04, 06:46 PM   #7
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Voted For: Yvonne

You thinking to win this bitch shows u got it twisted
Blasphamig in ya spit…son u got ur death edition listed*
Ok wouldn't of used as an opener
dogs only bite,ur ghost shud be ready 2 write,u a vet?is a lie
so do us a fav&decline dis fight,cos u could hurt sum1's eye
Hell no that was bad
ur punches would neva stand even if they were on ego
cos u still gatta pack heat from yve...the vol-ca-no
Pretty good hit quite hard
ur rec has been geled,reseting it was stupid,cos ur skills got a limit**
my clocks ticking i aint got time to waist,sit bak& c ya loss come in a minuite
Best bar had me laughing

Now I am up against a girl, but I'ma rock this bitch's world...
She a'in' dope, only way she sick is when sickness hurled....
Played or what man
Now I got you scared, well hoe, you should been prepared...
Jaw dropped and stared, well if you was hot, I may have cared
No that was a filler
I haven't seen a picture, but if Eve ya sig, I'ma be a ditcher...
But sayin' you dope, is sayin' a martini doesn' have a mixture
Decent punch
I mean no offense, girl, but you better get a lil' common sense
You be like 50 Cent, if you think you can merk me...
No what was that man realy?

Yvonne took this for 2 punches.
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Old 10-02-04, 08:56 AM   #8
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Yvonne is dope

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Word. I respect christians like you.

Now That's Wassup!
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Old 10-02-04, 10:15 AM   #9
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You thinking to win this bitch shows u got it twisted
Blasphamig in ya spit…son u got ur death edition listed*
^^^^^^^^^^^^ AGIHT GOOD OPENER NICE PUNCH

dogs only bite,ur ghost shud be ready 2 write,u a vet?is a lie
so do us a fav&decline dis fight,cos u could hurt sum1's eye
^^^^^^^^^^^^ HA GOOD PUNCH NICE

ur punches would neva stand even if they were on ego
cos u still gatta pack heat from yve...the vol-ca-no
ur rec has been geled,reseting it was stupid,cos ur skills got a limit**
my clocks ticking i aint got time to waist,sit bak& c ya loss come in a minuite
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT GOOD OPENER AND NICE PUNCHES AND GOOD CLOSA

YVONNE-HAD GOOD PUNCHES AND GOOD FLOW KEEP IT UP





Now I am up against a girl, but I'ma rock this bitch's world...
She a'in' dope, only way she sick is when sickness hurled....
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT GOOD OPENER AND GOOD PUNCH

Now I got you scared, well hoe, you should been prepared...
Jaw dropped and stared, well if you was hot, I may have cared
^^^^^^^^^^ GOOD PUNCH (DECENT)

I haven't seen a picture, but if Eve ya sig, I'ma be a ditcher...
But sayin' you dope, is sayin' a martini doesn' have a mixture
I mean no offense, girl, but you better get a lil' common sense
You be like 50 Cent, if you think you can merk me...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT GOOD CLOSA

LIMIT EDITION-ALTHOUGH I HATE U- U HAD GOOD&HARDER PUNCHES AND NICE FLOW'Z GOOD STRUTURE AND GOOD WORDPLAYS


LIMIT EDITION GOT DIS BECUZ HE HAD HARDER PUNCHES AND NICE WORDPLAYS AND GOOD FLOW

YVONNE- GOOD BATTLE,,,,,,,,,,GOOD VERSE U HAD FLOW'Z AND PUNCHES BUT I THINK LIMIT EDITION CAME HARDER

IF U HAD MORE LINES U'LL PROP GET LIMIT

V-LIMIT EDITION FO WORDPLAYS AND HARDER PUNCHS

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Old 10-02-04, 11:04 AM   #10
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cant vote cuz A.I but

Le came harder I feel...his verse was ok...maybe he didnt come as hard as he oculd

Yyvone...ya fine girl but......ya need to practice punches....

start readin poppa kap e looch n them

start writing laot..use big vocab and itll get stuck in ya had...I forgot how I elevated but this is the method thats used alot...
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Old 10-02-04, 11:06 AM   #11
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belh edit mine.....Really readin tha verses...IO felt Yyvone came a lil harder....she had pucnhes with energy like hse tried...LE's were so bland..bleh....
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Old 10-02-04, 05:12 PM   #12
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lol confused so is it a vote or still a feedbak????



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Yvonne is dope

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Word. I respect christians like you.

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Old 10-02-04, 05:34 PM   #13
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Voted For: Yvonne

yvonne came a lil hard she ahd better punches and stcutre i think she won lol but ya thats my vote anyway lol

Limited Edition:
you have potential man nice vocabulary but i feel yvonne came harder you had some nice punches aswell but not hard enougj you talk to much shit about yerself and droping n shit lol and yer style was fucked coulda been better

Yvonne:
she just cam harder period lol she had way better punches and wordplay and she realy said shit about her oppenent more then limited edition.

VOTE: Yvonne
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Old 10-02-04, 05:43 PM   #14
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Cant vote but good battle from both



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Old 10-02-04, 05:44 PM   #15
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oops i meant 2 put feedback

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