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CeleriTy has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-30-05 09:33 PM.

Dizzee Rascal has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-31-05 04:42 AM.

Ok Celerity hence the cell lines...

Tired of fucking ho's, ya wackness shows, that your whole careers is fable
So, Naming ya clothes, is the only time celerity able to sign a label
ya seem strange cus, like physcho porn stars i maime pus
Quick to aim cus? Disect this herb with a B/bee still wouldn't be famous..
Too slick for ya fate ho, Hit ur face wiv the str8 atleast ur revival hood splits
Prick ill str8 blow up your temple like suicidal buddhists
Hope ya dont choke, embarrassed so much go ahead try and gloat
Ima showboat, throwing Cell 'of verse' how i break this choir boys throat
Prove verbal abuse, decapitate any bystanders to crews aint for you
End this feud, the way i contain cell voters yelling "CELL-U-LOSE/CELLULOSE"*

*Cellulose is the containment of a cell

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Voted For: Dizzee Rascal

Dizzee Rascal=
Real Decent Wordplay. Culd Ov Used Sum Better Personal [ur juz lucky he didnt hit wit any personals either] ..Good Vocab & Flow Thru Out, Nice Consistant Drop, Wuz Feelin Da Punz 4 Da Most Part, Few Lines Were Stretched A Lil, But Datz Iight, It Didnt Really Take Da Sting Out Ov Ya Puns & Disses, Good Job Man, & Props 4 Da ''Suicidle Buddist'' Bar, Nice Creativity

Celerity=
Culd Ov Worded A Few Lines Better Lyke Da ''Vesting Me'' Line, U Had Alot Ov Good Creative Ideas, But Da Use Ov Wordplay In Ya' Ideas Iznt Da Best I Seen Frum U Dawg. Few Decent Disses, Both Verses Lacked Real Personals Tho'...So Dat Wuzza Lil Dissapointing. Consistancy Wuz A Lil Off Frum Yall Two Also, But Dizzee Had Da Better Wordplay & Harder Hitting Punz, Even Tho If Celerity Wuld Ov Used A Few Decent Personals & Worded Sum Ov Da Punz Better, He Probably Wuld Ov Took Da Win


Vote=Dizzee Rascal+Better Wordplay & More Consistancy In Da Punchlinez [both were stretched in places but dats kool i guess, no hate!...much propps, good job both]


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Voted For: Dizzee Rascal

ight u wanted feed man so here is some feed for ya:

Tired of fucking ho's, ya wackness shows, that your whole careers is fable
So, Naming ya clothes, is the only time celerity able to sign a label
^^ nice concept it couldav been worded a bit better tho
ya seem strange cus, like physcho porn stars i maime pus
Quick to aim cus? Disect this herb with a B/bee still wouldn't be famous..
^^ i dont really get that, maybe you should explain
Too slick for ya fate ho, Hit ur face wiv the str8 atleast ur revival hood splits
Prick ill str8 blow up your temple like suicidal buddhists
^^ lol this was good.. try to match up syllable count though
Hope ya dont choke, embarrassed so much go ahead try and gloat
Ima showboat, throwing Cell 'of verse' how i break this choir boys throat
^^ ok i spose not really a hard hitting punch
Prove verbal abuse, decapitate any bystanders to crews aint for you
End this feud, the way i contain cell voters yelling "CELL-U-LOSE/CELLULOSE"*
^^ nice closure this was dope... good wording aswell...

ight well here is the breakdown::

i feel that you have alot of potential u got alot of skills that are wating to be released or sum shit... try to work of your syllable count for a start so the structure is good and it flows, other than that i cant really direct you on punches coz you already heading in the right direcrtion... be original when it comes to thinking of punches so you dont get hated on till they are played, remember to word your punches good so they come out even doper... ight hope this helps... i aint gonna vote coz its too close to call fam g'luck pzzzz

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Thanks for all the feed i forgot to add in my explanations put a B in the middle of cele(b)rity

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checkin on fam.........................................

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This should be upped
Swooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooosh

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Voted For: Dizzee Rascal

dizzee:
Tired of fucking ho's, ya wackness shows, that your whole careers is fable
So, Naming ya clothes, is the only time celerity able to sign a label
^^^^GOOD OPENER....
ya seem strange cus, like physcho porn stars i maime pus
Quick to aim cus? Disect this herb with a B/bee still wouldn't be famous..
^^^FLOW/MULTIS WAS TIGHT HERE...PUNCHLINE WASN'T ALL ALL DAT TUFF THO
Too slick for ya fate ho, Hit ur face wiv the str8 atleast ur revival hood splits
Prick ill str8 blow up your temple like suicidal buddhists
^^^LOL...VERY ORIGINAL I WAS FEELIN DIS
Hope ya dont choke, embarrassed so much go ahead try and gloat
Ima showboat, throwing Cell 'of verse' how i break this choir boys throat
^^^NAH
Prove verbal abuse, decapitate any bystanders to crews aint for you
End this feud, the way i contain cell voters yelling "CELL-U-LOSE/CELLULOSE
^^^DECENT CLOSER...

celerity:
wreck with text? nah, you just a wreck with text
I'll have you 'scrambling for your life' like imprisoned breakfast chefs
^^^GOOD EOPENR...NICE FLOW AND DA PUNCH HIT GOOD
start re-thinking your timing, I laugh at your thoughts of besting me
when I ran over your brain I must’ve jogged your memory
^^UHHH I NEVA SEEN DIS...GOOD
i'll shred till I slice through... pound till your rotten
pound till your chest is caved in as deep as Bin Laden
^^DECENT
tearing through... I hate your guts, I got them on my stitching
so I'll give you a dirty look like unqualified cosmeticians
^^^LOL...DOPE
watch me pin him, then pin my ribbon... just bow and take the L
the loss gots you kicking yourself like you tore your ACL
^^^DECENT CLOSER...

IT ALL COMES DOWN 2 PERSONALS CUZZ DA PUNCHES WERE EVEN AND DIZZEE CAME WITH SOME PERSONALS...CLERERITY YA VERSE WAS HOT BUT IT LOOKED PRE WRITTEN CUZZ U DIDN'T HAVE ANY PERSONALS

V/DIZZEE

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"Wordz Ahgod has DECLINED this battle on 12-20-06 09:49 PM.

This thread has been automatically closed."

^^he's scared.lol

*my name is dizzy diz i handle my biz* lol

Is that a ko then?

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Or is it first to 5 im not sure on this site, is that how the record is updated?

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its first to five.. and all of those votes will be DQ'ed... most likely. cause this is massive DR.. because u got KILLLED.. sorry cuz but its the truth