Voted For: For$akeN

heres the break down

opener:forsaken
punches:forsaken
flow:both
structure:empire
wordplay:none
meta's:empire
personals:forsaken(killed him in that)
humor:forsaken
closer:forsaken
overall:Forsaken


no hate just fact........

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Voted For: For$akeN

forsaken- lol funny verse the opener is funny but i think thats a fuse box the blind line was nice to but i still think u should get more wordplay in your verses bunch of personals in this battle though funny 1s to others where kinda weak like the phone i didnt like to much overall though a pretty nice verse just dissin his pic

empire- vocab started off good then u kinda went away from it personals where average u had a lot of internal rhymes though that kept a tight flow but i think ya punchs lacked here your wordplay was ight didnt have much of it again u should add that to your verse more u had less lines to spit an i still dont think u had that good of averse and u even fed off his when u put that link line in there your closer could have been nice but worded wrong overall work on wordplay and wording your punchs to hit harder everything else is ight

vote forsaken for an overall better verse

no hate an return an HONEST FUCKIN VOTE

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^ even after it says if u dont understand dont vote


some people that are mods on here

you are so dumb i cant feed i cant see forsakens verse stupid in the new system i knew the lame would do that anyways uppppppppppppppppin 2 hater votes for forsaken 2 of my enemys

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Blah...
just feedback
Empire had too much explination but yah i gotta say you have been improving by a lil( want a rematch??)
Forsaken gets this battle in my eyes seeing he had a better and stronger verse with better punches and personals

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...Paramik Fuckin'...

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NVM take this feedback away and allow me to vote

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Voted For: For$akeN

[font=arial narrow]Empire
I liked your punches they were hard & connected there..
Yo flow was pretty decent & it didn't fall or nuttin..
Tha structure was in place...it didn't stretch out..
All together you had a pretty nice flow there..
7.5/10

For$akeN
I liked your punches too...they were hard & they landed..
Flow was aight..didnt fell or nuttin..
Structure was nice..
But all 2gether ur verse was nice & had a slight harder punches than Empire...
8/10

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my tourney... I want to see feedback... lol... close battle tho.

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looks like a picture frame to me at least:S blah uppppppping

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ok this honest lil feedback
cuz i can vote cuz i have "reasons"

For$aken:

you had some nice punches in there
but you mostly got on his weight and didnt mix it up
but your structure wsa good and flow also

Empire:

very nice vocab here
you had some nice punches
and your verse was very complex i say
and you didnt need a pic to win this

but both were good

ps:this my 1st time on elite FL lol

~1~

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