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Old 07-30-04, 06:10 PM   #16
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Voted For: Big Bad Wolf

Big Bad Wolf
structure is good...flow is on target...u had some multis...wordplay was alright...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...

phatinum
structure isnt very good...u started out with stretched lines, went to short lines, then back to stretched lines...flow fell off due to the lack of consistency...no multis...wordplay was wack...none of ur punches connected...no good personals..

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neither had good personals...Big Bad Wolf had the better structure..the more stable flow...more multis...better wordplay...and more connecting punches...so basing off of that...Big Bad Wolf gets my vote...

VOTE - BIG BAD WOLF
 
Old 07-30-04, 07:01 PM   #17
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Uppin 4 one more vote 2 finish dis shit off....Leave a vote an a link.
 
Old 07-31-04, 11:39 AM   #18
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Thanx playayz i got you....uppin for 1 more vote..
 
Old 07-31-04, 12:06 PM   #19
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Voted For: Big Bad Wolf

Yo this was agian a weak battle i voted for you cos you had a better structure and flow. Phatinum is just messed up flow and structure. you also had better punches and it was a better verse over all
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