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08-09-04, 04:32 PM | #16 | |||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 3C58 486D
Voted For: white_boi
ahhhhhhhhh hahahahahahahahahaha, man whitboy owned you buddy, damn whiteboy, twelve years old wit rhymes like that, he had a few sick lines, and there was a few that i wasn't feelin, all in all though you won this shit.... you claim to be an MC thats finally emergin youz 15 and youz prolly still a virgin imma beat you down you gon need a lyrical surgeon that was so fucking sick fo a kid his age, n yo, i was feelin whiteboys flo, he had better structure, killed him on the personells, his rhymes were more thought out so he had a better rhyme sceme, he had better punches, Mc07, you needa work on your structure, it was really akward to read, and your punches were just stupid, you had no personells, and cuz of the structure i wasnt feelin the flo of it, and your rhyme sceme was just so basic, dont hate cuz i know how to vote trust me................................................ .............. Flow: White boi Punches: White boi Personnels: White boi Rhyme sceme: White boi Word play: White boi Opener: white boi Ending: didn't like either of there endings Structure: White boi Vote: White Boi |
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08-09-04, 05:07 PM | #17 | |||||||
10:23 till i'm 86
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IP: BE13 ED38
Voted For: white_boi
white boi, u said alot of dumb shit wit these so go get your dress, bowtie, panties and skirt cuz you goin on a date wit elmo and bert ....after this battle youll have ability reduction so you can stay at home, get fat, and youll need lypo suction das jus some dumbe shit. and then....... cuz i abducted this battle and its now all mine cuz this right here is now my last line u finish wit a nice punch not stating the obvious. but u had harder hitting personals and shit wit..... imma make you look like the most stupidest MC you claim to be an MC thats finally emergin youz 15 and youz prolly still a virgin ......... emerging.... ya shit is way to stretched, u need a new fuckin structure and sum vocab. then personals. i jus aint feelin none of your disses at all, the way u say the shit jus aint good and what u say aint good. aint feelin none of it. no hate jus honesty, RETURN THE FAVOR, HIT THIS UP http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138937
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08-09-04, 05:49 PM | #18 | |||||
[Merk-ology 101...Schools In]
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IP: 64CA 9ED5
Voted For: white_boi
This was an ok battle....U had bettter punches and structure, and a few peronals but over all it was medioker..nah mean. Ok battle. U got my vote though...cuz u got him.
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08-09-04, 08:12 PM | #19 | ||||||
New to RB
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IP: C584 0FB2
ayyo shit this is my battle so i might as well take victory now...
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08-09-04, 08:54 PM | #20 | |||||||
I can rap and stuff.
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IP: 3240 794D
Voted For: white_boi
oooookay i guess ill vote for white boi even tho hes duckin our fuckin battle. n e ways both was weak but since ur noobies its not THAT serious for now. white boi wins for better punches, and structure and more creativity(nevr thot i wuld say that) but this aint a hate its just real. drop a vote on the link in the sig but be HONEST cuz it was real close. one
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