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Old 08-13-04, 09:24 PM   #16
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Voted For: J DOT

this was a decent battle.........

E u'r flow was preety decent but simple N basic there wasnt much creativeness in it no twist in lines no word-play no punches or personal just diss but it flowed decent... focus more on punches or personal...

J u'r flow was preety decent as-well but u had more creative lines with actual punches and had alot of personal's a few decent diss and a all around nice drop....

vote: J for having punches more personal and being more creative....
 
Old 08-13-04, 09:32 PM   #17
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v/j dot..

both had good verses... wasnt feelin emergin's flow or structure.. and i wasnt feelin j dots lines.. too many links.. both had dope punches and good personals.. saw some personals that made me wanna hurl, lol anyways good battle.. v/j dot
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Old 08-13-04, 11:04 PM   #18
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word... aight battle..

J dot took this easily... emerge, ya had no punches, flow, wordplay, personals... Not a drop to be proud of.. keep elevatin though... and usin the same rhyme for every line is pretty weak..

J had a personal punch like every line.. wordplay... flow was decent.. no competition
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Old 08-14-04, 05:39 AM   #19
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Voted For: J DOTv/j dot..
both had good verses... wasnt feelin emergin's flow or structure.. and i wasnt feelin j dots lines.. too many links.. both had dope punches and good personals.. saw some personals that made me wanna hurl, lol anyways good battle.. v/j dot


one man band if u can rite a full verse writin usin only 1 rhyme word dat show's skill
2 al b. damned how da fuck u gonna say wut u said bout each verse n still vote j dot? u sounded like both were equal....I.E. u dont need 2 votin j dot may front like he dont kno u but u both got 2getha cuz u hated da same crew........mine.........n i aint freepostin bitch im tellin da truth j dot suck a phat wun homo
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Old 08-14-04, 05:44 AM   #20
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aight i think that Dot had a tighter flow and better punches and he had better word selection and word play so he took this, return the favor adn drop honest on ma battles
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Old 08-15-04, 12:16 AM   #21
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Yo J you smashed this cat good....good structure and personals...
keep spittin that good shit...nice work....


as for the other guy........I got two words for ya PUNCH LINES
now ill give you props wit da flow good work there....but your verse lacked the hit (punches) and structure needed to beat J
so my vote goes to J Dot
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