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Old 08-26-04, 05:17 PM   #16
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Voted For: NewKid

yo newkid, hit it hard, but you need more personals, you can elevate more, but you hit hard wiht some punchlines man.
good multis

imwhiteurdead - man you had a pretty weak verse, no beef but you didnt hit hard enough i htink a couple multis, but it coulda been way better

my vote - newkid
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Old 08-26-04, 05:32 PM   #17
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Voted For: ImWhiteUrDead

nice structure and wordplay, nice job. the other guy was very plain, vote back on my battle with shake spear kid, thx bro, appreciate it http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=145335
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Old 08-27-04, 11:51 AM   #18
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Voted For: NewKid

Alotta self G's lately...anyway u got this coz u were less self-glory both strucs were aight automatically leading to good flow but NewKid had a better verse due to his actual punches the other guy needs to work on his wordplay and actually work out on lining up punches and makin personals...but i feel ya both could work on that...
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