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Old 09-07-04, 07:34 PM   #16
N.Tavarez
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Get blown away by Frances, this mother fucker has no chance…
Cause his lines already garbage bagged up, just like his pants.
i dont like this line
Dogg Look At Ya Avatar, No Need To Self Harm Cause I Beat-You...
I Think U Chokin Homie, Somebody Call 9-1-1...This Is An EMERGENCY RESCUE...!!
I See Ya Battle Record n Respects-Due...
but this ones much worse..... opener paramik
My ''Dome'' Stays On Ya Mommas Mouth Like A Model Wearin LIPSTICK..
...Ya Rhymes Comin Up Shorter Than An Oompa Loompa So I'ma Paint U Orange n Call U NICK...!!.....Muh'Fucker!
nigga r u serious? this is ya closer? come on step ya rap game UP!!!!
What a weak punk, even the pussy cats not afraid of what you do.
Learn the truth, nobody fears you, even my cat flips the finger at you.
real fuckin cute nigga u lucky your oppenent was so wack! closer paramik
You's A 'VET' That Means I'ma Smack The Shit Out YOU Juss Cause Of Ya ATTITUDE...
You Bitch U Claim U Throwin Up 'RAGS' Well That'll Explain The Shitty MOOD..
fuck is this garbage? u should be dq'ed fa wackness
I'm whipping this class clown, like what they used to do at his school…
It’s just like the days before Lent, the way I'm Passing OVER this fool!
the only line i like and barely....

paramik wins
 
Old 09-07-04, 07:35 PM   #17
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hey no poll to click on but you send it to complaints cuz dis is an explained vote

I REPEAT I VOTE FOR PARAMIK
 
Old 09-07-04, 07:40 PM   #18
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You's a patronizin bastard aint cha man?

fuck outta here with them garbage ass votes....

patronizin us both, nigguh fuck you...
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Old 09-07-04, 08:09 PM   #19
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haha
Maku jaillin and hottssh, I barely tried...
you kno me i really dont try that much in battle only if i face a experienced vet...
I really used 4/10 of my skill
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Old 09-07-04, 11:06 PM   #20
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Voted For: Paramik

Get blown away by Frances, this mother fucker has no chance…
Cause his lines already garbage bagged up, just like his pants.
I agree he makes an ass out of himself his weight makes him fall…
Kid says that his lines are fully assed?, must not have any at all.
I mean your wack, ya punches and structure is like dog shit in a pile…
Your crap redefined, ya verse more messed up than ludas hairstyle….
I'm whipping this class clown, like what they used to do at his school…
It’s just like the days before Lent, the way I'm Passing OVER this fool!
What a weak punk, even the pussy cats not afraid of what you do.
Learn the truth, nobody fears you, even my cat flips the finger at you.


......................
breakdown:

lines were aight, closure was a filler(cat line) rhymes were original for the most part, had nice word play...

best punch:I'm whipping this class clown, like what they used to do at his school…
It’s just like the days before Lent, the way I'm Passing OVER this fool!

^^nice comdedy...shotta boy's verse was wack n all, had horrible opening which made me lose focus on his rhymes quick. no challenge, due to these causes...

vote: paramik
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Old 09-08-04, 03:57 AM   #21
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Ol' Dick Ridin' Ass Vets..........
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Old 09-08-04, 08:30 PM   #22
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upping this shit
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Old 09-09-04, 06:23 PM   #23
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please vote here
upping on this one
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Old 09-10-04, 06:24 PM   #24
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upping
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Old 09-10-04, 10:35 PM   #25
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Voted For: Paramik

Paramik -punches were a slight harder, tha flow was ok and tha structure was in place & not stretch'd~out..

sHoTTaBoY -yo shit was ok..punches could've been a little~harder..and tha flow was ok would've gottin' my vote if tha punches were a little harder tho..
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Old 09-11-04, 05:56 PM   #26
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Voted For: Paramik

easy...better punches and a couple coo personals in there...i was feeln the whole style of the flow...

shot had a okay flow, but i wasnt too much feeling it, he had a couple coo punches in there, but not all of em connected.

elevate on ya skills and keep practicin...good flow
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