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Voted For: Empire

Empire got this shit with,

better opener, better punches, use of wordplay and personals....

Not 'hot' occupation the 'block' man why you dont stop fronting(2)
You 'weak' yous a 'legend in the street' at dick riding and cock sucking(3)
that was fire

No 'struggling' claim you 'hustling' on the block moving that crack work(4)
But yous a 'joke' real hustlers woulnt even be 'broke' on rap verse(4)
That was also pretty nice shit

Street legeng, not bad use of words, punches could have been harder, structure could be better, personals could have been alot better.... Nothing in your verse hasnt been said before, no hate JUST ELEVATE

i think you was born to infuriate, niggas annoyed wit ya post
this fruit is "sweet" in simplest terms he's infested wit "glucose"
that was ya only descent line

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vote empire
he had nice wordplay and personals,he also had some decent punches with a nice structure,dope opener i was feeling that

ST- you had an ockword structure..sretched lines..and tht threw ur floe way off,ur punches were kay,u had a little bit of wordplay...but thats it

v/empire

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Voted For: Empire

ok... this coulda went either way but i gotta go with empire on this one...

Personals: Empire
Punches: Empire
Structure: Street Legend
Vocab: Street Legend
metas: Street Legend (only cuz empire didn't use any... SL's were kinda weak but he did have some)
multi's: Empire (coulda been used better but there was an attempt)
opener: tie
closer:Empire

as you can see this was real close... not ya rare and sacred kinda "OH Shyt!!!" battle but close none-the-less.

Vote goes to E for harder punches and personals galore... on another note I see that Street is definitely trying to elevate from when I first battled him... good shyt ... keep growing

Voted For: Empire

opener: empire
meta's: none
multi's: empire
structure: empire
flow: empire
punches: empire
personals: empire

to be honest i thought this was kinda one sided, good shit empire

street legend u could elevate a bit more but u did pretty good

no hate/beef

vote: empire

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Voted For: Street Legend

Damn...this was a close ass battle. But I gotta give this one to Street. Even though it was even I liked streets battle abit better. His structure was nice and I liked da words he used. He vocab is abit better but not much. Both brought the heat but for some reason I think Streets punches hit abit better. Nice battle from both but i gotta give this to street.

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Voted For: Street Legend

street got this.. better punches and vocab... im gonna say flow and structure was the same... empires punches were pretty tight too.. u both came with tight personals.. but i just think that street came with harder punches and better vocab

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Voted For: Street Legend

good battle for u both

street legend- good verse, nice flow, good punches and i liked some of the wordplay..also had nice vocab..ur last line is kinda played against empire but u worded it good..i give ur verse a 7.5/10

empire- iight verse, ive seen way better from u..nice flow like always, ur punches were iight but not hard enuff, good personals on his crew and shit..some good wordplay, no hate to u but i kno u can do better i think u underestimated him
ur verse is a 6.5/10 cuz u can come harder

v/street

Voted For: Empire

my vote is for empire he got real personal and his bars made more since an i felt tha way he set it up with thw explanitions

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Try to 'ride' but when 'mindz kollide' i collapse active brain waves(1)
Flow 'mastered' listen 'bastard' as i rap and collapse ya mainframe (OK Punch ... Nice Multies)5/10

Not 'hot' occupation the 'block' man why you dont stop fronting(2)
You 'weak' yous a 'legend in the street' at dick riding and cock sucking(3)(Didn't Really Make Sense, Decent)3/10

No 'struggling' claim you 'hustling' on the block moving that crack work(4)
But yous a 'joke' real hustlers woulnt even be 'broke' on rap verse(4) (Def One Of Ya Best Punches, Nice Personal)7/10

Must be 'slow' this 'ho' just force me to smash and whore um
You 'ass' whole crew 'trash' thats why you last in the forum(5)
(Ur Best Punch, Good Personal)8/10

Empire:Overall... Good Structure And Flow ... Your First Two Punches Wern't That Great ... But They Picked Up ... Nice Multies Also ... Last Two Personals Were Real Nice ...

My lyrical wrath is catastropic, deep inside you envee me
suspciously, i dont think you can beat me dependently
(Ive Seen Betta Openers But Decent Enough)5.5/10

you gonna be embarresed after this lose fallin in pits
ya kindergarden lyrics portrays that ya got noncomposmentis
(Nice Vocab, Didn't really Hit Hard Though)4.5/10

i think you was born to infuriate, niggas annoyed wit ya post
this fruit is "sweet" in simplest terms he's infested wit "glucose" (Nice Punch/Personal) 7.5/10

empire has been flagellated, unbeaten record put in the cementary
we can tell by ya strange attire that you are eleemosynary(Lol ... Good Personal, Best Line Of Tha Match ...)9/10

you to confident ya cocky but Rv knows ya average kid
Ima "collapse this empire" like he was "Roman" even vets say that ima cataylist (Decent Punch)7/10

Overall: Street Legend ...Structure Wasn't as Good As Empire ... But Was Was Definatly On Another Level With Tha Vocab ... That Personal, For Me Definatly Got Tha Match Won For You ...

Vote:Street Legend

Voted For: Street Legend

empre- fuck that was some nice shit kid. punches was on point and all that but major points off for explain the punches again. its koo to explain but most of that shit, peeps already knew. keep it up.....8/10

street- good shit also. structure was kinda off but you put major vocab in ya shit and used it correctly for nicely delivered punches. i realllllly liked that glucose line...good shit.....8.5/10

both was ill but somebody has to win.....RTF.

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Voted For: Empire

i think empire came harder. he had real good personals n his flow was okbut needs jus a lil work. but other then that he did real good. so....
vote=empire

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