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Old 10-16-04, 05:07 PM   #16
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17 wins-8 losses-2 dq's- 9 K.O'S


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vs. Wildfire (down 2-1)
vs Ice Pick (up 2-1)
vs Verbal Abuse (up 4-2)
vs Raw Material (up 3-0)
vs String9487 (tied 1-1)

-ROOKIE OF THE MONTH-
September

*EMPIRE GETS PEOPLE DQ'D WHILE DUCKING*
 
Old 10-16-04, 05:13 PM   #17
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Voted For: Myth

another nice battle... myth your rhyms were again relly well put together you had good punches and flow was really good...

dopeman: i liked your as much but i think myth just edged it with the wordplay close battle...

i think myth got it because his had better punches and the flow was good... dopeman your verse was good and funny but myth edged it

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Old 10-16-04, 05:19 PM   #18
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Old 10-16-04, 08:09 PM   #19
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lol shit mayn Myth always come up with something Hott good flow both yall was good but Myth came harder with tha punches some good personals funny shit nigga said Jello Commercials lol tha last line was a kill killes tha flow hommie nice battle good luck to both yall with tha rest

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Old 10-17-04, 03:59 PM   #20
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I thought dopemans verse here was the better because he had better punches and structure the other verse was okay but it lacked multies and it lacked decent punches the only decent thing about ur verse was the structure and some nice word play. V dopeman

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Old 10-17-04, 04:06 PM   #21
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dopeman... nice with the ken kaniff shit.

myth... good all around verse, but i aint votin cause this 2 close of a battle. nice 2 both, keep it up

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Old 10-17-04, 05:56 PM   #22
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vs. Wildfire (down 2-1)
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vs Raw Material (up 3-0)
vs String9487 (tied 1-1)

-ROOKIE OF THE MONTH-
September

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Old 10-18-04, 10:34 AM   #23
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Voted For: Myth

Myth-good flow dawg in my eyes u merked him u had good flow structure betta punches good personals didnt really see any multis in either verse

DOPEMAN-urs was alright but i have seen betta ur structure was wack as fuck had some good personals but in dis line:its time to quit, your dumb trynna claim your quick..
ya so whack, faggot, everyday you gotta change your gimmick: gimmick and quick dont rhyme dawg but keep doin ur thing....

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Old 10-18-04, 12:12 PM   #24
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-NET RECORD-

17 wins-8 losses-2 dq's- 9 K.O'S


-NEED VOTES-
vs. Wildfire (down 2-1)
vs Ice Pick (up 2-1)
vs Verbal Abuse (up 4-2)
vs Raw Material (up 3-0)
vs String9487 (tied 1-1)

-ROOKIE OF THE MONTH-
September

*EMPIRE GETS PEOPLE DQ'D WHILE DUCKING*
 
Old 10-18-04, 03:28 PM   #25
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Voted For: Myth

flow-myth got this easy,dope your lines were way too stretched not feelin it

punches/personals-myth had the harder punches,more and way harder personals, dopemans were kinda corn they were aight but didnt match up to myths

good luck toboth no hate peace
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Old 10-18-04, 03:58 PM   #26
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Dopeman Verse
somebody got it twisted about banks bein gay...
it was this fool suckin dick an tap dancin with queers like ballet..
not feelin this ok opener but was weak 2/10

ok, so maybe you got a little ''wit''..
your idea of an open mic is trynna get some ''cock, boy'' like a ken keniff skit!..
tried to add witty i heard the skit its funny but this isnt lines r streeeetched but better then first bar 3/10

shit, you couldnt even clown on a midget..
why? cause ya rhymes are comin up shorter than the zero digit!..
hmm no wasnt feelin it again streeetched 2/10

its time to quit, your dumb trynna claim your quick..
ya so whack, faggot, everyday you gotta change your gimmick..
filler but it was aight 3/10

if ya ''sick'' kid go to the clinic an be treated..
ya gon need to call up 'g-unit' for me to be defeated..
weak but probably best line in the verse 4/10

bitch remain seated, cause ya rhymes aint nothin but a myth..
the reazon your pissed is you n all ya alter egos had a ''lovers tiff''..!
ehh ok descent closer could of been better 4/10


no hate but wasnt feelin it as much as myths 18/60


Myth Verse
the council's got only about an ounce of good talent in it's circle *
i got dopeman scared, trembling, and shaking like a jello commercial
nice i liked this and witty good opener 8/10

this kids use to having his legs spreaded apart like his name is *
suck dick? he'll gladly do it just to do a favor and become famous
eh wasnt really feelin this wen i first read it sounds like a filler but descent 5/10

u can't be a vet cause ya losses are almost equal to half ya wins *
kid plays with balls like soccer players so i'll crack his shins
good personal setup and punch delivered 8/10

this boy done lost his damn mind, he's claiming he's haterproof *
ya skins a bit rough, i'll kill ya and put it to greater use
hmm wasnt feelin this as much 4/10

rematch? naw i'm good one wins enough, i won't spank u like spul did *
dopeman's a fag he done gripped on more balls then spalding
nice i liked this good personal second best bar in my opinion 9/10

my punches and meta's will have u seeing black when ya eyes close
i'm aiming to put out ya career and ambitions like water to pyro's
everything good here nice closer and my favorite bar of the verse 10/103

everything was good here except for a couple of bars but this was kinda one sided battle no hate 44/60

good luck peace
 
Old 10-18-04, 03:59 PM   #27
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^mah bad for the feedback on the last bar of myths verse its 10/10 not 10/103 lol
 
Old 10-18-04, 05:38 PM   #28
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-NET RECORD-

17 wins-8 losses-2 dq's- 9 K.O'S


-NEED VOTES-
vs. Wildfire (down 2-1)
vs Ice Pick (up 2-1)
vs Verbal Abuse (up 4-2)
vs Raw Material (up 3-0)
vs String9487 (tied 1-1)

-ROOKIE OF THE MONTH-
September

*EMPIRE GETS PEOPLE DQ'D WHILE DUCKING*
 
Old 10-18-04, 05:55 PM   #29
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Voted For: Myth

ok

This was an okay battle
not great but okay...


Dopeman:

Elevate dog
I been watchin your battles
and I wasn't feelin the punches in them
the banks line against him are played very much
as much as the myth lines...

no hate just didn't feel this verse at all

Myth:

ok I liked your verse

the meta4's kept interest
but the soccer line was played tho
adn the prsonal against spul hurtin him was nice

you win easily in my oppinion

*explained*

peep open mic bitches lol

both ya and shotta
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Old 10-20-04, 05:58 AM   #30
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