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Old 11-19-04, 03:56 PM   #16
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Old 11-19-04, 04:26 PM   #17
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Voted For: Lyrically Blest

man dis was a hard decision but i had to go
wit u dawg u had betta wordplay..but i gotta
admit dat his flow was betta..but u still had
da shit goin on so yea
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Old 11-19-04, 05:51 PM   #18
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hey yo i think carnage took this one. better wordplay, metas, vocabulary and punches. no hate lyrically blest but you need to elevate some more and use a better vocabulary. and work on your punches cause i wasnt really feeling some of them. no hate just an honest vote.
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Old 11-19-04, 06:18 PM   #19
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decent battle but carnage outmatched u....... lyrical blact had sum ok lines, but it was sum pretty commercial shit and not as creative as carnage..... carnage had the way better vocab and creative, well thought out punches go to carnage.... Blast had some lil punches but nothin too creative or well though out..... juss sum basic shit.... carnages wen i read it out loud had a decent flow to it too.... Blast had pretty uneven bars in sum parts...... the only problem i had with Carnage was like 2 of his lines didnt exactly rhyme with their previous ones, but it was all good and close enough to puul out this battle.... Carnage work on ur actual rhymin and blast u should work on ur vocab and ur elementary punches....
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