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Old 11-17-04, 12:16 PM   #16
Inception
look at this
 
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okay



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Old 11-17-04, 12:24 PM   #17
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This was feedback posted for *Troop*

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^the thanksgiving line was funny as hell... ha paa haa that's the boi, chea, reppin' A.I. good luck, fam.. holl@
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Old 11-17-04, 04:54 PM   #18
Inception
look at this
 
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Old 11-17-04, 05:20 PM   #19
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Voted For: Inception







Have Troop "In A Tough Spot" Like A "Bad-Residence"
I'll "Blast-Men-And-Dent" Ya Frame, Cuz My Punchez "Beat Ya Eyez" And Stay More "Ahead Of Ya Pupilz" Than A "Class Prezident"
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE GOOD PUNCH GOOD FLOW


Treat Him Like "Titanic Inveztorz" Till He'z "Found-Dreamz-Sunk"...Blaztz Simply "Down-This-Punk"
Cuz I'm About To "Steal This Franchizez Spotlight" Like A "Yao Ming Dunk"
^^^^^^^^^ HAHAHAHA WHOA NICE PUNCH
Troop Punchez Are A "Family Friend", Just "Wishing They Connected " Like "Fake Cousinz"
Ya Take Nothin, I See-Thiz-Snake-Bluffin..Cuz He Only "Toying With Creativity" Like An "Eazy Bake Oven"
^^^^^^^^^^^^ MULTI'Z MAYNE NICE PUNCH



Like "Low Class Movie Theaterz" This Bitch "Lackz Featurez"...Eazily "Blazt Speakerz" Cuz Ya "Rapz Weaker"
And Have A.I. Frantically "Searchin For This Legend" Like "Confuzed Map Readerz"
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE CLOSA GOOD FLOW NICE PUNCH




INCEPTION- U HAD AN GOOD VERSE YA PUNCHES MADE ME LAUGH DAT YAO MING-------------NICE GOOD CREATIVE THERE YA FLOW WAS GOOD PLUS U HAD PERSONALS NICE



the 1st Battle i Neglected so u came again for Further Inspection
Verbally Assasinated your "Ghost" No Respect for this Inception
^^^^^^^^^^^ "OK" PUNCH

Zero Respected so No one Pays Attention when your Ranks Givin
Incept Vanishes often from Talent like Anerexics at Thanks Givin
Your Rhyme Ability Resembles your Sig...So no one even Looks
You Droppin Nice is Inconsistent like Narcaleptics Reading
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIIIIIIGHT PUNCH WAS GOOD FLOW WAS AIIIIIGHT

Books Disrespected by Every Single Crew No one gets your Goodies
Now Stop Smothering AI like "Middle Weights"in Infant Hoodies
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ "EH" "OK" PUNCH


TROOP- WHAT HAPPEN MAYNE~! ANYWAY YA VERSE WAS A LIL BASIC AND YA PUNCHES WERENT LIKE U THREW~! BUT U HAD FLOW AND SOME META'Z PLUS PERSONALS


OVERALL= DIS AN ONE-SIDED BATTLE INCEPTION HAD HARDER PUNCHES AND META'Z AND PERSONALS

TROOP ON DA OTHER-HAND HAD AN LIL BASIC IN HIS VERSE HIS PUNCHES WERENT HARD HITTIN LIKE HE USED TOO, HE HAD FLOW AND META'Z BUT DA PUNCHES DIDNT COME THROUGH HERE

VOTE- INCEPTION FOR HARD PUNCHES AND FLOW AND PERSONALS AND META'Z O ALMOST FORGOT AND WORDPLAYS
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Very fucking Nice man, deep shyt, Ima nominate ya for Best poet.

Uppin this for drastic....10/10.....NICE SHYT MAN keep it up.


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Old 11-17-04, 11:56 PM   #20
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look at this
 
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bump.............................................. ........
 
Old 11-18-04, 12:40 PM   #21
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uppin..................................
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Old 11-18-04, 02:02 PM   #22
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lol^^nice drop fam....props to both..............1

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Old 11-18-04, 02:04 PM   #23
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OH Shit,my bad man...lmao......i'll get strobe to take this away.
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Old 11-18-04, 08:53 PM   #24
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Shit one sided.

Troop owned you to be honest Inception, One of the better battle's I seen from you man. You had some nice punches, good personals, Flow was dope and jsut basically owned him.

Inception, first mistake you made, was accepting the battle, you need to imporve quite a lot, "'s are played, don't work in verses that much. Punches weren't that bad, but vocab was ass and lyrically not that good.

V/ Troop
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Old 11-18-04, 10:29 PM   #25
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look at this
 
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holy shit we need to get a saddle in here for this nigga
 
Old 11-19-04, 03:45 PM   #26
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no u jus fuckin suck


ne way uppin this sorry shit
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Old 11-20-04, 12:51 AM   #27
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Have Troop "In A Tough Spot" Like A "Bad-Residence"
I'll "Blast-Men-And-Dent" Ya Frame, Cuz My Punchez "Beat Ya Eyez" And Stay More "Ahead Of Ya Pupilz" Than A "Class Prezident"
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Treat Him Like "Titanic Inveztorz" Till He'z "Found-Dreamz-Sunk"...Blaztz Simply "Down-This-Punk"
Cuz I'm About To "Steal This Franchizez Spotlight" Like A "Yao Ming Dunk"
…5
Troop Punchez Are A "Family Friend", Just "Wishing They Connected " Like "Fake Cousinz"
Ya Take Nothin, I See-Thiz-Snake-Bluffin..Cuz He Only "Toying With Creativity" Like An "Eazy Bake Oven"
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Like "Low Class Movie Theaterz" This Bitch "Lackz Featurez"...Eazily "Blazt Speakerz" Cuz Ya "Rapz Weaker"
And Have A.I. Frantically "Searchin For This Legend" Like "Confuzed Map Readerz"
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^Damn…nice verse…but u ain’t gettin my vote..
fuckin fix ur structure…shit is stretch’d like I don’t kno
what…but overall..decent verse to you…

the 1st Battle i Neglected so u came again for Further Inspection
Verbally Assasinated your "Ghost" No Respect for this Inception
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Zero Respected so No one Pays Attention when your Ranks Givin
Incept Vanishes often from Talent like Anerexics at Thanks Givin
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Your Rhyme Ability Resembles your Sig...So no one even Looks
You Droppin Nice is Inconsistent like Narcaleptics Reading Books
…5
Disrespected by Every Single Crew No one gets your Goodies
Now Stop Smothering AI like "Middle Weights"in Infant Hoodies
…6 nice closer

^Overall..u had a nice drop too…
structure I can see u messed up on it..
but that’s aight...at least it wasn’t stretched
like Inception’s…but u came on top on this 1…
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Old 11-20-04, 01:12 PM   #28
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uppin this shit
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Old 11-20-04, 01:23 PM   #29
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word uppin' this fa my boi..........................
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Old 11-20-04, 02:37 PM   #30
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checkin this count................................
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
 
 


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