Voted For: Artik Phrost

gotta give it to artik phrost on this one. I think his punches were decently solid. His lines were a little stretched and the structure was eh but overall i don't think the verse was that bad. hell's fire had some nice word play but phrost had better word play and fire just got crazy wit it talkin about alaskan pipeline's and such. pretty graphic and it throws the rest of the verse off once he starts talkin about white washed turds and shit. anyway just calm down on the imagery and upgrade the punches to match your word play and you could've took this.

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Voted For: Artik Phrost

this is anotha 1-sided battle in my opinion:
opener: artik p multis: artik p
vocab: artik p structure: artik p
closer: artik p
my vote goes 2 artik p cuz he came harder & hit wit more lyrical punches in diz battle; hells fire u need 2 elevate in ur rhymes & not stretched ur lines so much
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Voted For: Artik Phrost

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Meet ya doom! Cuz B.Wall been resembling pussy since tha tha womb!!..
Get ya flare consumes!..Reroute ya oxygen |“til ya lungs expand lyke hot air balloons”|

that right there^^^ was better then ya whole verse the punch was good direct and creative danm.....

hellfire u tryed to play off her name meaning which aint work that good, and plus it dont really count as a personal to me, but ya flow was good and some of ya punches was decent word-play was average but a decent drop...

A.P ya 1st bar took hes whole verse plus ya ending was crazy hot nice word-play, why did u leave R.V??? anyways ya flow was good , creativeness was def good and onpoint, and ya word-play is a killa u got this hands down.....