Voted For: MaRVJay1009

here is my feedback and vote

flow mask
structure marv
opener-closure tie
rhyming marv
personals marv
imagry marv
multi marv
overall marv

and please hit up on my link and leave an honest vote peace.

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Voted For: Ill.Bill

awwwww fo' sho' shit -- mask u have fukin phat lines dawg..................... both u homies came hard here.like shit... mask my vote goes to you because u had way hard punches wack flow... alrite i guess but some nasty rhymes best lines were ....Marv, I Need Vaxanation, Coz I Just Put My Foot-In-Ya-Mouth.
The Digits On Ya Name Depict Ya Ranking, Ya Not Climbing,Ya Plummetin South!
You Fucking Stink, Coz Even Ya Own verse Needs Deodorant.
Marv Cant Hold Out, Hes a Sentimental Fool, Thats y He 'sang 4 the moment'
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ lololol funny shit.... yo keep it up aiight

now for Marv oyur good i saw your other battles you have awesome rhymes just need t oelevate ,,,,no hate or beeef aiight ..... spit in our battle........... yo holla bak wif some honest votes below.............. agaisnt me and unknown,,,,,, thnx

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lol^^^...uppin 4 more votes

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"Wordz Ahgod has DECLINED this battle on 12-20-06 09:49 PM.

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^^he's scared.lol

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

Aii this is how i feel

MJ1009
This Is Very Good verse i really wasnt lookin for mistakes to tell you were you did wrong but youll look over your verse and see whats missin...................im voting for you bcuz you came harder wit the punchez and meta's and so there

ill.bill
Like you said you dint even try bcuz you wouldve came better than that mees you posted but n e ways i cant say i liked ya verse but i can say work on ya style bcuz that was seriuosly messed up and i Hope you do elevate in the future

*********************************************** The Favor Better Be return or else lol j/k***************
* but plz do im askin as a favor plz do return the favor....peace************************************

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aight uppin lets get dis shit closed 2day ppl

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"Wordz Ahgod has DECLINED this battle on 12-20-06 09:49 PM.

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^^he's scared.lol

uppin 4 some more votes dis shit been up 4 2 long now

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"Wordz Ahgod has DECLINED this battle on 12-20-06 09:49 PM.

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^^he's scared.lol

uppin...damm dis nigga aint even tryin da help me up dis shit how fukkin long does it take da close a battle..lets go ppl

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"Wordz Ahgod has DECLINED this battle on 12-20-06 09:49 PM.

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^^he's scared.lol

Voted For: Ill.Bill

OK MARV STRUCTURE OFF NO GOOD PUNCHES REALLY DISSES LACK AS WELL ONLY GOOD LINE WAS THE WU TANG SHIT PLAYED PUNCHES AND WEAK VOCAB A 3/10
MASK GOOD ASS VOCAB STRUTCURE WAS OK GOOD OPENER PUNCHES WERE AIGHT ALSO AND DISSES HIT WELL AND WERE WELL WORDED AND THAT GOT YOU MY VOTE5/10

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uppin 4 some more votes lets go ppl

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"Wordz Ahgod has DECLINED this battle on 12-20-06 09:49 PM.

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^^he's scared.lol

Voted For: Ill.Bill

mask took this easily....

marv - ur verse was blah cos ur punches were plain n basic nothin really behind them, structure was o.k but even ya flow wasn't great, no complexity n thats why u lost here

mask - lol i loved the opener original n funny, flow was very gud n most of ya lines were original which makes this an easy choice, feel like i've read ur stuff b4 under another name, other than the ill.bill n mask.....hmmm any nice

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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

lmfao damn marv dat last line was da deciding factor nigga...i thought i was gon pick ill til i read dat line nigga...

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me vs. L~S...i think he cheated tho so check wut i posted b4 u read tha posts...



StAcKiN Gs 'n LiGhTiN dat pUrPlE

open mic

uppin 4 some more votes ppl

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^^he's scared.lol

uppin 4 some more votes

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"Wordz Ahgod has DECLINED this battle on 12-20-06 09:49 PM.

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^^he's scared.lol

Voted For: Ill.Bill

Opener- Marv
structure- Mask (much easier to read and understand)
Punchlines- Mask
Multis-Marv (both need work though)
Creativity- Mask
Personals- Mask (Marv u didnt have many personals at all)
Vote- Mask

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