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01-30-05, 07:48 PM
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IP: 0825 899A
Uppin for votes people!
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01-30-05, 09:17 PM
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#17
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My Dick Stay Wet
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IP: 0825 899A
yo vote.....act like its election day...get off ya ass and vote.............
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01-31-05, 03:19 PM
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My Dick Stay Wet
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IP: 0825 899A
yo what the fuck...rv is startin 2 get whack wit da fuckin lack of votin......but ne ways im FUCKIN UPPIN DIS FUCKIN BATTLE
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01-31-05, 04:10 PM
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"Fuck Wit Me, Then You Fuckin Wit Tha Best"
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IP: 42C4 FCEB
Voted For: Judicial
ITE first of all, Judicial.........i voted for you buh you got my vote just by a LITTLE BIt............i vote Ju because of the multis mainly................i fuk wit all da multis in like every line and thats wa got me and shit..........Gutta..............i like da personals and sum of da punches and multis but sum of da punches was weak and i KNOW you coulda came harder because you not wack as a rapper u feel me..............just cum harder next time and i got u.....but im feelin all da multis and sum of da punches by Ju so My vote goes to him.
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01-31-05, 04:13 PM
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I walk & walk over you
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IP: 9977 B167
Thats 2 for my nigga judicial.
*starts breakdancing*
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01-31-05, 05:16 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: 28AD 5545
Thanks I should of came harder Thanks still uppin!
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01-31-05, 05:25 PM
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I walk & walk over you
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IP: 9977 B167
Werd...uppin for my nigga judicial.......holla......................
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02-01-05, 04:07 PM
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My Dick Stay Wet
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IP: 0825 899A
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! im uppin dis motha fuckin...fuckin battle yalll
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02-01-05, 08:35 PM
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My Dick Stay Wet
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IP: 28AD 5545
yo uppin dis battle again....tryin 2 get it over wit just vote please
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02-02-05, 10:05 PM
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My Dick Stay Wet
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IP: 3240 794D
Uuuuuuppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!! !!
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02-08-05, 04:55 PM
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#26
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... I Dont Hate...
I Speak The Truth
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IP: BE6C D041
Voted For: Judicial
Not a great battle here, but obviously Jud takes it.. Gutter- Verse was arite... shows you a noobie tho... Opener was aiite, nothin great, playin off his anme... 2nd line was prolly ya best, nice ryme, 2nd line was kinda played but decent line here...after that it went downhill.. not really any good pucnhes.. u braggin about a Benz? nigga please, keep that shit outta text battles... Last line was aiite, coulda been worded better.. i liked the guess line but like i said, worded different woulda been better.. Overall, work on complexity and punches, and more personals on ya oponent.. also, change ya struc, its fucked up... Judicial- Not a bad verse, not good tho.. opener was arite, but jus seemed like random shit put together, tryna make a multi..keep ya opener with the rest of ya verse.. being it ya first line, we know its ay opener, dont gotta tell us... You had some decent lines, ya last 4 lines was ya best.. didn't like the "godly rap creation" line, self glorification.. like i said, last 4 was aiite, but the grave shit is played... so is the "you still not ill" shit.. i liked ya last line, best line in ya battle... hard hittin punch.. Overall, not bad... focus less on multi's and big words, and come wit harder punches... Overall, jud takes it with harder punches, better structure, and an overall more complex and hard hitting verse... V/ Judicial
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02-08-05, 09:04 PM
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the medicine man
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IP: 888C 2BD4
Voted For: Judicial
see im causin devistation,hurt,pain and elaberation 2 dis kidz mental deformatation, u got no rhyme stabelization buncha big words but no real punch...decent anyway dog wut im really sayin,ur rhymes iz nutttin but lyrical laxitation ima spirtual-.....more like a godly rap-creation wit da evilization of satan,now u persperatin, prayin dat a few pity votes'll get u outta da self-dug grave dat u layin.........ehhhh decent like the 1st line, and the satan line as well.. im polution 2 ya brain,n u still cant spit ill enuf 2get a win afta dis,u'll still b waitin 4 da left column of ur record 2 begin ok decent punch not all that a fucking dog's phecisis./(Dog Shit) I'm from the gutter but you the one who sleeping with rats. I'm in the black skull cap, treat you like an alley cat./ "im and your concept" needs some work...decent bar I'm in the maybach benz but you pushing your bike. And I'm the one who judging you I give you 20 to life./ its not the self glorify thats wack...its the fact dat we know u have no maybach And I aint that nice, but my shit be clean. Thinking you beating me guess again like jeans./ ....noooo thats played since biggie was alive! overall gutter shit was decent but too familiar jud didnt really have punches but was fresher to read vote...jud now peep this http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d.php?p=1947283 |
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02-09-05, 11:55 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: E3CA 7CA2
Voted For: Judicial
gutter. u had a good verse, but i think ur structure fucked that up for u. u need to learn how to count barz, cuase it dont seem like u kno how. but u did have some nice punches in there, but i think u worded them poorly. if u came harder with wordplay, and better rhymes for ur punchs, i think u wouldve got this...elevate on that fam...NO HATE... judicial-i think u took this one cause u came consistent and harder wit punches. but fuck that. YO MULTIES KILLED HIM. yo multies were nice. thats what im learnin to do right now, im focusin on that. but i think u should take that side talent, and gain talent wit ur punches, mettas, and structure if u aint already got it, and mix it all in one, and i garentee u, u will be doper. but this was a nice drop. i was feelin it, and i think u came nice, and i like ur style and originalty... overall-judicial got this one. hands down. no hate, i just think he came a lil harder, n he threw some personals in there, that were nice..i was feelin this, and gutta., just come harder next time... plz RTF on battle link in sig...pick a crew battle if u will...and xplain it, cause too many battles gettin slept on.... thanx ~1~ |
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