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Old 06-19-05, 02:52 PM   #16
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OK CLOSE BATTLE, EC CAME HARD AS FUCK HERE THOUGH, LEMME BREAK IT DOWN:

i'd use you as 'bait', but it's iligal to 'fish' for 'nerds' who cary nines,
you woudn't be hard to 'reel' in cuz of the way u stay 'hooked online',

OK FISHIN N HOOK CONCEPTS ARE KINDA PLAYED BUT YOU PULLED IT OFF HERE IMO, GOOD OPENER.

kids in 'school', like to improve on their 'work', not get it 'drafted',
For you 'elevation' is like puberty... i guess you never 'passed it',

HAHA, NICE WORDPLAY AND PUNCH.

your text is 'hurting', he wants to make it 'big', nothin'll work for that,
i'd hate to tell you this but......... 'steroids' never did work for rap,

YEAH IM FEELIN THE WORDPLAY, NICE PUNCH.

your a pussy, you smell like 'fish', the way u get 'beaten' about,
like greased up food in chip shops, no one ever wants to eat you out,

MEH WHY WOULD SOMEONE EAT HIM OUT IF HE MALE, BUT NICE WPRDPLAY AGAIN.

i'm 'jack'ing your 'family jewls', obviously it's me who's 'running' things,
call this merking with 'royalty', coz 'queens' always bow to 'kings',

NICE PERSONAL PUNCH AND GOOD CLOSER.

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u spit "candy-barz" they easy da eat thru,ima easily defeat you.
whut "E.C" stand 4??...it means he's a sig make in E.ach-C.rew.

HAHAHA NICE PERSONAL, COULD HAVE BEEN WORDED BETTER BUT IT HIT.

my rappin is just nice,he know he cant beat me dis fagget is just hype.
i'll let u "bleed on ya keys" so cops aint gota ask 4 ya "blood-TyPE".

PLAYED CONCEPT BUT MEH, WAS IGHT.

all of a sudden u be focus?,but u was merk'd on ya alias RELOaDED.
beggin soul rebel 4 a spot in t.e for months just recently did he notice.

NOT FEELIN THE PUNCH, WAS PERSONAL BUT DIDNT HIT.

i aint 1 of dem trash vets,niggaz im studio's im pass text..u a fag? yes.
e.c thought da "virgin islands" was a country were "ppl aint have sex".

NICE FLOW DECENT ENUFF PUNCH.

dis fuckin cat is a jerk...rv is just gon laugh at his verse.
u a think his girl "Stole red lobster" w/ all dem "crabs is her skirt".

DECENT WORDPLAY AND CLOSER
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OK, THIS WAS A TITE BATTLE, MARV CAME PRETTY HARD BUT THIS WAS BY FAR THE BEST I SEEN FROM EC, CAME HARD AS FUCK.

MARV YOU HAD SOME DOPE PUNCHES, LIKE YOUR OPENER HAD ME LAUGHIN BUT STILL EC HAD THE MOST CREATIVE PUNCHES AND HARDER HITTING PERSONAL AND HIS WORDPLAY WAS ON FORM.

NO HATE.
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Old 06-19-05, 03:08 PM   #17
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Old 06-19-05, 03:35 PM   #18
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Yo EC Hot drop....u get my vote because:

i'd use you as 'bait', but it's iligal to 'fish' for 'nerds' who cary nines,
you woudn't be hard to 'reel' in cuz of the way u stay 'hooked online',

^^^^^ Sick line, great opener, loved the creativity 5/5

kids in 'school', like to improve on their 'work', not get it 'drafted',
For you 'elevation' is like puberty... i guess you never 'passed it',

^^^^^^
Again got me laughin hot line.....5/5

your text is 'hurting', he wants to make it 'big', nothin'll work for that,
i'd hate to tell you this but......... 'steroids' never did work for rap,
^^^^^^^
Damn man you keep crackin me up....good line 4/5

your a pussy, you smell like 'fish', the way u get 'beaten' about,
like greased up food in chip shops, no one ever wants to eat you out,
^^^^
I understand what you gettin at but not really feelin it 2/5

i'm 'jack'ing your 'family jewls', obviously it's me who's 'running' things,
call this merking with 'royalty', coz 'queens' always bow to 'kings',
^^^
Great creativity.....5/5......

22/25

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u spit "candy-barz" they easy da eat thru,ima easily defeat you.
whut "E.C" stand 4??...it means he's a sig make in E.ach-C.rew.
^^
Liked first line....second wasnt really feelin but nice start 3/5

my rappin is just nice,he know he cant beat me dis fagget is just hype.
i'll let u "bleed on ya keys" so cops aint gota ask 4 ya "blood-TyPE".
^^^
Hahaha....great line 5/5

all of a sudden u be focus?,but u was merk'd on ya alias RELOaDED.
beggin soul rebel 4 a spot in t.e for months just recently did he notice.

^^
haha good personal 5/5

i aint 1 of dem trash vets,niggaz im studio's im pass text..u a fag? yes.
e.c thought da "virgin islands" was a country were "ppl aint have sex".

^^^
Jokes man...but wasnt that funny to get 5..4/5

dis fuckin cat is a jerk...rv is just gon laugh at his verse.
u a think his girl "Stole red lobster" w/ all dem "crabs is her skirt".

^^^
Good creativity...but i feel it was forced...3/5

20/25...RTF on my battle with MADDRAPPER please!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Old 06-19-05, 10:27 PM   #19
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MaRVJay1009 - Good spit man, you had some great wordplay, hard hitten punches and some good personals.

Best Line - u spit "candy-barz" they easy da eat thru,ima easily defeat you.
whut "E.C" stand 4??...it means he's a sig make in E.ach-C.rew.

Worst Line - i aint 1 of dem trash vets,niggaz im studio's im pass text..u a fag? yes.
e.c thought da "virgin islands" was a country were "ppl aint have sex".

E.C - Good spit also, it flowed well also had great wordplay and punches that were landin strong.

Best Line - i'd use you as 'bait', but it's iligal to 'fish' for 'nerds' who cary nines,
you woudn't be hard to 'reel' in cuz of the way u stay 'hooked online',

Worst Line - your a pussy, you smell like 'fish', the way u get 'beaten' about,
like greased up food in chip shops, no one ever wants to eat you out,

OVERALL - Very close battle here, I had to read both verses twice and then rate each of your lines out of 10. Marv came out on top by only 2. He had some stong punches and clever wordplay. E.C you also had good wordplay and strong punches Marv just had more, and his were a little bit stronger. Great battle - no hate.

Vote - MarvJay

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Old 06-20-05, 04:48 AM   #20
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Old 06-20-05, 07:49 AM   #21
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damn lol E.C ur like one of the best of this site seriously...
Dopess lines:
1-kids in 'school', like to improve on their 'work', not get it 'drafted',
For you 'elevation' is like puberty... i guess you never 'passed it',
this was pretty fucking dope lol
2-i'm 'jack'ing your 'family jewls', obviously it's me who's 'running' things,
call this merking with 'royalty', coz 'queens' always bow to 'kings',

this was the line, this was dope as hell

nice structure, no multis, flow is dope,

MaRV: u had more personals, structure was iight,
dopess line:
1-dis fuckin cat is a jerk...rv is just gon laugh at his verse.
u a think his girl "Stole red lobster" w/ all dem "crabs is her skirt".

no flow, no multis, atleas u didnt lost against a noshow haha lol

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Old 06-21-05, 08:07 AM   #22
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lmao i knew this would re-open.....................
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Old 06-21-05, 11:36 AM   #23
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Old 06-21-05, 02:39 PM   #24
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Old 06-21-05, 03:49 PM   #25
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Old 06-22-05, 05:33 AM   #26
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Old 06-22-05, 08:56 AM   #27
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Old 06-22-05, 11:07 AM   #28
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i'd use you as 'bait', but it's iligal to 'fish' for 'nerds' who cary nines,
you woudn't be hard to 'reel' in cuz of the way u stay 'hooked online',
LOL DEf Good Wordplay
kids in 'school', like to improve on their 'work', not get it 'drafted',
For you 'elevation' is like puberty... i guess you never 'passed it',
..Good ...LOL
your text is 'hurting', he wants to make it 'big', nothin'll work for that,
i'd hate to tell you this but......... 'steroids' never did work for rap,
Better LOL and shits Funny To
your a pussy, you smell like 'fish', the way u get 'beaten' about,
like greased up food in chip shops, no one ever wants to eat you out,
...Not Better than The Rest But yet Good
i'm 'jack'ing your 'family jewls', obviously it's me who's 'running' things,
call this merking with 'royalty', coz 'queens' always bow to 'kings',
...Aii....

Overall Man Your Shit was Dope ass Fuck No lie man Your Punchez were on point and Yo Wordplay Was Jus Amazing Its Jus Like you Hade each bar perfectly planned out So Ima Give you my Vote in this battle

Marv
u spit "candy-barz" they easy da eat thru,ima easily defeat you.
whut "E.C" stand 4??...it means he's a sig make in E.ach-C.rew.
,.....Aii...
my rappin is just nice,he know he cant beat me dis fagget is just hype.
i'll let u "bleed on ya keys" so cops aint gota ask 4 ya "blood-TyPE".
...LOl Good wordplay but bad concept
all of a sudden u be focus?,but u was merk'd on ya alias RELOaDED.
beggin soul rebel 4 a spot in t.e for months just recently did he notice.
... that was jus all away from everything you was sayin b4
i aint 1 of dem trash vets,niggaz im studio's im pass text..u a fag? yes.
e.c thought da "virgin islands" was a country were "ppl aint have sex".
...def couldve been way better
dis fuckin cat is a jerk...rv is just gon laugh at his verse.
u a think his girl "Stole red lobster" w/ all dem "crabs is her skirt".
....Better Bar But Again The concept seems stolen...

Overall i think That EC takes this your punchez didnt connect really good and your concpets were played and ETC . all I Can Say is You DidnT do Well
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Old 06-22-05, 01:45 PM   #29
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Old 06-23-05, 05:24 AM   #30
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