RapVerse.com Community
 Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End RV Radio  

Go Back   RapVerse.com Community > The Cage > Battle Archives > Front Lines Battles
User Name
Password
FAQ Calendar Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

 
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
Old 07-08-05, 01:23 AM   #16
Restricted
DaTrus Is A Bitch!
 
Restricted's Avatar
 
Posts: 3,774
Joined: Feb 2004
From: Pittsburgh, PA
Status: Offline
Text Record: 59-10
Audio Record: 1-1
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: D52C 04A2



Uppin This Like 10 Year Olds Watching Porn

~R~
 
Old 07-08-05, 11:40 AM   #17
Restricted
DaTrus Is A Bitch!
 
Restricted's Avatar
 
Posts: 3,774
Joined: Feb 2004
From: Pittsburgh, PA
Status: Offline
Text Record: 59-10
Audio Record: 1-1
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: D52C 04A2



Uppin This Like Tekneek Watching Gay Porn

~R~
 
Old 07-09-05, 12:10 PM   #18
Restricted
DaTrus Is A Bitch!
 
Restricted's Avatar
 
Posts: 3,774
Joined: Feb 2004
From: Pittsburgh, PA
Status: Offline
Text Record: 59-10
Audio Record: 1-1
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: 4EBF 2570



Uppin This Like Tekneek Watching Gay Porn

~R~
 
Old 07-09-05, 12:36 PM   #19
C-Hood
Light Weight
 
C-Hood's Avatar
 
Posts: 240
Joined: Dec 2004
From: B-Town
Status: Offline
Text Record: 8-7
IP: 0825 899A

Voted For: Tekneek

This Kid Reminds Me of A Commercial Disclaimer..How This Fakes Been Caught..
Cause You Couldn't Make An Impact With Your Verse If You Changed The Font..
haha nice
In This Battle You're Beat but If This Was A Costume Contest You Woulda Won..
Because You Next To Wackness....Is The Defining Moment of Exactness Son..
ok
This Kid Reminds Me Of G-Unit....How This Kid Comes Without Game..
How He Gonna Beat Me Lyrically?..When This Cat Mispells His Own Name..
first line was nice...second was ok
Like Cheap Car Owners...When Despretly In Need He Refuses To Re-Tire..
And If This Was A Game..Seriously...In Levels I'm Thirty-Three Higher..
real nice..first line was nice
In This Mission..You Have No Back-Up...So Its About Time To Abort..
Cause Those Maxi-Pads Are The Only Time This Pussy Recieves Support..
nice closer


Breakdown-this was a pretty good verse...your punches seemed to hit nice...they could have been a lil harder though...not much complexity but your punches and personals took up for the lost space....overal 7.5/10



Ya Skill's Thin Mine's Brim Filled...S'why's This Battle I Will Win.
Amma Kill Him Coz I Know His Verse Suck's "B.I.G". Like Lil Kim.
wow...nice
This Aint a Contest, ..I'll Take This Victory With Little Ease.
Chk.. His Alias Is "Restricted".. Stands For His Rhyme Abillity.
haha nice
where'as im the toatal opposite ...ma tekneeks dope,
your shit's so boring it even makes my computer go'to sleep mode.
ok.....fell off a lil
jus like your gurl dog your not hot at all.
fucking hell.... The way I'm on fire....... I should stop drop and roll.
ok
your punches hit like bitch slaps ... mine are Way Greater.
you could be to lift light farm machinery & still not throw a haymaker.
nice closer


Breakdown-this verse was also nice...your seemed to hit a lil harder then r-rateds...but one thing was the sleep mode line didn't really go well wit the rest of your verse...because all of the other bars we on a higher level then you just came up wit some SHIT..but nice verse...overal 8/10

note---this battle was extremly close...wasnt easy to vote
__________________


Who made my Sig- Shief BITCH!
 
Old 07-10-05, 10:04 PM   #20
K-Trin
Banned: Cheating
 
K-Trin's Avatar
 
Posts: 2,278
Joined: Apr 2004
Status: Offline
IP: A582 B759

Voted For: R-Rated

This Kid Reminds Me of A Commercial Disclaimer..How This Fakes Been Caught..
Cause You Couldn't Make An Impact With Your Verse If You Changed The Font..
^^OK......not that hard though...5/10
In This Battle You're Beat but If This Was A Costume Contest You Woulda Won..
Because You Next To Wackness....Is The Defining Moment of Exactness Son..
^^^OK....5/10
This Kid Reminds Me Of G-Unit....How This Kid Comes Without Game..
How He Gonna Beat Me Lyrically?..When This Cat Mispells His Own Name..
^^Nice......7/10
Like Cheap Car Owners...When Despretly In Need He Refuses To Re-Tire..
And If This Was A Game..Seriously...In Levels I'm Thirty-Three Higher..
^^1st line was fire....7/10
In This Mission..You Have No Back-Up...So Its About Time To Abort..
Cause Those Maxi-Pads Are The Only Time This Pussy Recieves Support..
^^period/maxipad shit is played.....6/10

U had some good punches.Most of the concepts were original.But that last line ruined it.Even the newbs be using period/maxi pad lines.It's played.But it was a good verse.

Ya Skill's Thin Mine's Brim Filled...S'why's This Battle I Will Win.
Amma Kill Him Coz I Know His Verse Suck's "B.I.G". Like Lil Kim.
^^Good.....6/10
This Aint a Contest, ..I'll Take This Victory With Little Ease.
Chk.. His Alias Is "Restricted".. Stands For His Rhyme Abillity.
^^Lmao......Dope....8/10
where'as im the toatal opposite ...ma tekneeks dope,
your shit's so boring it even makes my computer go'to sleep mode.
^^NO.......self glorified....2/10
jus like your gurl dog your not hot at all.
fucking hell.... The way I'm on fire....... I should stop drop and roll.
^^NO.........3/10
your punches hit like bitch slaps ... mine are Way Greater.
you could be to lift light farm machinery & still not throw a haymaker
^^Too uncreative.......4/10

Damn son.After the first 2 bars I thought you had him.But the rest of ur verse suked.That restricted line was Dope.But then you self glorified and spit some weak punches.R-rated got lucky here cause ur verse faded after the first 2 bars.

Vote-R-Rated
Send a message via AIM to K-Trin  
Old 07-10-05, 11:21 PM   #21
Restricted
DaTrus Is A Bitch!
 
Restricted's Avatar
 
Posts: 3,774
Joined: Feb 2004
From: Pittsburgh, PA
Status: Offline
Text Record: 59-10
Audio Record: 1-1
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: 4EBF 2570

^The Restricted Line Is Played..Look Through All 62 of My Battles and You'll See That Bar LoL

~R~
 
Old 07-10-05, 11:23 PM   #22
K-Trin
Banned: Cheating
 
K-Trin's Avatar
 
Posts: 2,278
Joined: Apr 2004
Status: Offline
IP: A582 B759

Quote:
Originally Posted by R-Rated
^The Restricted Line Is Played..Look Through All 62 of My Battles and You'll See That Bar LoL

~R~



OOh well my fault....it's new to me.....gotta vote in my opinion here.If the bar new to me....then it new.But I gave ya the vote anyways.
Send a message via AIM to K-Trin  
Old 07-10-05, 11:34 PM   #23
ol'dirtymexican
Flyweight
 
ol'dirtymexican's Avatar
 
Posts: 123
Joined: Dec 2004
From: b-more
Status: Offline
IP: 1D2E C954

Voted For: R-Rated

Ya Skill's Thin Mine's Brim Filled...S'why's This Battle I Will Win.
Amma Kill Him Coz I Know His Verse Suck's "B.I.G". Like Lil Kim.
^^tight punch but not 2 good a flow

This Aint a Contest, ..I'll Take This Victory With Little Ease.
Chk.. His Alias Is "Restricted".. Stands For His Rhyme Abillity.^^better flo but it aint make sence

where'as im the toatal opposite ...ma tekneeks dope,
your shit's so boring it even makes my computer go'to sleep mode.
^^dumb ass punch

jus like your gurl dog your not hot at all.
fucking hell.... The way I'm on fire....... I should stop drop and roll.
^^lol...dat shit wuz good all around

your punches hit like bitch slaps ... mine are Way Greater.
you could be to lift light farm machinery & still not throw a haymaker.
^^i don kno wut 2 say bout dat cuz i aint git it



R- rated definately had tha best lines all around but wut really made me vote 4 him wuz tha..."In This Mission..You Have No Back-Up...So Its About Time To Abort..
Cause Those Maxi-Pads Are The Only Time This Pussy Recieves Support.."
Send a message via AIM to ol'dirtymexican  
Old 07-11-05, 07:56 PM   #24
.Barz Of Steel.
Don't Even Think About It
 
.Barz Of Steel.'s Avatar
 
Posts: 3,714
Joined: May 2005
Status: Offline
Text Record: 19-2
This was feedback posted for R-Rated

IP: 1CA5 73AB

R Got it...

Tekneek, you had too much self glorification goin on fam

Cant vote, but thats my opinion
__________________
Quote:
Originally Posted by Drakel
my feminine side is a lesbian



Send a message via AIM to .Barz Of Steel.  
Old 07-12-05, 08:44 PM   #25
(X)eed
(X) CeEding all Expectations
 
(X)eed's Avatar
 
Posts: 829
Joined: Oct 2004
From: New Zealand
Status: Offline
Text Record: 11-18
IP: 5A50 DAC7

Voted For: R-Rated

straight up..... R gets this....lmfao...
This Kid Reminds Me of A Commercial Disclaimer..How This Fakes Been Caught..
Cause You Couldn't Make An Impact With Your Verse If You Changed The Font..
^^^^^^ haahhhh ahaha good werd play here R.

This Kid Reminds Me Of G-Unit....How This Kid Comes Without Game..
How He Gonna Beat Me Lyrically?..When This Cat Mispells His Own Name..
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ahahhaah good stuff here again ahha lmfao.... good punches soo far
In This Mission..You Have No Back-Up...So Its About Time To Abort..
Cause Those Maxi-Pads Are The Only Time This Pussy Recieves Support..
^^^^^^^^ haha good kloze... good stuff had punches flow and good structure......

Techneek... well u laid good punches... but not as haard
he had better punches...which owned u here... no offence...
u had good flow and construction on ur verse... but R takes this out wit ease

^^^^^^^^^ return the favour in my battle below..... aiiight ..... peace
__________________
LOYAL TO THE GAME IN ANY WEATHER



(X)CeeD





 
 


Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is Off
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump



All times are GMT -4. The time now is 09:43 AM.

Powered by vBulletin.
Copyright © 2000-2004 Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.