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12-08-05, 11:27 PM | #16 | |||||||
Is F'in Bored
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IP: 0BFD F3C2
upp9in, uppin uppn uppin till i get 50 characters.
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12-27-05, 01:04 AM | #17 | |||||||
Is F'in Bored
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IP: 0BFD F3C2
uppin...............though i already know nobody's gonna vote, i'm just gonna pm strobe and have him vote...
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My SpellBook Fuck being creative, you guys have certainly given up on it
GET DOPER Knowledge is Power, Stop being Weak The Legend of Blackmage Featuring such heads as...Tha Q, 9th degree, Enygma,The green team, Big J and probably you! SO DON'T SLEEP!Coming soon to a soundclick near you...
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01-11-06, 01:39 AM | #18 | |||||
tooth tiger
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
Voted For: Blackmage
v/blackmage gkillaz, your stuff was played, not really creative, and lacked enjoyment, because basically you just try and focus on rhyming, and that's only cool in audio, text, you need to be more creative, if you try and elevate, you could be dope at punchlines, but you focus too much on basic shit, like i said, it might be better audio, but not text....blackmage, not bad, it was kinda weak, just basically poiting out obvious shit and saying it, not really personals, nothing special anyways, opener was cool, but you can still elevate, keep up, this woulda probly been cool audio too rtf on this with an explained vote please http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=219121 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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01-11-06, 03:02 PM | #19 | |||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: F1FC 4749
Voted For: Blackmage
i have to say blackmage took this, his punches were nice and he did have wordplay, although some was forced and that sam adams think was pointless. but i did think his shit was funnier.... |
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01-11-06, 05:01 PM | #20 | |||||||
Is F'in Bored
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IP: 2999 B72A
Rtf on both when i get off work...................................
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My SpellBook Fuck being creative, you guys have certainly given up on it
GET DOPER Knowledge is Power, Stop being Weak The Legend of Blackmage Featuring such heads as...Tha Q, 9th degree, Enygma,The green team, Big J and probably you! SO DON'T SLEEP!Coming soon to a soundclick near you...
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02-08-06, 05:44 PM | #21 | |||||||
Middle Weight
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IP: 215F 8CED
Voted For: Blackmage
Honestly this wasn't as good a battle as I expected given how much shit talking I've seen from both of you voting in other threads... with that being said Gkillahz had the superior structure, resulting flow, and cadance... but he didn't throw too many hard punches... And very lil was actually directed at Mage... now Mage's opener was creative, but didn't land a punch... who cares if G is a son of sam adams? Mage didn't throw any good punches till "your no killa, you couldn't be an accessory to suicide" still when he did throw punches they were more original that Killahz... "Blackmage what a whack fag with his dopeless skill... Could pre-write for a month verse be hopeless still... I checked out his soundclick, all I found was shit.." every concept in that is played... "Its imposible for black to flow like blocked vent... Dick must be in a knot, cuz his flow is all crooked... ^ that's more played concepts *smh @ the book line* that would hit hard in an audio battle... but this is a text battle... so the punch just doesn't land... "Brains fried like an egg, I start flippin' the script... Only time you spit hard on the mic is when grippin' it..." These are all played concepts as well, with no new twists... Opener: Killahz (may be played but at least he threw a punch) Closer: Mage's last line got a lil chuckle outta me Punches: Mage (you both coulda came harder but Mage wasn't nearly as played) Personals: Mage just talked about Killah more... killahz only real personal was the Document line which coulda been thrown much harder) Structure: GKillahz Creativity: Mage (once again G's concepts were played) Enjoyment: Mage Vote: Mage Vote: Mage
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02-08-06, 06:27 PM | #22 | ||||
what dat be...
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IP: 5021 8C8D
Voted For: GKillaz05
gkilla u came out harder and u got the victory for it ur lines were better and ur flow was tight personals u won too black u didnt seem like u came out hard but u did have some good rymes there ill give u that but gkilla won it easy no hate rtf to one of my battles |
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02-23-06, 10:01 PM | #23 | |||||||
Killin' G'z
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IP: 78FD 4F15
Uppin............................................. .
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02-23-06, 10:25 PM | #24 | |||||||
Oye...Tu Sabes..!!
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This was feedback posted for Blackmage
IP: F1FC 4749
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02-26-06, 02:29 PM | #25 | |||||||
Killin' G'z
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IP: 531B DFA7
uppin............................................. .........
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03-26-06, 08:55 PM | #26 | |||||||
Killin' G'z
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IP: DD56 0613
uppin............................................. ...........
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03-26-06, 10:24 PM | #27 | ||||
B.I.G.
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IP: 7A88 4EE4
Voted For: Blackmage
Ok this was a very tight battle but this explains my vote Flow (Structure): .......................... The flow of both was perfect, there is a bar on blackmage's verse that jus seems a lil strange but nothing outta normal Punchlines (Hits): ........................... very matched punches but by reading both verses several times I noticed that blackmage hitted him harder on more like personal punchlines, which they helped him get my vote Wordplay (vocab): ............................ GKilla had this, a better wordplay and better vocab... It seems like he been here a long time to remember Dacument (I loved that line)... or is he back?? hmmmm don't hate plz.... am jus votin
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03-27-06, 08:10 PM | #28 | |||||||
Killin' G'z
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IP: B397 C96F
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04-17-06, 12:20 PM | #29 | |||||||
Killin' G'z
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IP: 82CF 3904
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04-23-06, 08:33 PM | #30 | |||||||
I can rap and stuff.
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IP: 94A2 DED2
Voted For: Blackmage
Eh, this shit was close. G had more punches that were actually close to ok, but black was more umm, consistent. Black, you first punch was forced like a motha fucka, don't ever stretch that hard just for one hit, cuz it's never that strong anyways. The name in your sig line was pretty good though. G, you gotta flip your shit a little more when you punch. I noticed that you had concepts, but they weren't flipped well and were just kind of ......there instead of contributing to the punch. For example: Lyrical Assassin?.. nah, kid got KO'd by a DaCument... Its imposible for black to flow like blocked vent.. It's like, "Yeah, ok, he can't flow, like a blocked vent, and?". Ojnce you learn how to flip shit better, you'll be better. Until then... V - Blackmage
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