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Old 09-19-04, 06:08 PM   #31
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Old 09-19-04, 06:19 PM   #32
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This was feedback posted for Street Legend

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My lyrical wrath is catastropic, deep inside you envee me
suspciously, i dont think you can beat me dependently
blah, ok opener 6/10
you gonna be embarresed after this lose fallin in pits
ya kindergarden lyrics portrays that ya got noncomposmentis
lol not bad 7.5/10
i think you was born to infuriate, niggas annoyed wit ya post
this fruit is "sweet" in simplest terms he's infested wit "glucose"
like the wordplay here, punch hit 9/10
empire has been flagellated, unbeaten record put in the cementary
we can tell by ya strange attire that you are eleemosynary(supported by charity)
ok not bad, 7.5/10
you to confident ya cocky but Rv knows ya average kid
Ima "collapse this empire" like he was "Roman" even vets say that ima cataylist
decent closer 7/10

overall 37/50

Try to 'ride' but when 'mindz kollide' i collapse active brain waves
Flow 'mastered' listen 'bastard' as i rap and collapse ya mainframe
good wordplay no punch here tho 4/10
Not 'hot' occupation the 'block' man why you dont stop fronting
You 'weak' yous a 'legend in the street' at dick riding and cock sucking lol nice personel 8/10
No 'struggling' claim you 'hustling' on the block moving that crack work
But yous a 'joke' real hustlers woulnt even be 'broke' on rap verse
Oh DAMN 8/10 good personell
Must be 'slow' this 'ho' just force me to smash and whore um
You 'ass' whole crew 'trash' thats why you last in the forum
blah not feelin it 5/10

overall 35/50

Street wins sry.........
 
Old 09-19-04, 08:47 PM   #33
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Voted For: Street Legend

Try to 'ride' but when 'mindz kollide' i collapse active brain waves(1)
Flow 'mastered' listen 'bastard' as i rap and collapse ya mainframe
^^^^^^^^^^^ o aight dis an killa opener nice mayne

Not 'hot' occupation the 'block' man why you dont stop fronting(2)
You 'weak' yous a 'legend in the street' at dick riding and cock sucking
^^^^^^^^^ nice mayne good punch and wordplay

No 'struggling' claim you 'hustling' on the block moving that crack work(4)
But yous a 'joke' real hustlers woulnt even be 'broke' on rap verse(4)
Must be 'slow' this 'ho' just force me to smash and whore um
You 'ass' whole crew 'trash' thats why you last in the forum(5)
^^^^^^^^^ aight mayne u had flow and punches and personals nice mayne

9/10



My lyrical wrath is catastropic, deep inside you envee me
suspciously, i dont think you can beat me dependently
^^^^^^^^^ ha nice opener i had to look up in da dictionary to know what da words mean lol

you gonna be embarresed after this lose fallin in pits
ya kindergarden lyrics portrays that ya got noncomposmentis
i think you was born to infuriate, niggas annoyed wit ya post
this fruit is "sweet" in simplest terms he's infested wit "glucose"
^^^^^^^^^^^ yo nice wordplay and punch and flow omg dis an sik shit right der


empire has been flagellated, unbeaten record put in the cementary
we can tell by ya strange attire that you are eleemosynary(supported by charity)
you to confident ya cocky but Rv knows ya average kid
Ima "collapse this empire" like he was "Roman" even vets say that ima cataylist
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ o aight mayne u had good flow and punches (harder)

CLOSE SHIT RIGHT HERE BOTH OF YALL GOT SKILLZ~!



yo i gots to give dis to street legend he came harder punches (edge)

yo empire u got skillz homie sik shit mayne punches and personal

but da punches didnt hit harder dan street legend//

yo street legend keep it up mayne,,,,,,u had flow and harder punches

my vote goes to street legend becuz of harder flowz and punches

empire u wasnt wack nor anything u had good sik shit,,,,, but street came harder wit dem punches

~peace~ no beef
 
 


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