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Old 11-20-04, 05:05 PM   #31
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Voted For: Inception

WOW!!! ...this was actually a nice battle, and it had me think 4 a while bout who i should vote for...so i gotta break it down
troop-u had a nice drop, ur intro was clean, but didnt stick to tha ribs like i should..if worded diff., probbly wouldve been killer 5/10...yo 2nd bar was clean...i was lovin it, a hard punch, and very creative 6/10...3rd bar, was tha highlight for me..."narcaleptics reading books", nice vocab, and nice rhymin pattern for that, flawless bar 8.7/10...but i dont know if tha 4th bar was connected or what, that took some points away, becus u fell off w/ur structure...but "smothering AI like middle weights in infant hoodies..." nice drop, and a nice closer...8/10... for tha overall verse i would rate it 7/10...u had some nice personals in there too, if i didnt already mention

inception-at 1st i wasnt understandin yo opener, but i liked tha creativie w/ it, and u changed yo style, and good drop, and a hard punch that gave u tha win for tha opener-7/10
yo 2nd bar was clean...it was worded wrongly to me, and i think u should really type correctly,cause all that mess fucked up ur punch, but i understood it okay. tha "steal franchise spotlight like a yao ming dunk.." was clean, and creative ...-6/10
yo 3rd bar was yo highlight bar in this whole verse, it was clean..perfect..worded correctly, and flawless to me...i love that one...it was a real jaw dropper ...nuthin more to say about that then good shyt...9/10
yo 4th bar was a good closer, nicely worded, but structured bad...it was by far a nice hard punch tho...good shyt..7/10
overall rating...7.5/10


OVERALL
this was clean, but inception took this one by a hair, becus he had more multies and harder punches thru-out the majority of his verse...good drop both yall...but there can only be one winner...it was a hard decision for me...sry troop, u still got mad skills


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Old 11-20-04, 06:00 PM   #32
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finally the only honest vote this clown has gotten
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Old 11-20-04, 06:16 PM   #33
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just checkin the polls for my boy troop...........
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Old 11-20-04, 08:47 PM   #34
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checking out .......................
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Old 11-21-04, 05:27 PM   #35
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good least u admit that i won u bitch ass nigga

u get rode like a fuckin hoopty in the hood
 
Old 11-21-04, 05:39 PM   #36
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Old 11-21-04, 10:45 PM   #37
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Old 11-21-04, 11:31 PM   #38
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Old 11-23-04, 02:01 AM   #39
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vote an gimme my win niggaz................................
 
Old 11-23-04, 04:37 AM   #40
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Your not goin 2 win

U and Looch didnt deserve votes

but u kno who comes out on top in the outcome

Bitch.............
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Old 11-23-04, 10:06 PM   #41
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nigga u suck nigga changez 1 letter to rhyme lmaoooooooooo

i smashed u only ya boiz givin u votez u fuckin ho azz nigga
 
Old 11-25-04, 12:12 PM   #42
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Its online dont have any boys lol
stupid fuck

Now uppin 4 this cats loss
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Old 11-25-04, 11:48 PM   #43
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Old 11-27-04, 01:46 AM   #44
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omg some one vote on this shit 4 real
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Old 11-27-04, 03:54 PM   #45
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bump bump bump....
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