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05-07-05, 06:06 PM | #31 | |||||||
Banned: Biting
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IP: 2C14 4929
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05-11-05, 09:59 AM | #32 | |||||||
Banned: Biting
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IP: 3631 0E72
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05-11-05, 09:55 PM | #33 | |||||||
Banned: Biting
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IP: 3631 0E72
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05-12-05, 08:16 AM | #34 | |||||||
Banned: Biting
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IP: 3631 0E72
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05-12-05, 12:56 PM | #35 | |||||||
Banned: Biting
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IP: 3631 0E72
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05-13-05, 10:08 AM | #36 | |||||||
Banned: Biting
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IP: 3631 0E72
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05-13-05, 10:09 AM | #37 | |||||
Banned: Biting
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IP: 9CB2 0FC1
Voted For: Yung Wun
both suck..peace....................................... ..... |
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05-15-05, 09:41 PM | #38 | ||||||
New to RV
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This was feedback posted for R Stylez
IP: 08F4 AD30
your shit wasnt bad, your little punchlines werent bad either....
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05-17-05, 08:28 AM | #39 | |||||||
Banned: Biting
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IP: 3631 0E72
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05-23-05, 10:45 PM | #40 | |||||||
Banned: Biting
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IP: 7798 BB19
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06-08-05, 11:17 AM | #41 | |||||
Banned: Biting
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IP: 0825 899A
Voted For: Yung Wun
Aii Ima nOt Gonna Breakdown Every Bar of Each Persons Verse Like I Usaully Do But Heres What I Think Wayne You Hade some serious Punchez Excepting The fact that your structure made it harder to follow your flow I Think That you still did Good I really dint Have a Fav bar from On Your side bcuz they all really made me Go ......damn LOL......so i really couldnt Choose so Thats why i Think That You Take this battle bcuz you came with some consistent punchez and they hit harder than Rstylez LOL So Basically thats why You get My Vote R stylez Aii mayne I notice that you Have a correct structure which is good excepting the fact that you dont have any hard hitting punchez which will effect anyone But You really didnt have any hard hitting pucnhez that made me want to go and say ....Oh ima vote for Rstyles///..;.....bcuz your shit wasnt all dat mayne no hate thats jus how i feel so ...im jus doin my job as a voter and statin where you need to el;evate so I couldnt give you my vote but you should go somewhere and try to elevate ASAP RTF In any Battle link in my sig HONESTLY |
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06-08-05, 12:47 PM | #42 | |||||||
Banned: Biting
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IP: 3631 0E72
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06-09-05, 09:13 AM | #43 | ||||
leave you rest'n pz's
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IP: 2F8C EBE2
Voted For: Yung Wun
all dis nigga wanna do is "piss" but his lyrics are "shit" so what are u? r.kelly?..cuz 80% of dis site is kids* ^^wasnt feeling it......to basic excuse ya back?..how can u if u lookin towards tha front oops..my bad, u aint wack..u jus a bleedin cunt** ^^not feeling this either...srry man jus to basic bastard ass guy offerin a mill as a prize to win a battle but i dont want it cuz it aint enuff for ya net life to be dismantled*** ^^ok,...... i bet u looked at my posts..got a notebook and grabbed a pen but ya prewritten flows wont get u no where cuz u got exposed afta i checked in**** ^^lol,.........ok dis battle is simple..jus lace up a line and a punch to get a bar and when people read ya shit they'll realize theres harder "punches" at "teen bars"***** ^^decent what would ya momma say if she found out dat u was secretly rue paul dressin in drag..has been username and all****** ^^ok,...... i'll stop dis verse right here..probably off tha scale but whateva if ya mouth is as big as ya bladder u could have tha most money eva******* ^^eh, weak closer. . . I Step To The Podium; For My Openin-Statement, I'll Say I'm Potent-Wit-Great-Grips, So I'm Chokin-This-Fake-Bitch/ ^self glory..... Who's OutSpoken-With-Haste,-Which Earns A Token-For-Face-Lifts...And'll Leave Ya Fuckin Stomach Smokin-From-Eight-Clips!/ ^^not really a punch I'm The Pure Essence Of Talent; I Don't See A Speck-In-Ya-Rhymes, styles Should "Hook Up Wit A Clock" Just To "Get-Wit-The-Times"/ ^^time/clocks..very played concept Here's A Lesson-Of-Mine, Dawg, I'm The Best-Wit-The-Lines...You Aint Got The "Big Guns Like P.Diddy" So You Ain't "Set-Up-To-Shine"!/ ^^man stop with the im/my/its all self glory I've Heard The Speeches-of-Several, My Heat-Is-Incredible, Faggots Put Up Their Defenses, The Breaches-Are-Plentiful/ ^^this was better except for the "my heat is incredible" Whenever Rappers Comin At Me; They Get Sprayed-Wit-A-Round, I Don't Mean "Sex On The Floor" But You'll Get "Laid-On-The-Ground"/ ^^decent I'm A "Hunter" Wit Mad "Game"; Ya Got Ya "Neck Sliced-"In-This-Brawl, So I'm Thinkin "This Bear's Head'll Look Nice-On-My-Wall!"/damn ^^^ok, but im not seeing the relevency to your opponent HeAt Up Dude... I'm Lyrical-Wit-Sick-Spits, This Basic Member Sparks-Leavin-Gays-Phased! It's A "Miracle"!-This-Kid's-"Whipped"! And I Ain't Talkin-Bout-"Mayonnaise"!/ ^^ok,........ I Put This Herb-In-His-Place, For Him Defeat's-A-Must! I'm Way Ahead Of You, I'll "Throw Dirt-In-Ya-Face" So "Eat-My-Dust!"/ ^^ok It's So Dumb-To-Challenge-Me, I'm A Veteran,-azz! Ya Too Stunned-Of-Talent-G! You Ain't Even Better-Than-Half!/ ^^decent. . your biggest downfall was self glorification everywhere in your verse, your not focusin on your opponent enough, but other then that you have good lyrical abilities but try n not cap ya letters cuz it stretches ya verse out n makes it look sloppy/stay away from played concept n you'll be fine...
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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06-09-05, 09:32 AM | #44 | |||||||
Banned: Biting
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IP: 3631 0E72
thanx uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp pppppin
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06-09-05, 04:34 PM | #45 | |||
Poet's Daughter.
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IP: 6061 4B9A
Voted For: Yung Wun
R STYLEZ- Alright man you had some played punches in your verse, you had personals which was great, but you should've word your lines more correctly to make it a effective punch. It was all tooooo basic punches and personal but no wordplays no meta'z.....This was overall a weak verse R STYLEZ... Wayne- Meh nothing special in your verse, you had wordplays, punches was meh good and few of them played out. You need to elevate on structure man, the lines are too stretch. And elevate on punches mane, you had str8 wordplays but few LESS few were punches. Overall=I vote for wayne because he came harder, with the wordplays...BOTH had weak punches...So i voted on wordplays....But Wayne had a punch attempt while R stylez punches was played out making his whole verse and bar's weak.... Vote/ Wayne..1
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