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Voted For: morse code

V/Morse Code.....this was a good battle but Morse came wit it for real this punchs mix wit personals an vocab also good structure that gave him my vote....Magik u had a good verse but sum ur punchs were played i seen better from u u seemed like u came to lightly u had good structure not many good personals........NO Hate......
RETURN THE FAVOR
Opener=mc
Closer=mc
Punchs=mc
Structure=tie
Personals=mc
Wordplay=mc
Multi's=Tie
Vocab=mc
Overall=Morse Code....

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Voted For: BLACK~MAGIK

wutever skill level you at, im two times better that
ya reppin the arch, then im the m on a mickey dees bag
^^decent opener, but not hard hitting...5/10
even if my punches were average, you'd be that little orange fish *1
ill throw rocks at your house, and leave your door witta sore-henge
^^nice scheme but punch was weak..5/10
your a chicken AND a fag....you stay fighting with them cocks
have you hiding behind the counter, like viagra, in children shops
^^viagra in children shops?...hmm, lol,,,6/10
im owning this ho, like putting a sold, sign on a golf course
remember microcker, he had the same DNA as yours
^^set up was koo, but you messed up the punch...4/10
im constantly stealing your spotlight, like flashlight thieves
matter fact, it left you in the black, magik,vanish pleeze
^^decent closer, nameplay was ok, 6/10
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26/50
overall you had some decent concepts but need to work on makin your punches hit, none of them really connected well
its like you focused to much on complexity n forgot to diss your opponent...no real good personals either....
try to focus your verse more on your opponent next time
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This kid is weak........you 6-0? shit, watch me end his streak
Try and stop me, get thrown "in a box" like "hockey penalties"
^^way forced ryhme scheme...5/10
I'll cave your face in, and if you doubt my game's amazing
I'll fuckin' "eat you dogg"............. but I "aint no asian" *
^^well worded, punch connected...7/10
You schoolin' this vet, won't happen like you rulin' at text
How you hard when you're 14 and haven't hit puberty yet? **
^^played concept(this punch is in the rv tutorials)4/10
This fag is nothin, real emcees can see past his bluffin'
And he's 6-0, because he calls my home, and asks for punches***
^^nice personal(if its true).....7/10
Just face it, you're weak kid, I'll leave your face in the cement
.........This fake "couldn't be sick" if he caught "fatal diseases"
^^weak closer but still ok, 5/10
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28/50
overall you were more consistent, creativity needs work but
you had 2 punches that hit well n won this battle for ya.
up your vocab n complexity, you also lost marks for having a very forced ryhme scheme on a couple bars...no hate
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close battle to both........RTF IN THE SIG

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!

Voted For: BLACK~MAGIK

Aight
not the strongest battle here yall

Morse:
flow was a little weak in places, wasnt feeling your punches neither, few decent metas, an the wordplay was okay...closer was pretty decent, but the line golk line was horrible lol

Black:
decenbt verse, personals were on point, flow was good, the wording of the verse was decent so it made the verse just go with the flow...punchlines were good, i thought the asian line was weak tho...wasnt feelin that line at all, on the hole for more effort, ,creativity an better punches...black gets my vote

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=186647
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theres the link, could yall RTF

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Uppin thru the fuckin roof...bitches

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Voted For: BLACK~MAGIK

ok returning the favor since morse code voted in one of my battles.......ok morse good structure and flow here good vocab too but your punches and personals werent really good they lacked not wack but far from dope some didnt even seem to rhyme while black omg you had dope ass personals iill eat you dog hahahaha oh that was dope good ass punches and disses also dope all over good structure and personals as well as vocab dope overall drop here black got this......

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LMAO at you getting all these votes removed...They were explained fine...But whatever...uppin this shit to the fuckin roof...Let's get this shit closed...

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i only had one removed homie, but then strobe came in here and removed more, cuz if u look he removed summa mine too, so......but anyway, uppin

O iight then...But from now on, lets neither of us get any more votes deleted unless they are absolutely 100% bullshit...Cuz this shit has been open too long iight?

Uppin to the fuckin roof!!

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uppin this fucker...

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Someone fuckin vote! Let's get this shit closed...Uppin to the fuckin roof!!!

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