This was actually a good battle, but OSB gets my verse because he had harder hitting disses, better wordplay, more creativitie and an entertaining verse.

Rev-Your verse was nice, but the lack of entertainment threw it off for me...You had some nice lil disses and punches in there as well as good wordplay, but your verse seemed boring to me, thats why I'm not giving you my vote. I say, keep doin what your doing, just had more hype to it.

OSB- You had a good verse. You didn't really catch my attention early, which is a negative...(your first opening bar should be tha one to get my attention), but you made up for that in tha middle of your verse throughout tha end. U get my vote because you had funny, entertaining lyrics, and like I said...creatitivie...nice wordplay and nice hard hitting punched. Ur disses were better and you came out with an overall better verse. Keep it up.

Overall-No hatin on anyone...both verses were nice, but I feel OSB just came a lil harder because his verse was more entertaining.


"But you still can't see one step............ beyond your belly" <Because of lines like that...not hard to understand...dont hafto think about it for a million years and it gets right down to tha point, and make you laugh.

Even lines like this: "But can't make any 'one yell oh' if they were colorin' numbers," < thats what I mean by word play...tha way you make tha reader think, put some creative effort into it, and makes us laugh...


Nice clean battle....

V/OSB


Oh, I cant vote...sry...I'll see if my other account got 500 on it...

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shit........dat was cold
Pun intended... I'm gonna end it... You're comin' for hunger,
But can't make any 'one yell oh' if they were colorin' numbers,
dis line was sik

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the revelation's verse sucked monkey ass..........

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