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Old 01-07-05, 03:17 PM   #46
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Old 01-08-05, 01:32 PM   #47
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Old 01-09-05, 04:43 PM   #48
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Old 01-09-05, 04:48 PM   #49
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Voted For: WeeDex

winner- the dex

flow-the dex
punches-the dex(just cuz his was longer)
multies-none really

both of yall verses were aight, keep it up

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Old 01-09-05, 05:01 PM   #50
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well this wasnt too great of a battle but.............

ill logic.......work on your structure...it wasnt too great
your vocab was nice...
good wordplay in the 2nd bar
good personal in first bar
3rd bar 2nd line was kinda self glory so that wasnt working too good
overall i thought u should have made it a few bars longer to seal the deal on the win...but in my opinion you got this on complexity....and just overall a better verse

dex.........................
i just thought that your whole verse was too simple....you came too elementary.....not complex enough and when u attempted a punch it just didnt hit good.......you didnt have any personals on him
you had a couple of good bars but overall i just wasnt feeling the verse as a whole.....no hate...just stating my opinion

so my vote goes to ill because
of his complexity and personal......and his whole verse was good whereas dex wasnt as consistent

please return the favor with a vote in my first battle in my sig....thanks........
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Old 01-10-05, 03:34 PM   #51
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Old 01-10-05, 04:37 PM   #52
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Aiight In This Battle It Just Came Down Like A Bar...
Because Neither Really Had Wordplay Or Complex Punches...
You Were Just Throwin Down Raw Ass Hits...
And Both Had Nice Flow (Logics Alittle More Complex)...

Dex Used The Unlimited Lines To His Advantange...
But Logic's Lines Had More Punch To Them...
Aiight And Since Dex Had A Crazy Long Verse Ill Break Down The Highlights From Each Emcee...

Logic:
styles unkown-disrespectin me?ya betta check ya tone-before ya get left alone,
hes probaly comfortable with that,cuz nobody let him in his crew and tried to start his own,
Just Liked The Last Part. It Was A Pretty Nice Little Personal That Had A Good Punch To It.

So whos next? cuz im more than happy to take this win against weedex,
cuz im "sweepin-up-this-board", like cleaning my "computer-desk",
This Was Really The Only Line I Actually Liked. The Rest Were Pretty Weak Mayn. But It Actually Had Alittle Wordplay.

Dex:
All Those Lines And You Really Didnt Say A Daaaaaaym Thing...
Lines Mean Nothing To The Reader If The Content Just Isnt There...
Better Luck Next Time...


Aiight, So Logic Gets It For A Few Good Bars And A Better Flow...
Dex Needs To Work On Content Or Atleast Make Your Flow Something Special So You Can Win Based On That...

Hopefully This Was Enough Feedback...
If I Need More Just PM Me...
And Dex Hittup This O.M. To Return The Favor:

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170702

Thanks Alot, Good Luck Elevating...
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Old 01-11-05, 09:11 PM   #53
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Old 01-11-05, 10:13 PM   #54
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not that i really want to but i have to give the win to the dex.
he just came at ill logic wit so much more. he really took advantage ot the unlimited lines thing lol.i dont reall like ur style but u had better punches and flow that the other guy. structure was ok
holla at me

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Old 01-11-05, 10:28 PM   #55
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Yah verse had a lil more to the punches! i didn't quite feel the flo in it! I vote fah urs cus it had bettah vocab! Keep Elevatin! no hate to either of you!

Return tha favor or i'll stop voting on yah battles. All votez will be returned. Jus drop a link!>1<

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Old 01-14-05, 04:49 PM   #56
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the dex.........no offense.......but ur voters ar dumb as fuck.....uppin dis shit
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Old 01-14-05, 11:28 PM   #57
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Old 01-15-05, 12:49 AM   #58
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Voted For: MeN-Iz

opener- Logic
closer-logic
punches-Logic
personals-Logic
structure-Dex
flow-dex
creativity-logic
enjoyment-logic


Final vote - Logic

He took this wit ease...
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