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Old 04-11-05, 05:36 PM   #46
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Old 04-12-05, 12:04 AM   #47
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Old 04-23-05, 06:04 PM   #48
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uppin this shit
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Old 04-29-05, 08:57 AM   #49
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Voted For: Evolution

nice verse here...wordplay good...punchlines were good they hit hard...personals were ight they could use a lil work... structre was good also...vocab gvery good...nice job man
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Old 05-05-05, 06:11 PM   #50
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ughh pretty one sided battle here evolution had nicer punches personals flow structure.. the whole works.... ughh the word prattle in a battle is just pretty gay.. but besides that nice verse... metaman or whatever ur verse was just weak.. and contrary to ur name u had no real metaphors in ur verse... soo overall evolution just owned here with some decent punches and some nice personals... so no hate just elevate... v/evolution.. bye bye.....
 
 


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