Voted For: Tha Q.

Aiite yall lets break this down:

I ain't tryna knock,I'm stating facts,and i don't like battlin a fag dreamin bout bein on top a other cats
he lame,it's why nobody askin for a 'Q-Tip' cause he already drop a lotta 'wax'(whacks)
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this was a good strong opener, personal, punch and creativity, very good opener

he denied the battle yesterday,accept 2day,c'mon Tha,grow some balls
cause,i mean, we all know how he 'pre-rights',like a four year old know it all
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Ok attempt I guess, this wasnt too great, kinda childish if you ask me

it should be a sin for you to bring the spit,& ya wanna put me under your wingjust to have something to stick
Bitch please,u only switched to gay,cause str8ness ain;t give ya anything to lick
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GAY LINES AGAIN?.....i think u made ure point, normaly to make reoccurin points doesnt show much in a battle but ok punch

damn model,checkin ya nose,askin bout our workout in LL,then stoppin to beg for a second to pose
and i hear U A VET?,well ya must owning only CD's cause you got no record to show
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set up was good...first line was hot...liked it...second...not too much...ok..good try

i'm mad dat da first queer dat i saw got his temper unlocked,happened to be pussy in the center alot
and it's clear the change to homo ain't work,he still beatin his meat to member mugshots
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lol...this was good....funny shit...back on track

only shots Q wants to do is ballin my mouth,talking about me ducking,but here he's stallin me now
cuz,i mean,look,he even gave ME props,makin a whole thread in LL about calling me out
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Ok line...not too complex...not really a punch

but it's sa'll good Q,take the losing as a quid-pro-pro,shoulda saved ya corpse with a no show
cause it figures you'd be whack,reppin benzino,with your aim as SOURCE CEO
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Ok good line here....we need a good closer for this to be a solid one

to me,this ain't beef,i think it's fun,bombarding a queer,wit his raps that stinks beyond some
but knowing you,sensitivity wieghts a ton,&you a 'dick-writer',like u substituting ink for cum
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SOLID...GREAT CLOSER...funny stuf...good wordplay

Tha Q:

I peeped ya shit..still ain't figured out which part was ya writtens
U gotta be kiddin, how da fuck u got more footnotes than actual disses
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Lol this was funny, good opener....

In good faith, I set this battle up hopin' for a small challenge
Ya rhymes wack fuel economy, stretchin' em out to get dat extra mileage
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Ok this was ok, not too bad,, but was set up good

Addin' dashes and quotations don't make what you wrote dope or blazin
It just mean u a joke, so face it..ya whole M.O. is to hate, kid
^^^That was good...liked this line..good punch

I'm an organic farmer harvestin' u herbs for this beef dish
I gave you all the ammo needed, u still couldn't defeat this
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It was set up real well dawg...but fell off...simple but maybe effective...

Instead you posted a thread thought you was revealin' a secret
But discovered you sonn'ed yaself when er'body called u a geek, bitch
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Not feelin this one sorry, too basic

Spittin' weak shit..what da fuck ur wack wit your anemic..
Flow-style broke-down schemes bitch..I'm rippin u into pieces
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likin the flow here...simple but effective this was a perfect example

Knee jerk ya ass until you achieve this..level I'm at cuz u squeamish
Scared to step up or dream shit..ya self esteem is dead, it seems it
^^^ lol the multies are killin me man....this is a good line

Logical to think it..dat I'm reachin' farther than you can ever achieive prick
Believe it..local rule say I'm K.O.'n this fool, don't starve..just EAT SHIT!
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HAHAHAHA good closer not as good there as NK but good

Lodown:

THA Q: LIKED URE VERSE, SOLID VERSE, LIKED IT ALOT, HAD THE MULITES, PUNCHES N FLOW AND FOR AN AUDIO CAT
THIS WAS REALLY GOOD......8/10...GOOD DROP...SOLID THROUGHOUT

NATURAL KILLER: YOURS HAD SUPER OPENER AND CLOSER...BUT IN THE MIDDLE IT JUS LOST IT....7/10...IT WASNT TOO SOLID...BUT MADE AN
EFFECT...BUT IMO HE HAS GOT THIS BATTLE

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Voted For: Natural killa

This was a close battle but Natural killa had it in the long run. Only thing Natural Killa needed to work on was his structure. His punches had more personals in them than Tha Q. And i lost interest in Q's verse in the beginning due to the pointless intro. Q leave out the intro in rap battles and stick em in OM's thats what i think in my view.Q you had some nice punches too but u didnt have any Personals that i can really see. Either way Natural Killa took this in all catergories except structure. and there not use in my really breakin it down.

Advice Natural Killa work on you structure Tha Q try putting more personals with your punches if not make the personals that people can see

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