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09-12-04, 09:12 AM
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IP: B587 18C9
Voted For: NoMercy
trojans verse was pretty nice i felt most of ya punchlines except for the waterbed.....i know theres more behind it i just didnt feel it. wordplay was nice ye vocab just good, overall pretty tight verse especially the way u finished it off. no mercy verse i didnt really feel at all.....nothin hit it for me just very plain and boring.....i see ur structure was alright and ya vocab was alright but man all i can say is 'elevate'. u coulda done sumthin with him naming himself after a condom brand tho....good idea. Vote Switched
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09-12-04, 09:16 AM
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IP: B587 18C9
sorry i fuct u........will fix that mistake i meant to vote for trojan....give me a sec
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Spit it from the heart, spit a thousand darts, split ya head apart…
Emcees depart, like rubin carter my hurricane left u scarred… Like a spiked bat grammatical bar, like a wonderland drug… Tumble - ing like a flagon of rum and 2 blunts, like the funk baby… |
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09-12-04, 01:27 PM
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This was feedback posted for Trojan
IP: 9275 0703
i think trojan got this battle with better punches flow and personals no mercy ad an ight verse but i felt it wasnt hard enuf
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09-12-04, 03:03 PM
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IP: 5C75 E78C
lol.......^^^could av voted g......uppin this..........
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09-12-04, 03:17 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
well its true trojan is a condom brand lol
uppin |
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09-13-04, 12:03 PM
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IP: DB7B 1CA2
lol.........uppin...................
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09-13-04, 03:14 PM
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IP: 95E3 DA50
upppppppppiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnn this shit yalllllll..........
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09-13-04, 05:15 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 80C1 FF6D
Voted For: Trojan
this is the second battle of yours i have read and i am liking what i am seein , you new name should be one sided haha nice drop punche's// trojan personals//trojan flow//trojan metaphors//trojan thats all i an think of right now so vote//trojan Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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09-13-04, 07:04 PM
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IP: 079B 578D
Voted For: Trojan
yo this is how i saw it....... punches: trojan.....8/10..... nm 5/10 personals: no mercy 6/10.... trojan 3/10 multis none metas: trojan....8/10....nm..6/10 flow...trojan....9/10.....nm 4/10 no mercy ur flow was off...........and barley rhymed trojan ur punches connected....and i like ur metaphores v/ trojan.................. good battle Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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09-14-04, 05:19 AM
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IP: 0928 BFFE
lmao.........wot the fuck......enygmas vote was easily explained.......haha....bullshit man.....u shud be banned for avin ur scam wit certified thug........biatch...lost ma respect nah........uppin this.......
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09-14-04, 10:04 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
holy man certifeidthug is a goof anyway i dont scam he just did it swear i usto do it lots he pmed me after and told me to vote for him on a battle after so i did plus theres money when you vote and trojan you did win but i saw 1 unexplained by someone else i forgot who but its gone now and i guess they seen more hmm
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09-14-04, 07:46 PM
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IP: 48D4 823D
Voted For: Trojan
trojan u won dis shit it was close but u won bcuz of vocab and u tore him wit ya punches good shit u can do better tho nomercy u were ok ya flow was better but where were the punches and metas u need to come harder if u wouldve u wouldve won no hate keep at it vote= trojan ~peace~
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09-14-04, 07:47 PM
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nomercy pissed cuz he loosin lmao
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09-14-04, 08:44 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
^no im not im good now but do you even no what metas are cuz all my lines were metas and flow i didnt have any of them you realy think yer good then battle me if you kno metas haha and if i was you i would be afraid to show my record
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09-14-04, 09:12 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
Voted For: NoMercy
Im given my man some credit for his age but trojan it was a lil hard to read yer shit same with NoMercy the stucture is so complex its hard to understand both of you had streched yer like the same rappers lol punches: trojan vocab: No wordplay: trojan metas: No multi's: jsut by a bit No opener: No nice wordplay to closener: No the idea with condom unblieveble flow: no need for this in text vote and jsut a bit better: NoMercy loved it |
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