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08-05-04, 09:28 AM
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IP: E198 D20B
Voted For: DRAG~ON
I GOTTA GIVE THIS TO DRAG ON.. EVEN THOUGH HIS WAS A LOT SHORTER, I THINK THAT IT WAS MORE DESCRIPTIVE AND INTERESTING.. DON'S WAS JUST LONG AND BORING.. DRAG ON PUT SOME GOOD WORDING IN THERE WITH SOME NICE FIGURITIVE LANGUAGE AND SET A NICE TONE FOR HIS PIECE.. HIS VERSE WAS A LT MORE FRUITFULL AND THOUGHT OUT INTO A COMPACT DECRIPTION AS DON'S WAS A KINDERGADEN STORY.. DON'S LOST MY INTEREST IN THE FIRST LINE, HIS RHYMES WERE KIDDY, AND HIS WHOLE STORY WAS EXTREMLEY BORING.. HE TOTALLY FAILED ON THIS ONE.. IN MY OPINION DON, I DON'T THINK THAT RAP IS FOR YOU, BUT IT'S JUST AN OPINION.. BASICALLY DRAGON TOOK THIS EASILY AS HE ATLEAST KNOWS HOW TO RHYME AND USE SIMILIES.. |
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08-05-04, 09:30 AM
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IP: E198 D20B
MY BAD, I MEANT TO ASK, PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOR AND LEAVE A DROP IN MY THREAD, THANX..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139869 |
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08-05-04, 03:10 PM
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#18
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Middle Weight
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IP: 1999 62FA
^your vote is being removed it is obvious it was a hate vote u are a sorry excuse for even a textc.
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08-05-04, 03:34 PM
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DA FLAMETHROWER
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
thanx 4 yo vote
n vote 4 sum of my other battles still uppin 4 votes
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  </div> OPEN BATTLES DRAG~ON VS Tha Phoenix DRAG~ON VS BOSTONLYRICIST(Rematch) DRAG~ON VS INSANE16 |
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08-12-04, 01:18 PM
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DA FLAMETHROWER
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
still upppin 4 votes
n deez battles need 1 more vote 2 close da battle DRAG~ON VS phatinum http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138668 r.i.p http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=141250 thanx 1
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</div> OPEN BATTLES DRAG~ON VS Tha Phoenix DRAG~ON VS BOSTONLYRICIST(Rematch) DRAG~ON VS INSANE16 |
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08-12-04, 04:18 PM
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Peace....for now
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IP: 564E 808F
Voted For: DON
Damn...Don..feelin your verse. Shit was hot. Touched me cuz it had truth in it. Drags was koo too. Nice multis and use of creativity. Don takes this though. That closure was ill mayn. Wasnt expectin that. Don gets it with a much better verse. No hate though. Vote-DON
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08-23-04, 01:15 PM
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DA FLAMETHROWER
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
yo we still uppin 4 honest votes
post a link will get bak at ur battles 1
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</div> OPEN BATTLES DRAG~ON VS Tha Phoenix DRAG~ON VS BOSTONLYRICIST(Rematch) DRAG~ON VS INSANE16 |
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12-15-04, 05:30 PM
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#23
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
Voted For: DRAG~ON
What In The Fuck Went On Here???... Both Were Pretty Scattered And Confusing... But Atleast Drag-On Stayed On Topic The Whole Time And Shit... Its A Shame Cuz Were Don Was Going With The First Few Bars Coulda Been Hot... But Ya... Emotion: Don Metas: Drag Flow: Drag Storyline: Drag Overall Enjoyment: Drag And Thats Whats Up... .One. |
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12-17-04, 04:27 PM
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The Epitome Of Greatness
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IP: 3240 794D
Voted For: DON
basically don won this ... more lines gave him the advantage,... and besides that drag ons structure was wack and his punches were basic no wordplay no multies no dope meta's basically no meta's at all... definately could have been better...... don you had a decent verse a couple good punches and dope meta's overall you killed him in this battle and even if he would have done 30 lines i still dont think he could have beat you... basically you both need to elevate... don you used 30 lines and had about 3 dope bars in 30 lines you should have at least 6 dope bars at least vote: don
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12-17-04, 08:52 PM
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
Voted For: DON
the boy piks up the bottle and observes the content... and hes sad and depressed cause he dont know where his mom went... so he grips the bottle and pries open the safety... cause he sees his dad poopin 3 a day lately... he figures itll make him feel better that his mommy had passed... so he swallows down 3 and drinks down some water in glass... ^i liked ur imagery in the battle, this was an example i pulled out.. i felt your topic went further in depth, than drag~on's.. nice topic to go off of also...... but u took this by far in my opinion... but i did like sum of Drag~on's metas.. good job.. stay up you two.. pz..
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