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Old 08-04-04, 04:46 PM   #1
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Complex Illness vs Ruffridah187

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Check in by: 08-06-04 at 04:46 PM

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This Battle Is Now Closed

 
Old 08-04-04, 06:15 PM   #2
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Complex Illness has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-04-04 06:15 PM.
 
Old 08-04-04, 07:20 PM   #3
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Sikk checkin in homie holla backk yo check it




Yo My Skillz are great crazed at most but nice
U Cant Stick a hit if u attatched ur punches wit Sticky Rice
Now u aint got this battle i got this packed away
The biggest word u say,is kill and u call that word play
Yo i got the biggest Crew reppin and shit u think ur good
If u Beat the worst on this site thats the best u chould
 
Old 08-06-04, 02:32 AM   #4
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Ruffridah187 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-06-04 02:32 AM.
 
Old 08-06-04, 02:34 AM   #5
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Hey do i drop first and sorry if i end up takin a while cuz i have been really busy lately
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Old 08-06-04, 07:29 PM   #6
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i spit allready



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Old 08-07-04, 10:56 PM   #7
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Complex Illness, this bitch thinkin he the illest
Thinkin he has nice rhymes but my ill hits kill his
This dude here probably think he the shit cuz he a rich bitch
But he like a "cracker" to me, somthin like 'Ritz Bitz'
He's like a kid goin through puberty with zits
He aint new to me, my rhymes like a needle and pop his shit
My rhymes hit him harder than he could get hit by a rhyno
Battlin him pretty much like savin on Geico
And my rhymes are "sick" Might as well call me a 'Complex Illness'
This dude aint ill, my rhymes so contagious, they go from cities to villages
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Old 08-07-04, 10:59 PM   #8
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ok...good battle....now uppin
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Old 08-08-04, 01:03 AM   #9
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Yo My Skillz are great crazed at most but nice
U Cant Stick a hit if u attatched ur punches wit Sticky Rice
5/10
Now u aint got this battle i got this packed away
The biggest word u say,is kill and u call that word play
5/10
Yo i got the biggest Crew reppin and shit u think ur good
If u Beat the worst on this site thats the best u chould
4/10

Complex Illness, this bitch thinkin he the illest
Thinkin he has nice rhymes but my ill hits kill his
6/10
This dude here probably think he the shit cuz he a rich bitch
But he like a "cracker" to me, somthin like 'Ritz Bitz'
7/10
He's like a kid goin through puberty with zits
He aint new to me, my rhymes like a needle and pop his shit
6/10
My rhymes hit him harder than he could get hit by a rhyno
Battlin him pretty much like savin on Geico
8/10
And my rhymes are "sick" Might as well call me a 'Complex Illness'
This dude aint ill, my rhymes so contagious, they go from cities to villag
6/10

came down 2 harder punches and better wordplay
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Old 08-08-04, 01:06 AM   #10
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1-0 me...Uppin
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Old 08-08-04, 01:14 AM   #11
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ok the breakdown
struc tie
voc ruff barely, complex illness wasnt ill with words
metas ruff
punch ruff
overall ruff
not very good but enough for the win
ill drop a link to my battle, honest vote
 
Old 08-08-04, 01:41 AM   #12
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2-0 me uppin
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Old 08-08-04, 06:41 PM   #13
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3-0 me uppin
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Old 08-08-04, 06:48 PM   #14
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This was feedback posted for Ruffridah187

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Hey, Illness you were pretty good, but i think Ruff took it,
Not bad ryan....
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Old 08-08-04, 07:54 PM   #15
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no need to explain really... complex: your wack... ya punches didnt make sense... basic rhymes... and fucked scheme n structure...

ruff: ^^all that was better in ya verse...

v/ ruff...

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