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Old 08-06-04, 07:33 AM   #1
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One-Man-Band vs calamity

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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-09-04 at 07:33 AM

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Old 08-06-04, 07:34 AM   #2
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One-Man-Band has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-06-04 07:34 AM.
 
Old 08-06-04, 07:44 AM   #3
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calamity has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-06-04 07:44 AM.
 
Old 08-06-04, 09:04 AM   #4
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this kids style is more hated, and outdated then what happened to jews..
. . . . . . he wonder why hes not known: then STOP battling "Who ?"s..
i'll break ya toe off, then smack you like i forgot to take my zoloft..
. . . . . . leave you puzzled and confused like your avatar.. so lost..(LMAO)
bash this has-been, put copper to this hoe, so now we cash-friends..
. . . . . . you had a nice battle run, 9-4,what the fuck happened??..
most people wise up,delete they screen name and stop rappin'..
. . . . . . but you insist on getting burnt to crust in pie fashion..
man watch as band's ass gets raped, ima make his damn casket-wake..
. . . . . . this kids a fake fruit, like a bowl of plastic dates..
this kids multis are wack shit, and won't help him like chapped lips..
. . . . . . ima tear his verse apart like blondes to black dicks..
he a herb like green trees, this cat ends up with ripped spleens..
. . . . . . even with a remote, and preview channel he wont see me..
hes a no show, his fur aint visable when site sees the fog..
. . . . . . ima silence his ribbits, like i put Bats to frogs..
give this kid a storm when i hit em wit drastic thunder..
. . . . . . leave ya bones in fragments kinda like his Spittin structure.. (he spits in paragraphs)
i'll put your life in a broken engine, to leave ya fate stalled..
. . . . . . empty ya jaws, cause we all know like pool tables you ate-balls..(eightball)

^flow is there..strucutre just fucked cause i did it in notepad lol.. .. uppin for ya verse
 
Old 08-06-04, 09:17 AM   #5
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I rap dirty, recite in the mud, write with ya blood, like red ink fluid from pens
This vet rips, bruisin ya lens, you no trouble, Ive beat ya best, bitch, n ill do it again
Ya raps is all noob in the end... it ain't hard ta tell ya get messed wit ease
So all the cats votin for calamity better check themselves..... fa STD's
leave ya checked n breezed, im a skilled cat, n' this birds flappin his wings
battlin me, ya just keepin the trends you set, man, ya still collabin' wit kingz
I clap ya n' sting, Ya whole game changes a lot... Ill tear apart ya brain wit a shot
hoops? calamity? ya cranium pops... ill kill this bitch once for every name that hes got

n some wordplay...

This kid keeps BITING his raps.. Im itchin ta beat ya so ill smack ya fleas
but ya shit still end up "HERB"ish... just like u was tryin to CLAM-A-"TEA"
Ya cant hang with me, im reppin fa real, wannabes im destined to kill
Be scared fucka... you should do like FOOT FETISHES and "HEAD for the HEELS"
bruised galore, im SUPERMAN...'death-throw' visions, when i rip-the-sites
'sigh-men'...ill have this faggot next to BLOOD... like a 'Crip-ta-KNIGHT'
and yet im cold as steel...i 'split cats'...so ya brain better 'THINK TWICE'
get JEANS spliced...to make sure you SEE my point, ill 'LEVI's'

I spit so holy, every time i drop a rap I got profits come after me
But ima treat this like you do, man.... and DROP a CALAMITY*



fuck it 18 lines all i got time for... argh

* calamity = disaster for those that dont know .. as in his verse was a disaster... and im gonna drop him... cos its his name... lol.... ya dig?
n if you dont get my wordplay dont vote
 
Old 08-06-04, 12:32 PM   #6
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uppin for some honest votes
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Old 08-06-04, 12:55 PM   #7
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Voted For: calamity

One- Flow Was Good, Multis Were Ok, And Some Ok Wordplay, Punches Hit But Not Very Hard....

Calamity- Flow was Decent, Punches Connected, Metaphors Were ok...

Punches- Calamity
Pesonals- Tie
Flow- One Man Band
Wordplay- One Man Band
Metaphors- Calamity
Originality- Tie
Structure- Tie

Final Vote- Calamity

Return Favor And Vote Honest On Ms Vs State Capitol...
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Old 08-06-04, 05:19 PM   #8
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Old 08-06-04, 05:22 PM   #9
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kronuz...

man me n calamity are both in the same crew as state... got any other battles?
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Old 08-06-04, 08:53 PM   #10
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true that^ another link would be coo... upping for some more honest votes
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Old 08-06-04, 09:32 PM   #11
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its str8.. its 4-0 anyway... if yah voted him it still wouldnt matter.. just wanna get it over with..
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Old 08-08-04, 12:00 AM   #12
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uppin on this battle.. 1-0 me.. leave links
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Old 08-08-04, 11:54 PM   #13
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uppin this battle.. leave links..
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Old 08-09-04, 07:15 AM   #14
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Old 08-09-04, 05:54 PM   #15
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