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Old 08-09-04, 01:51 PM   #1
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JaC M. WrIgHt vs Ice Pick

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Old 08-09-04, 01:52 PM   #2
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JaC M. WrIgHt has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-09-04 01:52 PM.
 
Old 08-09-04, 01:58 PM   #3
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Old 08-09-04, 02:20 PM   #4
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Jerkin penises your a disgrace to -the- PEE-PULL (people)
Yo verses flow like water? only cuz I'm pushin H-2-ZERO (h20)
Blaze-the-eagel, thru your chest, so your hearts dedicated-to-flippin-birds
Like I dropped the "#1 dictionary down your throat" your OVER-RATED-SPITTIN-VERBS
Rippin-dis-herb like I'm Splittin-a-blunt
Ya 2 liner punches are pussy like ya fists-in-a-cunt
Jack is ill? not unless you got warts-on-ya-digits
This murder sorrows short like remorse-for-a-midgit!
like plumber-dudes... you shitty, thas why you doin the NUMBER-2
the only time this nigga "LATEX" (lay text) is when he swallows rubber-balloons (condoms)
literally carve your chest out leavin you a punk-wit-no-heart and spine
ICE police your brain, put it on probation, you cant leave the WACK STATE-OF-MIND
i'll knee Jack to the head leavin his face-mis-aligned
only when doorbell ditchin has this cat seen harda-knocks
No-glocks, he only seen clips in barber-shops...

was gonna end it but no...Im GOIN FOR ANOTHER slice

Im Raw-with-the-Steez, Bite my Style.. "Get E.coli"~
"Jack in dyselxic 'Eifel' Tower", theres "Death in your 'Life B'"~
Ur Meta-forced(phors) lines think they fly with Soar Eyes~
I "Slay the Alphabet", get Visine, I'm bout to "Redden your fuckin I's"~
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Old 08-09-04, 02:44 PM   #5
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Im Scolding With Speech A Omen SHowin Ya Legecy's Weak//
Im Like 'Moses with a Mic' Tha Way Im "Splittin tHe C""//
Get Buried And Grieve U Not Even Worth Tha Respect//
Plus all U doin Is 'Talkin Out Tha Ass' Like "Eddie Murphey In ShreK"//
Get Burned with Tha tek Im Shootin to tha Sound Of My Music//
But this Dont have to be a 'Audio Battle' to get "Beat By A Cue Stick"(Acoustic)//
Its Confusin That Ya Dick Is SO 'Skinny' Its Amusin To Watch//
Cause after Ya 'Girl Gave u Head' She Also "Used it as Floss"//(lol)
Get abused From tha Boss Ill 'Cut Ya Gut With Knives' If U want It//
U dont Even Have to be 'Nervous' To Get "Butterflies In ya Stomach"//
Get Demolished U Dumb Bitch! Youll be Hunted By Thousands//
And Ill treat Tha Child Like My Own Get it? He'll Be "Punished and Grounded"//
U like how that sounded? Ill swing Tha Loiusville and Leave u in Coffins//
When I Put Tha 'Bat To ya Chest' Like Tha "Hero Of Gothem"//
U fearin me often Juss Listen and Follow Tha Sites Drill//
Cause Even With 'Tylenol in a Rope' U couldnt "Tie-Pill"(type ill)//
My Mic Kills Listen U Lyin To Keep It Real//
But U Like 'Cancer Patients at Yard sales' You Juss "Dyin to Get a Deal"//
u Hidin From Cockin Steel U aint Gangsta Im Known To Do This!!//
Its Shown Im Ruthless When I Leave Ya 'Feet Cold' Like "frozen Rulers"//
 
Old 08-10-04, 12:12 PM   #6
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Old 08-11-04, 03:15 PM   #7
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Old 08-12-04, 11:45 AM   #8
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Old 08-17-04, 09:26 PM   #9
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Voted For: JaC M. WrIgHt

JaC M. WrIgHt- you verse was good...yo punches were hard & they landed..the structure went good wit the flow..and u had some personals in there...

Ice Pick- yo verse was good also..yo structure was a little choppy..but your flow was ok wit it..and yo punches were pretty hard there..

Overall- JaC M. WrIgHt got this one becuz he had harder punches than Ice Pick..and that his structure went good wit his flow..and he had some personals...but basicly he had harder punches than Ice Pick and that he kept landed them wit it...

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Old 08-18-04, 11:07 AM   #10
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Old 08-18-04, 11:09 AM   #11
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GUN TALK IN BATTLES IS FAKE

JAC M YOU SUCK AND YOUR VERSE SHOWS IT

DUDE I BET YOU BIT THAT FUCKIN VERSE

I EXPOSED 3 BITERS PN THIS SITE ALREADY

YOU BETTER NOT BE THE 4th
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Old 08-18-04, 06:52 PM   #12
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uppinnnn1......................................... ...ur jus a wack ass pussy dog ohhhh my names ice pick i expossedd thre... shut tha fuck up bitch u probably a fuckin computer nerd gettin all bitchy from not gettin a vote pussy ur record online dont mean shit in real life what u go around sayin im 29-5 online raps hahaha ur a bitch
 
Old 08-19-04, 05:06 PM   #13
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Voted For: JaC M. WrIgHt

both flows had strong metas
but i felt JAC had more n his hit
a lil harder Ice picks was tyght
but JAC was just a lil better
v/JAC
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Old 08-21-04, 12:56 PM   #14
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Voted For: Ice Pick

I think ice pick took this one because of her consistant punches that were hitting extreamly hard. I like da punch about rubber baloon comdoms lol. This verse had the better flow punches structure and performance vote ice pik
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Old 08-21-04, 05:39 PM   #15
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DUDE IM A DUDE

NOT A CHICK

what the hell isa up with this

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