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Check in by: 08-14-04 at 10:37 PM

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Elusiv G has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-14-04 10:09 PM.

!Mc Merc! has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-14-04 10:12 PM.

I issued an open battle to summon da realest of mc's
instead i got this bitch mc merc tryin to test me
this fool needs to step back and realise
that the mc is fuckin wit has fire in his eyes
so when he steps to the mic he comes correct
after dis battle u wont nuttin but death
cos mc merc is ironically gonna be merked
this is a battle son you gon end up hurt
cos when i accept a challenge, i respond drastically
known to spit poison laced rhymes sparadically
u gonna b so astronimically dissed
god wont grant ur prayers no matter how many times u wish
cos mc jerk is gonna stay exclusively
a bitch ass wannabe
4eva in the shadow of the realest of realest mc's
and that cat is Nemesis Da Elusiv G

u commin here cocky, challenging niggas is your introduction
yo punches are like 2 much sweat in a jocky, ya need lyposuction
you battlin me, you stupid ass cocksucker, actin all buff
coundn't figure out how to start a battle thread, dumb but tuff?
he cried to his mommy, because i smashed him downstairs
not like apollo creed n rocky, more like bowow n the termimayor
i'm puttin one of ma ass cheeks, on all these fuckin lines
but ya put ya heart, cause you aint gottta state of mind
everything so easy, why couldnt ya do it, beat this nigga
i maybe new at the game, but i just permanetly mamed ya figga
you aint good, dont talk like you from da hood in fake ebonics
iyou lost this battle faster then a tortoise against sonic

so mc merc tinks he's bad enough to judge every1 else
4 u try and cuss others, ur bitch ass shud chek itself
u shud go and look in the mirror
and u'll understand y ur fam is always sick at dinner
yeh im arrogant and cocky
cos i can finish this in 2 roounds unlike rocky
u tha terminator made of steel
so ima b the 1000 degrees of heat only steel can feel
and melt n burn ur ass down
bury this liquid metal 6 feet underground
its gonna b hard to turn ur frown upside down
cos u realised u battlin' danigga wiv da rappin crown
cos ma lyrics are genetically engineered
to kill mc merc who was born queer

it over you faggot, u dont post again shit face m

upp up up m

ne mc up in here can c dat i killed ur ass and when it come down to the come dwn ima b the g they vote for ! say what

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Voted For: Elusiv G

elusive g you ripped it.
yo mc merc i like that you use tuff

personals both
multis ??? dont kno
punches both
structure mc merc
flow mc merc
vocab elusive g
wordplay elusive g
overall tie but elusive g punches were harder

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

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Lyrical Materminds

BigBootyChick

Voted For: !Mc Merc!

merc took this e-z his punches hit harder better opener and flowes elusiv all u had was structure against this kat

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

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Just Straight SpiTTin

Return the favor and drop honest votes:
http://community.rapverse.com/showbattlethread.php?t=143044
http://community.rapverse.com/showbattlethread.php?t=143038
http://community.rapverse.com/showbattlethread.php?t=143034
http://community.rapverse.com/showbattlethread.php?t=142873
and if u dont no ctrl cxv use copy and paste for the sites up above.

u guys are tradin votes its clearly shown if elusiv had harder punches why didnt u vote for him when u said punches:both dumbass

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Just Straight SpiTTin

Return the favor and drop honest votes:
http://community.rapverse.com/showbattlethread.php?t=143044
http://community.rapverse.com/showbattlethread.php?t=143038
http://community.rapverse.com/showbattlethread.php?t=143034
http://community.rapverse.com/showbattlethread.php?t=142873
and if u dont no ctrl cxv use copy and paste for the sites up above.

okay sombody tell me what whcich of his lines were an actuall punch that wasnt played oor used already a million times, ???????????????

Voted For: !Mc Merc!

Structure - Merc, he had straighter lines, that were more parallel and looked more appealing..

Punches - Merc, he came out immediatley with punchlines and disses, though elusiv did not, plus mercs were a little more creative..

personals, both can elevate here, none really stuck out..

Flow, I guess that this is a tie, i didn't see anything wrong with your flows..

Vocab, both need to elevate. elusiv even made no sense in one part, when he said that he'll astronomically diss you, that doesn't make sense..

Overall, Merc, his verse made more sense and also had better punchlines and stucture which give an overall better verse..

ok, can you return the favor with a drop in my thread, thanx..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=143024

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