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Minimum posts to vote: 10

Check in by: 08-24-04 at 12:45 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Raptor has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-20-04 12:46 PM.

Hello I'm ProVerse, I like tuh fuck-just ask Merc
But we aint gay guys, Cuz bo'fus is bitches in skirts/

And if you buh'zerk, Beware pump heels can hurt
Plus I'll cut that ass, Wit muh glas compac in muh purse/

I'm puttin in work, Wit guns?-Nah wit johns who work
See Om nuh kinna jerk, Who jaksoff- wit other mens worms/

I'm highly disturbed, It started back when I first learned
Wile wearin mommys furs, My dad was gay & donated sperm/

Thats why I wear perms, An makeup when I rap online
My tuff exteriuh, Is nut'n more than cheap dis'guise'/

And speakin uh 'guys', Remember eddie murphy ya'll
Got caught witta Transvestite,-Well I'm that broad!/

My money is gone, I could'nt afford tuh sever muh cord
So I started 'rappin 4 fudd', wit paper signs & uh board/

I thought I was War, Until I got murduh'd by Tor
He waited in my car, Shot me when I opened the door/

I fell tuh duh groun', Would U believe he shot me su'more?!!
Cleat'd up my crown, Leff me lyin stiff on the floor!!/

Like six sense-I'm dead now, But did'nt know it before
Because Tor made, Mr. ProVerse no more/

ProVerse has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-20-04 06:16 PM.

sparring a "leaf eater", "beef" with you measured in "minis"
"prehistoric lyrics", your words get free meals at dennys
intrest in your words loss after your 1st line,waste of ya time
like unfound "fossils" nobody wit shovels couldn't dig ya rhymes
even the valcano tragity, didn't influese you to spit fire
swollowed motlen "rock",but you still a "pebble" no one desires
a minmised version of Rex, hopeng for a growth spert
still small time, your species limit growth,skills buried in "dirt"
this boy here faces extinction, wins you will never return him
losses engraved on you, like your internal met your external


whew lol lets see some votes iight? will return favor

~1~

yo wassup wit da votes?

uppin again

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Voted For: ProVerse

ok raptor no personals just weak ass punches that aint hit and madd corny gay jokes structure was good flow was a little off very weak verse2/10
proverse alot of personals they aint hit as ahrd as they should but they hit good here and nice punches just work on vocab a little good flow and nice structure5/10

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Voted For: ProVerse

ok raptor no personals just weak ass punches that aint hit and madd corny gay jokes structure was good flow was a little off very weak verse2/10
proverse alot of personals they aint hit as ahrd as they should but they hit good here and nice punches just work on vocab a little good flow and nice structure5/10

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Voted For: ProVerse

ok raptor no personals just weak ass punches that aint hit and madd corny gay jokes structure was good flow was a little off very weak verse2/10
proverse alot of personals they aint hit as ahrd as they should but they hit good here and nice punches just work on vocab a little good flow and nice structure5/10

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Voted For: Raptor

WOW. That was a ill verse Raptor. Sounded like suin Eminem would say. That was tite cuz you went into the position like he was talkin. Good shit mayn. Punches and disses towards him were tite. Pros was alright. Some of the punches were played, but the pebble one was sick. Good structures and flows on both. Pretty even in that catagory. Raptor just took it with harder punches and disses. Raptor gets it.

Vote-Raptor

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^^ is u serious lol

it was kool
but eminem nah

good vote tho

uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Voted For: Raptor

raptor u a sick mutha fucka but u win dis battle lol
lines was iight and ya flo was nice

proverse i wasnt feelin it////jus betta ya flow a lil and use bigger wrds and ull b tight

vote=raptor



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^^ are you sure that was my verse?


i used bigger words then HIM

make sure dat its my verse u readin man

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Voted For: ProVerse

Proverse got this easy

Raptor wack as fuck, didnt like the way you spelled out certain werds and shit, basic lines with boring and pointless attempts at punches. And your personals you tried to use sucked as well. What the fuck was you talkin about in this battle

Proverse, better flow , wordplay , structre, better orginality.
your shit wanst that good, but i felt it was better than his and better to read

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