Battle Rules:

10 to 20 lines
No Recycling
No Biting
just a normal batlle ok but battle should go up in 20 min hes spitting first peace

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-31-04 at 03:22 PM

Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in.

k you spit first i got another battle to do so you spit first ill get back at you right away with a quick freestyle

Tha Flash has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-28-04 03:24 PM.

NoMercy has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-28-04 03:26 PM.

k listen you wack newb ill fuck you up with my knife/
gash your bitch ass up and leave you body to die a painful life/.
i caught you in your room jerkin yer tiny chode off/
spit so hard and so fast i fly by and the dust makes you cough/
slice yer throught hold yer neck and let it drop/
tell yer bitch to shut up and stop or ill chop her up to/
so you better believe its true i roll in a better crew/
me and you foo ill be winning again bitch ight so dont ask me who/
its you tryin to talk some shit and cant even do the crip walk/
wonderin why im behind you and your ready to block a knife/
shut up its a freestyle fuck you im danger i dont give mercy/
so dont think yer better you dont roll with the jersey/.

quick freestyle it sucks

Now When I Spit On U Nigga I Ain't Gonna Show U No Mercy,
U A Fag So That Explains Why Ya Ass Is Sweeter Then Hershey's//
U Should've Been The One To Spit First B,
Cause One Verse From Me Will Put U In The Back Of A Herse B//
But Just Cause Ya Status Is Online,
Don't Mean That You'll Rap You'll Get Scared And Won't Spit On Time//
Nigga Don't Get Outta Line Or I'll Pump Ya Face Up,
And Leave Blood Running Down Ya Face Like Makeup//
So Faggot Go Put On Ya Masscara,
I'm Known As Flash But U Can Call Me The Plague Of Black Terror//
So If U Want War I Can Dot Ya Fatigues,
And Leave Red Dots On U Like A Swat Teams In The Tree//
I'm Knocking Ya Bitch And Got Her Shaking Like Parkinsons Disease,
So With A Pistol On My Waist I'll Knock Ya Face In//
And Leave U Underground Like U Was Locked In A Basement,
U Ain't Got Shit For Me Dog Ya Soft In The Middle//
So I'll Leave My Nuts On Ya Girl Like Peanut Butter Briddle,
But U Think I'm Wack But Nigga I'm So Nice//
If U Need Proof Ask Ya Girl Cause Was Down Her Throat Like Smirnoff Ice
So Before U Step To Me U Better Think Twice//

^no freestyle it was a freestyle battle wtf are you doing man it took you like 1 hour to write that it took me 1 min so fuck what are you doing its a freestyle like fuck goof!

if u don't calm the fuck down, i figured people would still vote, that's the purpose of freestyling, to see who wins, so y not let the people vote, and yeah that took u a minute but unlike u i have a life, i have other things to do, i'm so sorry i couldn't cater to u, but i ain't gotta do shit u say so i spit when i want to

ya so do i im going out right away and tomorrow im going to realy battle someone in real life so fuck you how about plus my verse sucked i agree you win but dont care im better then this im prob better then you lol

Voted For: Tha Flash

Tha Flash Came A Lil Harder, Better Structure n A Few Okay Punches....Still Room 4 Improvement FLASH, But 7/0

NoMercy Ya Flow Was Okay, You Need'a Elevate n Broaden Your Vocabulary n I'm Sure You'll Come Good, Try Using Humour In Your Punches

Good Lookin
Keep Elevatin n Return The Favor On My Battles!

P E A C E

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Voted For: Tha Flash

i voted for the flash because he had betta punches and his flow was betta nomercy ya was good too but flash got u in this battle.

return the favor wit an honost vote:

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=145701

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uppin for votes will return the favor, hit this battle up

Voted For: Tha Flash

no mercy flow and sucture was way off punches and disses aint hit here and vocab was ok madd shit aint rhyme a real weak verse no hate 1/10
flash good flow and wordplay here good punches not many good disses though work on that good vocab and structure was nice a 5/10

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