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Old 09-12-04, 04:22 PM   #1
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InsaneJoka666 vs TURBAN

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Old 09-12-04, 04:23 PM   #2
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Old 09-12-04, 04:25 PM   #3
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Old 09-12-04, 04:41 PM   #4
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This kat cant be origional cuz he on Rapverse...*
Just with an opener i have him looking at his worse,and have him taken away ina long black herse..
it wasn't my intent to rip a newb of Syndicated Scriptures...
But when this bitch is in the ring, just like ali he Shakes and Twitches...
Brace yer Britches, cuz I hacked into the system and Im Erasin Glitches...
Leave you laced in stiches, cuz I'll take you bitches, knock you back to the future like faded pictures...
Now the stage has flipped, Im firing bullets that'll graze ya lips...
t's ass has been pounded so many times, he has to glaze his shyt...
He's used to getting beat, that why he he crave the whip....
At his job at Chip and Dales they make him pay to strip...
Quick Easy kill

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Turban is also the name of something you wear on your head..so its not origional...
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Old 09-12-04, 04:41 PM   #5
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i use you like a tissue, blow my rhymes all ova you
after my drop son ya gonna have some major issues

you say you spit,but every one knows dat u swallow
you may drop hot, but my act-s a hard one to follow

call me a professional, i'm a professor in merkology
you, jokah couldn't get pussy if u went into gynocology

i'll break your verbal hymen with my lyrical dick
your useless jokah like a injured *mike "vick"

joka, we knows u angel, you not decept-on no one
i'll leave you star'v 4 mo, like *starvin marv-on

*starv'n marvin from southpark
*michael vick football playa , got injured , couldnt play thus was useless
 
Old 09-12-04, 04:42 PM   #6
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nice drop... lets get some votes.... uppin........
 
Old 09-12-04, 04:50 PM   #7
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HAHA..NICE SHIT PUNCHES,MULTIS,STRUCTURE,METAS WAS HOT..U HAD VOCAB N I LIKE YA WORDPLAY...
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Old 09-12-04, 04:52 PM   #8
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Damn, this was one-sided. Joka came with harder punches, better structure, overall a better drop. TURBAN, I know you're elevating, btu ya gotta keep at it dawg, don't step up to the vets just yet. I made the same mistake with this cat, he gave me my first lost and had me 0-1 lol. But still, Joka took this with good structure, wordplay, and punches...
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Old 09-12-04, 04:55 PM   #9
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yea yea i'm see'n why he gave u a loss now, damn he good ha
 
Old 09-12-04, 05:18 PM   #10
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Voted For: InsaneJoka666

ok~tight battle both of you
insane~ya verse was good, nice vocabulary, creative punches, and nice flow as well, you definately came with your style here and it showed, i think your verse was better then turbans because of punches and quality of your content
turban~your verse was also good, i liked your strucure and ya flow as well, but i think your punches could have been a bit more crafty, not sayin they weren't good, but i just liked insane's vocab better...overall good from both!!!!
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Old 09-12-04, 05:39 PM   #11
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yes...u won this....

Opener...Arch...even tho it was stretched it still beat Trojans..trojans opener seemed simple...as well as wack..

Personals..i didnt see any real harmful personals in eithers verse..

Punches...this goes to Arch..joka whateva..simply becuz they hit hard..were pretty original..complex and had good wordplay incorporated into them...

Mutlis...yes Arch u get this too...you used the right amount of multis to keep the flow consistant..

Vocab/Wordplay..Arch...yours was betta then Trojans..

Closer...Arch...closer wasnt really that good..but it was betta then Trojans..more complex again...

Overall...Arch dominated in the catagories...Trojan..you have to elevate and start to get more complex...instead of using simple wordplay..improve on your punches as well..

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Me vs. Shabba Ranks...
Me vs. Shottaboy....

both in elevated frontlines..thank you
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Old 09-12-04, 05:40 PM   #12
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damn...i thought u was battlin Trojan...o well..yall kno who i meant
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Old 09-12-04, 05:58 PM   #13
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This kat cant be origional cuz he on Rapverse...*
Just with an opener i have him looking at his worse,and have him taken away ina long black herse..
^^^^^^^^^^ aight good punch fo sho nice mayne

it wasn't my intent to rip a newb of Syndicated Scriptures...
But when this bitch is in the ring, just like ali he Shakes and Twitches...
Brace yer Britches, cuz I hacked into the system and Im Erasin Glitches...
Leave you laced in stiches, cuz I'll take you bitches, knock you back to the future like faded pictures...
^^^^^^^^^ aight nice multiz and punches nice mayne

ow the stage has flipped, Im firing bullets that'll graze ya lips...
t's ass has been pounded so many times, he has to glaze his shyt...
He's used to getting beat, that why he he crave the whip....
At his job at Chip and Dales they make him pay to strip...

Quick Easy kill
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT DA CLOSA WAS AWSOME I GIVE DIS SHIT 10/10 *MULTIZ, PUNCHES,STRUTURE*

use you like a tissue, blow my rhymes all ova you
after my drop son ya gonna have some major issues
^^^^^^^^ NOT AN GOOD OPENER BUT GOOD PUNCH THOUGH

you say you spit,but every one knows dat u swallow
you may drop hot, but my act-s a hard one to follow
^^^^^^^ AIGHT GOOD MAYNE

call me a professional, i'm a professor in merkology
you, jokah couldn't get pussy if u went into gynocology
^^^^^^^ HA NICE MAYNE GOOD PUNCH

i'll break your verbal hymen with my lyrical dick
your useless jokah like a injured *mike "vick"

joka, we knows u angel, you not decept-on no one
i'll leave you star'v 4 mo, like *starvin marv-on
^^^^^^^ AIGHT GOOD VERSE AND A GOOD CLOSA
OVERALL-8/10

IT WAS AN CLOSE BATTLE BETWEEN PUNCHES VS MULTIZ

DA MULTIZ AND DA PUNCHES WERE GOOD JOKA U GOT MY VOTE

YO TURBAN NICE PUNCHES AND ALL BUT JOKA CAME HARER WITH DAT ONE MAYNE

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