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InsaneJoka666 vs TURBAN
IP: C56C 93CC
Battle Rules:
6-10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-12-04 at 05:02 PM Must drop verse in 40 minutes after check in. This Battle Is Now Closed
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IP: 95EB 880F
TURBAN has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-04 04:23 PM.
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IP: C56C 93CC
InsaneJoka666 has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-04 04:25 PM.
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IP: C56C 93CC
This kat cant be origional cuz he on Rapverse...* Just with an opener i have him looking at his worse,and have him taken away ina long black herse.. it wasn't my intent to rip a newb of Syndicated Scriptures... But when this bitch is in the ring, just like ali he Shakes and Twitches... Brace yer Britches, cuz I hacked into the system and Im Erasin Glitches... Leave you laced in stiches, cuz I'll take you bitches, knock you back to the future like faded pictures... Now the stage has flipped, Im firing bullets that'll graze ya lips... t's ass has been pounded so many times, he has to glaze his shyt... He's used to getting beat, that why he he crave the whip.... At his job at Chip and Dales they make him pay to strip... Quick Easy kill
------------------------------ Turban is also the name of something you wear on your head..so its not origional... |
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 95EB 880F
i use you like a tissue, blow my rhymes all ova you
after my drop son ya gonna have some major issues you say you spit,but every one knows dat u swallow you may drop hot, but my act-s a hard one to follow call me a professional, i'm a professor in merkology you, jokah couldn't get pussy if u went into gynocology i'll break your verbal hymen with my lyrical dick your useless jokah like a injured *mike "vick" joka, we knows u angel, you not decept-on no one i'll leave you star'v 4 mo, like *starvin marv-on *starv'n marvin from southpark *michael vick football playa , got injured , couldnt play thus was useless |
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 95EB 880F
nice drop... lets get some votes.... uppin........
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Home Of Philly
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IP: 7DC8 13A6
Voted For: InsaneJoka666
HAHA..NICE SHIT PUNCHES,MULTIS,STRUCTURE,METAS WAS HOT..U HAD VOCAB N I LIKE YA WORDPLAY... |
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In ya area.
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IP: 39C2 8F9E
Voted For: InsaneJoka666
Damn, this was one-sided. Joka came with harder punches, better structure, overall a better drop. TURBAN, I know you're elevating, btu ya gotta keep at it dawg, don't step up to the vets just yet. I made the same mistake with this cat, he gave me my first lost and had me 0-1 lol. But still, Joka took this with good structure, wordplay, and punches... Vote - InsaneJoka666 Return the favor, honest explained votes only...
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 95EB 880F
yea yea i'm see'n why he gave u a loss now, damn he good ha
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<<-Carpe Noctum->>
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IP: 0825 899A
Voted For: InsaneJoka666
ok~tight battle both of you insane~ya verse was good, nice vocabulary, creative punches, and nice flow as well, you definately came with your style here and it showed, i think your verse was better then turbans because of punches and quality of your content turban~your verse was also good, i liked your strucure and ya flow as well, but i think your punches could have been a bit more crafty, not sayin they weren't good, but i just liked insane's vocab better...overall good from both!!!! vote~insane
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IP: D979 BFDC
Voted For: InsaneJoka666
yes...u won this.... Opener...Arch...even tho it was stretched it still beat Trojans..trojans opener seemed simple...as well as wack.. Personals..i didnt see any real harmful personals in eithers verse.. Punches...this goes to Arch..joka whateva..simply becuz they hit hard..were pretty original..complex and had good wordplay incorporated into them... Mutlis...yes Arch u get this too...you used the right amount of multis to keep the flow consistant.. Vocab/Wordplay..Arch...yours was betta then Trojans.. Closer...Arch...closer wasnt really that good..but it was betta then Trojans..more complex again... Overall...Arch dominated in the catagories...Trojan..you have to elevate and start to get more complex...instead of using simple wordplay..improve on your punches as well.. Return the favor.. Me vs. Shabba Ranks... Me vs. Shottaboy.... both in elevated frontlines..thank you
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IP: D979 BFDC
damn...i thought u was battlin Trojan...o well..yall kno who i meant
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 0825 899A
Voted For: InsaneJoka666
This kat cant be origional cuz he on Rapverse...* Just with an opener i have him looking at his worse,and have him taken away ina long black herse.. ^^^^^^^^^^ aight good punch fo sho nice mayne it wasn't my intent to rip a newb of Syndicated Scriptures... But when this bitch is in the ring, just like ali he Shakes and Twitches... Brace yer Britches, cuz I hacked into the system and Im Erasin Glitches... Leave you laced in stiches, cuz I'll take you bitches, knock you back to the future like faded pictures... ^^^^^^^^^ aight nice multiz and punches nice mayne ow the stage has flipped, Im firing bullets that'll graze ya lips... t's ass has been pounded so many times, he has to glaze his shyt... He's used to getting beat, that why he he crave the whip.... At his job at Chip and Dales they make him pay to strip... Quick Easy kill ^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT DA CLOSA WAS AWSOME I GIVE DIS SHIT 10/10 *MULTIZ, PUNCHES,STRUTURE* use you like a tissue, blow my rhymes all ova you after my drop son ya gonna have some major issues ^^^^^^^^ NOT AN GOOD OPENER BUT GOOD PUNCH THOUGH you say you spit,but every one knows dat u swallow you may drop hot, but my act-s a hard one to follow ^^^^^^^ AIGHT GOOD MAYNE call me a professional, i'm a professor in merkology you, jokah couldn't get pussy if u went into gynocology ^^^^^^^ HA NICE MAYNE GOOD PUNCH i'll break your verbal hymen with my lyrical dick your useless jokah like a injured *mike "vick" joka, we knows u angel, you not decept-on no one i'll leave you star'v 4 mo, like *starvin marv-on ^^^^^^^ AIGHT GOOD VERSE AND A GOOD CLOSA OVERALL-8/10 IT WAS AN CLOSE BATTLE BETWEEN PUNCHES VS MULTIZ DA MULTIZ AND DA PUNCHES WERE GOOD JOKA U GOT MY VOTE YO TURBAN NICE PUNCHES AND ALL BUT JOKA CAME HARER WITH DAT ONE MAYNE ~PEACE~ V-JOKA RETURN A FAV |
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