Battle Rules:

10 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

A'ight lets do this shit...better show up...

200 Posts to vote.

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 09-24-04 at 01:35 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

Limited Edition has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-21-04 01:39 PM.

...A'yo...

Dude merks herbs well you bout to begin a backwards fall...
You couldn't spit hot shit if you was stuck in a blazin bathroom stall
You should be hated on this site only friend is ya rapperz pet...
Only decent punch you could pull on me is callin me a "bastard vet"
You don't have this mastered yet...punch ya now ya punished...
Yeah you's a Street Poet...you broke 'cause you can't get published
Street? You less gangsta than the fag the lead hit...
Returnin blood to the pavement...won't get you steet credit
Yeah I said it...you crewless well I guess poets are alone...
Why you rap battlin'? I haven't seen you write a single poem?
Give it up, kid...you don't belong on the stage here...
He's on a rap site, but Eminem's not his idol...

...it's William Shakespeare...

Street poet has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-21-04 10:09 PM.

YO DONT GET MADDDDDD CANADIAN SUCKS



yo u shouldnt be in the ring with me like the canadians dont belong in the u.s.a//
U aint coming victorious in this battle like canada ur only coming in 2nd place// (2nd largest country)

put 14 slugs in ur chest and pysicaly remove the balistics
leave ur body transfixed on a crusafix and give your rhymes the deep six| i heard the canadians gives away free health service//

GOING BACK TO HISTORY WIT DIS LOL


Like my nation i go thru trialz and tribulationz
You been around, suckin cock in various circulation
At least my fuckin nation wasn't founded as a british shit hole
Ugly speck of world's geography, disfiguring like a mole//


The only thing LIMIT cooked was whale blubber last night
That’s all that you got up in Canada aint that right
Take your canoe to the store and buy some fuckin game
Before your paraplegic with no uses for a cane
I cut you down like McDonalds did the amazon
Like a playsation with no power button, my game is always on
new shit I shall brig it right now.
I’ll cut the beef like trade laws concerning mad cow.
I rip it through you fuck the whole Canadian Shield
This ain’t no 1812 you get no help on this battlefield//

TURN OFF DA BEAT:

Wait i'll say somthin dats postive yall betta dan basketball:no
soccer:no swimming:no running:hmmmmm no to bony and frail// yall suck at everything period

TURNS IT BACK ON


LIMIT


u drop'N tight shit? only if u put ya 'ass' 2 'pinchers'//
the way i 'drop Canons' u'd think i smashed my 'PRINTER'//

divisble lines u test'N me? u failed even with quizzical rhymes//
only time this DICK-head kums hard is at 'physical times'//

u'll show grudges when i throw punches like i 'swing pipes' got u 'duck'N bars'//
body shots 2 TORE-SOULS (Torso's) put more 'holes' in u like u wuz up 2 'par'//


Intelligence is wat u need to comp-re-hend u lack of sub-stance
Keep frontin, on your face ill stomp-knees-bent, u sub-the-stance //

Wat u kno about box-in, im a southpaw, style about one in a milion
Slap, ur jaws locked-in, its about the law, a bout for law, a mission //

Ur reputation's unknown like a mercenary, nobody notice ur battles
Under expectation uve thrown ur rivalry, on canoe, were's ur paddles//

U's a style-free emcee, rhyme's watery, verses ignorant and empty
Lost in wild-trees, deep seas, ur lines robery, cursed immigrant story //

Thought u knew everyting about-me u kno -nuffin- im like a hide-out
When the sun goes down you allow-me to put u in a -cuffin- lights-out//

I see u steppin-back on me like i was a -menace- to your whole-crew
See me reppin-stash upon my city its my -purpice- i blew-holes in you //

U aint never seen of your life-an emcee spittin a hot -delivery- like dis
Dis entire verse is flawless might-end ur intentions : -entirely- fight clic //

Words hold weight, when they hit 'Face you might see tears-in-his-eye
The diction-I-speak is hella-obese...I just might give the Atkins diet a try //

I throw a quick-spit of slick-wit, you split quick like a Michael-Vick scramble... I'll slap you with a bag of bad Angel dust, like I put Loki-in-the-grinder
And with hope, that'll get you off-the-dope...and life will be beautiful
then we can be friends, instead of me having to verbally neuder-you

Lesson learned? You got burned, so just turn and walk away...
Make you do an *about-Face, like you penned your auto-biography

Voted For: Street poet

Wow, street had way better punches and PERSONALS like no other... his metas were also off da hook of course. He had more lines, so if a few didnt sound good, he made up for it later.
limited come on, ur better than that. ur stuff looked average compared to street. it was good though, i kinda liked some of it.

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Voted For: Street poet

THIS FAR FROM A BATTLE HERE THIS WAS A STOMPING...

it was unlimited so it was fair the bar difference...

but poet that verse was tight the personal was a low blow *nice* the flow was tight and the diss was on-point as-well as u'r punches... nice verse 8/10

limited edition u'r verse was tight as-well but the fact is u'r punches was hot... but if u had a few more hot one's u most def would of had this... ya flow was good u'r creativeness was above average tight battle but i thought poet had more hits that sorda hit slightly better dag tight battle fellas

much props on both battler cuz limited ya verse was tight...
poet the same for u...

next time have a set limit on bars N limited most likely would of won thou....

can ya drop honest vote in my battle....

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=150251

Yo Uppin Lets Get Some Votes ~! Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz Lets Goooooooooooo

Voted For: Limited Edition

street poet<
yo u shouldnt be in the ring with me like the canadians dont belong in the u.s.a//
U aint coming victorious in this battle like canada ur only coming in 2nd place// (2nd largest country)
^^weak punch,make no-sense even with ya explanation<lame
put 14 slugs in ur chest and pysicaly remove the balistics
leave ur body transfixed on a crusafix and give your rhymes the deep six| i heard the canadians gives away free health service//
^^omfg<stupid,straight dumb,wtf
GOING BACK TO HISTORY WIT DIS LOL


Like my nation i go thru trialz and tribulationz
You been around, suckin cock in various circulation
At least my fuckin nation wasn't founded as a british shit hole
Ugly speck of world's geography, disfiguring like a mole//
^^this was all filler??.why...??

The only thing LIMIT cooked was whale blubber last night
That’s all that you got up in Canada aint that right
Take your canoe to the store and buy some fuckin game
Before your paraplegic with no uses for a cane
I cut you down like McDonalds did the amazon
Like a playsation with no power button, my game is always on
new shit I shall brig it right now.
I’ll cut the beef like trade laws concerning mad cow.
I rip it through you fuck the whole Canadian Shield
This ain’t no 1812 you get no help on this battlefield//
^^not good at all..!! weak as hell..!
TURN OFF DA BEAT:

Wait i'll say somthin dats postive yall betta dan basketball:no
soccer:no swimming:no running:hmmmmm no to bony and frail// yall suck at everything period
^^wtf...this was weak...
TURNS IT BACK ON


LIMIT


u drop'N tight shit? only if u put ya 'ass' 2 'pinchers'//
the way i 'drop Canons' u'd think i smashed my 'PRINTER'//
^^ok
divisble lines u test'N me? u failed even with quizzical rhymes//
only time this DICK-head kums hard is at 'physical times'//
^^eh,not feelin it
u'll show grudges when i throw punches like i 'swing pipes' got u 'duck'N bars'//
body shots 2 TORE-SOULS (Torso's) put more 'holes' in u like u wuz up 2 'par'//
^^nope

Intelligence is wat u need to comp-re-hend u lack of sub-stance
Keep frontin, on your face ill stomp-knees-bent, u sub-the-stance //
^^nope
Wat u kno about box-in, im a southpaw, style about one in a milion
Slap, ur jaws locked-in, its about the law, a bout for law, a mission //
^^terrible,really..!
Ur reputation's unknown like a mercenary, nobody notice ur battles
Under expectation uve thrown ur rivalry, on canoe, were's ur paddles//
^^??.weres the diss?
U's a style-free emcee, rhyme's watery, verses ignorant and empty
Lost in wild-trees, deep seas, ur lines robery, cursed immigrant story //
^^ok
Thought u knew everyting about-me u kno -nuffin- im like a hide-out
When the sun goes down you allow-me to put u in a -cuffin- lights-out//
^^filler,fuck
I see u steppin-back on me like i was a -menace- to your whole-crew
See me reppin-stash upon my city its my -purpice- i blew-holes in you //
^^nope
U aint never seen of your life-an emcee spittin a hot -delivery- like dis
Dis entire verse is flawless might-end ur intentions : -entirely- fight clic //
^^wtf...dumb
Words hold weight, when they hit 'Face you might see tears-in-his-eye
The diction-I-speak is hella-obese...I just might give the Atkins diet a try //
^^no punch
I throw a quick-spit of slick-wit, you split quick like a Michael-Vick scramble... I'll slap you with a bag of bad Angel dust, like I put Loki-in-the-grinder
And with hope, that'll get you off-the-dope...and life will be beautiful
then we can be friends, instead of me having to verbally neuder-you
^^flow sucked
Lesson learned? You got burned, so just turn and walk away...
Make you do an *about-Face, like you penned your auto-biography
^^weak closer
aight nothin in your entire verse was good at all ,seriously,your punches were awful n directed at ya punches werent personal,NOTHIN PERSONAL..did'nt enjoy your verse 1 bit ,n if you got votes there d/r or peeps that don't kno how to vote..why was your first part fucked for structure then ya last 10 lines were fine??...
kid if your gonna bite/bite something good,lame ass verse..
you a straight herb.......nuff said




Dude merks herbs well you bout to begin a backwards fall...
You couldn't spit hot shit if you was stuck in a blazin bathroom stall
^^decent opener
You should be hated on this site only friend is ya rapperz pet...
Only decent punch you could pull on me is callin me a "bastard vet"
^^was'nt direct but still decent
You don't have this mastered yet...punch ya now ya punished...
Yeah you's a Street Poet...you broke 'cause you can't get published
^^excellent personal<betta than his whole verse
Street? You less gangsta than the fag the lead hit...
Returnin blood to the pavement...won't get you steet credit
^^another nice personal
Yeah I said it...you crewless well I guess poets are alone...
Why you rap battlin'? I haven't seen you write a single poem?
^^another personal..
Give it up, kid...you don't belong on the stage here...
He's on a rap site, but Eminem's not his idol...

...it's William Shakespeare...
^^another personal,i mean it don't get much more personal than that there.....overall limited edition gets my vote for good personal punches n street poet don't cause his verse was'nt hard hitting nor was it personal<prolly was'nt written by you either...

return the favour<or i won't vote on ya battles no more..!
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=149439

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Oh, and by the way he pre-wrote. Look at the times he checked in and the time he dropped his verse. No way he typed that in four minutes.

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