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Old 09-22-04, 06:33 PM   #1
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InFiniTe-LyriCs vs ~{ExClusive}~

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6 - 12 Lines
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No Recycling
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Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 09-22-04 at 07:03 PM

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Old 09-22-04, 06:34 PM   #2
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Old 09-22-04, 06:55 PM   #3
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Old 09-22-04, 07:02 PM   #4
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Infinite-lyrics
Spinin you like yer on a “Mari-go-round” is what my vocab dos to everyone(1)
Even you agreed I could tell by the look on yer face, you were overdone/
I hope you have fun, ill drop you off like you were “trash from a garbage-can”/
To bad it already happened, you got twisted up and now you look like yer from “Japan”(2)
Fuckin you up with my lyrics is done with ease, but I still give you a little admiration/
You were changed cuz you reminded everyone like you were from a different corporation/
You think yer infinite but you got nothing but shit in yer lyrics, you need elevation/
Ill twist you up make you drop like “the twin towers”, now all you get hit back with is rejection(3)
I kno yer mouth feels numb cuz my punches felt like they hit you in the mouth/
Sry but I cant say to much cuz I played you like I was “earl Boykin’s” but he aint from the south(4)

(1)…..how marigo rounds spin around that’s what my lyrics do get it?
(2)…..A. I would drop you off basically like yer rhymes suck there trash like crappy? Get it B. and my rhymes mixed yer brain and face, now you look Japanese. Get it?
(3)…..I made you fall like the twin towers, how the afganies made the towers fall get it?
(4)……earl boykins from the Denver nuggets, basketball, hes small and fast so I played you get it?
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Old 09-22-04, 07:06 PM   #5
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k waitin for you now
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Old 09-22-04, 07:11 PM   #6
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OPENER
Battle’s irrelevant…
Wat’s tha point, u can’t even throw a beat hard…
You intelligent???
Kollide minds with genius and still come out a retard…
MIDDLE
But check this as I fuckin lyrically wreck this…
Project shit…leavin u set up for my next diss…
Get ure neck split, fuck dat…I’ll make ure head split…
Makin u drop a dead spit, watch as I fuckin shred shit…
Invite this site to the fight, see how I get abusive…
Arouse the crowd and make ure loss Exclusive
CLOSER
Take it from me if this is all ure ass be bringin
U gonna lose, cuz its straight wack that u be slingin…
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Old 09-22-04, 07:18 PM   #7
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nice battle man uppin this is how i think its ging to be
punches: im not sure
vocab: Ex
wordplay: ex
and theres more but who cares thats the basics lol
uppin
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Old 09-22-04, 07:22 PM   #8
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aight drop........................
few pointers.......
shorten ure lines playa...
and...
u shudn't explain ure punches, cuz if they need explainin cuz ppl don't get them then they ain't that gud to begin with

UPPIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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Old 09-22-04, 07:27 PM   #9
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ok ya i got my lines shorter next time i kno that w/e tho its up to the people that vote
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Old 09-22-04, 08:53 PM   #10
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This was feedback posted for ~{ExClusive}~

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aight i think that exclusive took this but i cant voet, i think his vote was dope, structure was on point, his punches were sik and over all just fo shit all yua who aint in mindz collide drop an honest vote in my battles (check teh sig)
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Old 09-22-04, 08:54 PM   #11
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Quote:
Originally Posted by InFiniTe-LyriCs
aight drop........................
few pointers.......
shorten ure lines playa...
and...
u shudn't explain ure punches, cuz if they need explainin cuz ppl don't get them then they ain't that gud to begin with

UPPIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

and thats the point when u do more complicated lines, means u got some skill if u can put one on top another, gives u sumthin
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Old 09-22-04, 09:16 PM   #12
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aight thanks uppin for votes!
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Old 09-23-04, 06:50 AM   #13
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yea well the one person who has posted on here is bound to give the battle to Exclusive cuz they in the same crew..............................

but honestly, i'll let the votes decide, i mite win, i mite lose,
makes no difference to me cuz i am a little rusty after all........................

UPPIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!2
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Old 09-23-04, 09:21 AM   #14
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Voted For: InFiniTe-LyriCs

iight this shyt was pretty close both droped a hard verse.....

Exclusive ur punches just didnt hit hard enough and ur lines were to long......u need to work on structure and wordplay.....

Infinite.... that shyt was hot...short but hard hitten....everypunch had a good insult and was the kinda shyt that makes the crowd laugh at the other kid in live battles....u def crushed this battle...that was hot keep doin ur thing...

iight no hate to either it was a fair vote...can some1 return a favor on the links in my sig.....exclusive if u wanna battle jus let me kno......
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Old 09-23-04, 10:16 AM   #15
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Voted For: InFiniTe-LyriCs

Vote infinite lyrics,

much better wordplay structure and over all a dope verse

Battle’s irrelevant…
Wat’s tha point, u can’t even throw a beat hard…
You intelligent???
Kollide minds with genius and still come out a retard…
That was fuckin dope too

Invite this site to the fight, see how I get abusive…
Arouse the crowd and make ure loss Exclusive…
that was a dope ass personal and play on his name



You think yer infinite but you got nothing but shit in yer lyrics, you need elevation/
Ill twist you up make you drop like “the twin towers”, now all you get hit back with is rejection(3)
the weay these wnet doesnt ryme

No hate exclusive but this verse wasnt that good, i think you could have done better,,,,,

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