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No Crew Votes
No Recycling
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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-05-04 at 12:48 PM

Must drop verse in 75 minutes after check in.

genocide has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-04-04 04:25 PM.

It's no Mystery, murdera's known to kill,
and you are next,
breaking through your wack lines,
cause you cant guardtex.
Tear off your arms and legs,
let the rest of your body stay.
Just so it can be proof that your torso . . . badly these days
You’ll be thinking I made electronics,
I drop computerized lines
genocide is quick to Logitech . . .right in the groove of your spine Kid was racing for fame,
now he’s in the pit stop,
to re-tire In this battle I’m born to kill,
and dont ask, Im not your ghostwriter.
Being my tag team partner is the only time you compared with me And Payback's a bitch. . .that you'll prolly meet in Ocean City.
You have no life, so stay on rb and do your lame job.
It seems odd, You have no friends,
your whole net life was just a fad.
Even carson jets. . . . . .his last text message to your ass.
Fuck this verse, I will personally whip you.
Holdin flowers is the only time GKillaz carry pistils

done in and out quick

GKillaz has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-04-04 04:39 PM.

genocide run and hide your punches have been denied...
Im known worldwide.. like suicide your death I'll provide..
No one cried the day you died thats the day you tried...
This white boy down belong here get some sun n go outside...
Your from hell?.. well keep burnin.. dont mess wit me...
Im not 50 I cause more then gun threatz.. you cant hit me...
Your like Whitney the way you say your on top of things...
call me KillAh BeeZ the way my punches tears and stings...
Im done wit this im finishin in it off not wastin no more time...
Theres not way I'll beat this hardcore white boys i'll rhyme...
HAHAHA.. ya.. RIGHT! :P

down is supposed to be dont 4th line... lets get some votes

Voted For: GKillaz

v/gkillaz

basically just an all round beta verse here....much beta flow, structure and punches....new kid out of his league here...

hit this up for me wiv an honest vote...thanx...do it plz
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Voted For: GKillaz

genocide run and hide your punches have been denied...
Im known worldwide.. like suicide your death I'll provide..
No one cried the day you died thats the day you tried...
This white boy down belong here get some sun n go outside...
Your from hell?.. well keep burnin.. dont mess wit me...
Im not 50 I cause more then gun threatz.. you cant hit me...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE GOOD SHIT HERE GOOD PUNCH AND PERSONALS (DISS HIM CAUSE HE WHITE)


Your like Whitney the way you say your on top of things...
call me KillAh BeeZ the way my punches tears and stings...
Im done wit this im finishin in it off not wastin no more time...
Theres not way I'll beat this hardcore white boys i'll rhyme...
HAHAHA.. ya.. RIGHT! :P
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT MAYNE GOOD VERSE NICE CLOSA NICE PUNCHES AND FLOW


G-HAD GOOD PUNCHES AND FLOW & PERSONALS


It's no Mystery, murdera's known to kill,
and you are next,
breaking through your wack lines,
cause you cant guardtex.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ FIX DA STRUTURE YO FLOW IS OFF BUT W/E GOOD PUNCH


Tear off your arms and legs,
let the rest of your body stay.
Just so it can be proof that your torso . . . badly these days
You’ll be thinking I made electronics,
I drop computerized lines
genocide is quick to Logitech . . .right in the groove of your spine Kid was racing for fame,
^^^^^^^^^^^^ ERRRRRR DATS NOT AN GOOD PUNCH NOR AN GOOD FLOW FIX DA STRUTURE ITS MISSING IT UP


now he’s in the pit stop,
to re-tire In this battle I’m born to kill,
and dont ask, Im not your ghostwriter.
Being my tag team partner is the only time you compared with me And Payback's a bitch. . .that you'll prolly meet in Ocean City.
You have no life, so stay on rb and do your lame job.
It seems odd, You have no friends,
your whole net life was just a fad.
Even carson jets. . . . . .his last text message to your ass.
Fuck this verse, I will personally whip you.
Holdin flowers is the only time GKillaz carry pistils
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT MAYNE U NEED TO WORK ON DEM STRUTURE IT MISSED UP DA FLOW AND YO PUNCHES WASNT HITTIN

MY VOTE GOES TO G-CAUSE HE HAD HARDER PUNCHES


YO WORK ON YO STRUTURE AND WORK ON DEM PUNCHES U'LL GET BETTA

~PEACE~ RETURN AN FAV

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IAM BACK FUCKAH'Z HELL~! NEVA LOOKED SO GOOD

uppin this X1 for this battle peeps

Voted For: genocide

genocide got this............
more complex verse, better vocab an wordplay
few decent punches from both of yall..
genocides personals hit hard
i wasnt really feelin the carson jet line, an the dots kinda ruined it, try not to use dots in ya verse...
but on the whole ya verse was more complex...

return the fave against wish in my sig
p e a c e

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