Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-18-04 at 12:31 PM

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genocide has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-15-04 12:36 PM.

Adrenaline has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-15-04 12:48 PM.

...Exposin the facts on this wack trash..wit EASE i'm takin the win
Cuz Adrenaline is just a fake fuck...like hand jobs from the Olsen Twins...
...Crush ur pride in u hidin behind the board...afraid to attempt rappin
...Crush ur pride in u hidin behind the board...afraid to attempt rappin
Compilating all of ur battles...wit dreams of ur text album goin platinum..
...Not happenin..and after my first bar...RV seen your true side man
Who woulda knew that u polish more sticks than the White Lotus Clan?..


now I'm doper than this geek.. this will just prove it true dude
That I can use your style, way fucking better than you do...
And sure I'm getting better, but I'm not really trying to boast...
But you spaced out the title...and still we're not even that close!
And Adrenaline use to be a stupid guy, how liked guys.
Now he's gained knowledge and realized.
that he wasnt that ill.

ayo I spit the artificial intelligence/wit pure evidence/
ur only superficial so u spit peer neglegence/
am a thug legend/that spits wit mugged weapons/
ill puncture ur brains IQ wit thugged lessons/
ill rip u apart like stonewalls/wit my incredible hulk claws/
I spit inedible rhymes that burn jaws/

gotta go...
out.

ayo fuck I swear I was creaming u but I had to go to class and I was trying to spit something off my head... but it was going to be longer
so just judge...Im mad though!!

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yo uppin this shit for some real votes niccas

Voted For: genocide

Adrenaline had nothing special at all, like it was a rushed verse or some shit, and genocide somes back with 2 verses, why did u repeat a line lol. Genocide had a few better punches, but neither had anything creative, just focused on flow.

vote - genocide

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Bored so im Rapping on the internet Just for Spite....
Rhyme dictionary rappers please battle me with your writerns

uppin and thanks for the votes yall

uppin this shit boys and girls now lets get some votes on this shit yall

Voted For: Adrenaline

Emcee:genocide

Verse:
...Exposin the facts on this wack trash..wit EASE i'm takin the win
Cuz Adrenaline is just a fake fuck...like hand jobs from the Olsen Twins...
...Crush ur pride in u hidin behind the board...afraid to attempt rappin
...Crush ur pride in u hidin behind the board...afraid to attempt rappin
Compilating all of ur battles...wit dreams of ur text album goin platinum..
...Not happenin..and after my first bar...RV seen your true side man
Who woulda knew that u polish more sticks than the White Lotus Clan?..


now I'm doper than this geek.. this will just prove it true dude
That I can use your style, way fucking better than you do...
And sure I'm getting better, but I'm not really trying to boast...
But you spaced out the title...and still we're not even that close!
And Adrenaline use to be a stupid guy, how liked guys.
Now he's gained knowledge and realized.
that he wasnt that ill.

Comments:i think you took this...one sided battle...the other guys verse was just not elevated...and i think that you bit this, im serious....look you copy and pasted twice look
"...Crush ur pride in u hidin behind the board...afraid to attempt rappin
...Crush ur pride in u hidin behind the board...afraid to attempt rappin"

Marks:
Wordplay - dont care
Metas - dont care
Vocabulary - dont care
Structure - dont care
Punches - dont care
Opener - dont care
Closer – dont care
Personals – dont care
Enjoyment – dont care
Creativity - dont care
Overall -dont care

Emcee:Adrenaline

Verse:
ayo I spit the artificial intelligence/wit pure evidence/
ur only superficial so u spit peer neglegence/
am a thug legend/that spits wit mugged weapons/
ill puncture ur brains IQ wit thugged lessons/
ill rip u apart like stonewalls/wit my incredible hulk claws/
I spit inedible rhymes that burn jaws/

Comments:i think you need to elevate,...go read some tutorials...i think they will help fill in your gaps...other wise i think that you lost...but since i think that guy bit im voting for you...

Marks:
Wordplay - dont care
Metas - dont care
Vocabulary - dont care
Structure - dont care
Punches - dont care
Opener - dont care
Closer – dont care
Personals – dont care
Enjoyment – dont care
Creativity - dont care
Overall -dont care


im putting these "dont cares" because im simply voting for adrenaline because i think genocide bit..

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

no hate...or anything like that i just dont want adrenaline losing to a bitten verse....or lines...plus ya structures in differant battles are often differant....very differant..


anyways no hate and return the favor with no hate.....pz

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ayo can we get this battle over with? I didn't like it anyways, it wasn't good, it really was one sided becuase I rushed but lets get these votes in...respect!!

and be sure to vote for ROUND 2 cuz I know I took that one...

WORD!!

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yo lets get some votes in this bitch yall