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Check in by: 10-15-04 at 08:14 PM

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BkBrawla has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-15-04 07:45 PM.

streetryda has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-15-04 07:45 PM.

you call yourself bkbrawla dont be sad when i maul~ya
left your mouth dropped cuz i dropped it hot, just stalled~ya
ripped out your vocal cords, deceased, now lets hear you speak
the only time you beat a man is when you got them under the sheets
sig'ed this bullet so they know who left you lying dead
papers out, caption bolded, [B]heartless murder[B/] is all they read

street u been defeated u aint spittin nothin cause i poured acid down yo throat i cracked ya speech puttin hot punches through yo ribcage no-one going to hear yo screech//(mournful cry)
you might spittin hot ish when i spit throwin cold hollow points punches rippin through yo torso
i keep throwin dese full blows ur going to win? iam going to lose? naw playa its been verso//

I'll smack ya bitch ass like my hippo but in an pimp way bitch u'll treat me with respect i'll have yo ass go to da fuckin store buy me an bouquet//
Iam like an clay when i spit fire i always come hard iam crazy mental my punches just dont pinch ya skin i'll go deep ur gettin scarred//

He thinks he'z an thug he rides on tha streets but da last time u was ridin on streets is when you playin hop-scotch on seasme streets// (o yes dey did an live show in maryland)
I'll discrete you body so u can have 2 personalities i got some tricks under my sleeve more surprsing when yo mom saw you jerkin yo meat now this battle is ova yo ass wouldnt be hotter dan mines if you was in an hot-seat//

iam out~!


~peace~

Main Entry: ver·so
Pronunciation: 'v&r-(")sO
Function: noun
Inflected Form(s): plural versos
Etymology: New Latin verso (folio) the page being turned


scarred-adjective: deeply affected

uppin man nice drop... but it was supposed to be heartless murder i messed up

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o and clay when u put an clay or pottery in an oven its heat that makes it HARD~!

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Voted For: BkBrawla

yo bk got this shit.

Street, you tried wit the multi's but yo flow was still a lil off. But nice try. You really didn't have many punches though. But nigka keep elevating you'll get there.

BK, your verse was pretty decent. First off, stop the "/" shit. That hsit herbish as fuck. lol But yo flow wasn't that bad. It was pretty nice. You also had some nice punches in there. Few hit hard. Not bad. keep elevating, fam. pc

props to both

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Voted For: streetryda

Streetryda’s Verse
you call yourself bkbrawla dont be sad when i maul~ya
left your mouth dropped cuz i dropped it hot, just stalled~ya
5
ripped out your vocal cords, deceased, now lets hear you speak
the only time you beat a man is when you got them under the sheets
6.5
sig'ed this bullet so they know who left you lying dead
papers out, caption bolded, heartless murder is all they read
6.5
18/30
Elevate more…work on yo punches
a little more tho…Peace

BkBrawla’s Verse
street u been defeated u aint spittin nothin cause i poured acid down yo throat i cracked ya speech puttin hot punches through yo ribcage no-one going to hear yo screech//
you might spittin hot ish when i spit throwin cold hollow points punches rippin through yo torso
i keep throwin dese full blows ur going to win? iam going to lose? naw playa its been verso//
I'll smack ya bitch ass like my hippo but in an pimp way bitch u'll treat me with respect i'll have yo ass go to da fuckin store buy me an bouquet//
Iam like an clay when i spit fire i always come hard iam crazy mental my punches just dont pinch ya skin i'll go deep ur gettin scarred//
He thinks he'z an thug he rides on tha streets but da last time u was ridin on streets is when you playin hop-scotch on seasme streets//
I'll discrete you body so u can have 2 personalities i got some tricks under my sleeve more surprsing when yo mom saw you jerkin yo meat now this battle is ova yo ass wouldnt be hotter dan mines if you was in an hot-seat//
15/30
No offense Bk but yo lines were too stretched…
tha punches were okay…but tha flow fell off(to me tho)…
keep workin on yo punches tho…but my vote goes to
STREETRYDA


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o like damn homie "ok" i'll try to shorten my lines a lil thanks for da honest vote uppin for more votes holla

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uppin on the votes pplz lets get more comin peace~1

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um yo anyway idk why all da votes been erased and shit but uppin for votes

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