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6-10 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-18-04 at 10:14 AM

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Snap-Shock has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-18-04 09:45 AM.

BIGPAPPA76 has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-18-04 09:48 AM.

This cat cant hack it when i drop my Ecstatic "Heat".....
The wigga can onli spit "Hot" when he beats his "Meat"....
Decapitatin' this herb while this nigga be hatin....
I posses a 5-star ratin' while this cat tries to be imitatin'....
Ill degrade this fool wit lyrical ease and simplicity....
Expose this faggot recklessly and critically....
Leave ya in a wit steel impregnated in ya frame........
My Verbs n' words be hittin wit verocity u cant tame...

hurry up and spit mine took like 5 min..mayne..stop flickin' thru ya pre written shit...

aight...look...

fuckin faggot imma 'SNAP' ya neck and leave ya in 'SHOCK'
this fuckin bitch aint nothin but a newb dick ryda.. get off my cock
this shit was ova before it started like fights in tysons prime
nigga i just bitch slapped you 1..2..3... fuckin times
your about to learn what it is to be owned by a vet of the game
ya lyrical death is commin near, ya gonna leave mangled and mamed
Lil bitch imma teach ya not to spout off at the mouth
you fucked wit a vet, now ya dead avoidin heavin goin way south


BIGPAPPA76

uppin this ma fuckin shit for votes... this lil nigga wants to talk shit, he got owned

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16 KOs 19 WINS

ha ha ...whatever u say dawg..jus keep thinkin' that...uppin for votes peeps..

Voted For: BIGPAPPA76

one sided battle


SnapShock: ya verse was just off, had a few punches but they weren't really hitting at all, structure was good, flow was mainly their, but everything else just vanished, u need to elevate alot, use more personals and harder punches, 2/10


BigPappa76: verse was better then snapshock's, good opener and personal, i liked the second line, tyson comments are kinda played, don't really hear them anymore so u could get away with it, after the bitch slapped line u started to fall off but ya held on to the win, use more personals and harder punches, i've seen better from u, 4.5/10


vote - BigPappa76


return the honest votes, battles are in my sig, no hate

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-NET RECORD-
17 wins-8 losses-2 dq's- 9 K.O'S

Voted For: Snap-Shock

BigPappa:
k you did elevate you have nice flow and stucture but you still need help wit punches swearing and shit aint punchlines lol...playing with words is punches try that maybe talk to L.I he knows alot for a 14 year old...but ya you had some nice lines but you need alot work on complex rhyme theames with vocabulary n shit...

Snap-Shock:
nice verse not bad for a newb nicly played on the punches they hit tight and you had aight stucture better then big pappas but yours was better lined out if you no what i mean...you had nice vocabulary liked your verse wasent half bad as i said before i think....but yes jsut a little work needed on your punches and wordplay and you will be dope...

VOTE: Snap-Shock

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are u stupid? no crew votes son............... this will be removed.

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16 KOs 19 WINS

Voted For: BIGPAPPA76

weak drops by both....

Snap......your verse was full of really played lines an wack punches...yoor flow was cool...strucutr ecould be tighter, no metas...or multies gotta elevate.

BIg....your flow was good structure same as his..but your punches were less played some were an some weren't an verse was more polished.....decent metas no multies neither also elevate.


Punches: big
Persoanls: big
Multies: tie
Flow: Snap
Structure: tie
Metas: big
Vote: big

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Uppin this battle lets get this closed bitches and dudes

ayo uppin this shit, drop an honest vote people..............

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16 KOs 19 WINS